Well, hopefully this won't come off as too rude but: Even for a random story with the sole intent of being mindless porn, that concept is really retarded :P (though, maybe that was intended) As, you got a female, with 0 reason to be female, as they at the times where "it counts", genderswaps into a guy, whips his dick around, then reverts back to female once it's done, having spawned either actual herms, or just guys with tits xP (depending how said "ovipositor" would work) So yeah, if aimed to be nonsensical, which would fit with the loony tunes reference, then yes, you certainly succeed xD As you certainly seem to follow every single porn trope as well in terms of gender roles :P With the "only males can rape" thing after Chrys becomes male. Have to say the "lore" for this one has been the most hilarious one for any inexplicable R63 story I've heard off so far, so cudos on that :3
And heh, allright :P That sorta makes sense, in a nonsensical way xP
6187273 Nope, I have a reason for everything my good sir/madam, allow me to give you some explanation about my thoughts on changeling reproduction. *Cof cof* As the title of this story implies changeling queens have mating habits somewhat similar to ants: flying away from their hive of birth to colonize other regions of the world, spreading the influence of their species. At that point since they are alone they need another species to cross-breed and create a new variant of changelings, one with the abilities of the queen and the other species. Because of this the queens look for the best specimens, and to ensure that they don't have restricted choices they have both male and female parts (hermaphrodites do exist in the animal kingdom). So the queen can either breed with males, and carry the new generation herself, or with females, like Chrysalis prefers. The changeling drones have ovipositors, so they can reproduce without diluting the original genetic makeup. Random mutations are observed, the beneficial ones are allowed to spread while the others are stopped from multiplying. The queen doesn't need to reproduce anymore so she sheds her more cumbersome extra baggage, i.e. her dong. But if she loses her hive it grows back, like species regenerate lost members in real life.
See? Perfectly reasonable explanation for this nuttier than nutella story. Yes it's a bonkers theory, but I really like it. Gonna expand on it with a fic about one of Chrysalis' original hive member integrating with pony society. With hilarious and kinky results.
6188667 A week is not that much if you consider that traveling around Equestria can't be that fast; they got no cars, their trains are made out of pastries and the whole line just stops whenever random animals decide to play chicken with the locomotive. I mean if sheep decided to stop on the tracks in our world I don't think any conductor would stop to ask them nicely to move. Maybe he'll give them a courtesy *toot toot* before splattering them. Also Chrysalis is cocky and was thinking with her balls; it's pretty hard to concentrate with a pair of boobs slapping you in the face.
In the Rainbow Rocks movie you see that the pendants are the source of the sirens' power. It's a red jewel; in the human world it's a on a collar, and in Equestria they are embedded into the siren's chest. They absorb negative emotions. You think I should explain the pendants better in the story?
6188706 Good point, Equestria isn't very efficient, but those are the ponies. Unlikely that the sirens would do any of that. As for explaining what they are. Well, maybe. Some of us didn't watch those movies.
6188181 You just reminded me of the fish species that can change genders when there are no males around. Which had me thinking even more about a futa-sirens story.
Anyway this was an unexpected turn of events, Adagio and Sonata are in for a big surprise next chapter. Oh are we getting an foursome next chapter? Really liking this so far.
6188772 Let's just say that the "pond of spring water" will be very full. I'm afraid the next chapter will take a little more time to come out though, maybe sunday but I can't promise it. And I can definitely say that there will be no siren futas in my story. Nooooo sir. I sit on a throne of lies, it's itchy and damp.
6188846 Well I hope you like it weird then, cause it's weird. Don't know if I could write something that's not fucked up in some way. Even the vanilla story I'm writing right now keeps deviating into pervert central. I just wanted to write about a changeling making sweet sweet love with ponies, I'm 2K words in and the story is already full of power play, gang bangs and even incest references! WTF!
6188861 And yet that's not the weirdest or most messed up thing I've read, heard about or came across while surfing the internet..... AAAHHAAHAHAH!!
....Sorry flashback which I'm once again suppressing.
And you're not alone in the whole trying to come up with story and it goes to pervert central. Pretty sure a lot of writers on site go through the same thing. Just let your mind wander and write whatever comes to mind before looking it over and editing it.
Hell how do you think I came up with so many story ideas? Check Clopfics forum to see. Of course most have the same basis but different story/plot lines.
Yay for shutting up Aria with cock! And I'm kinda torn on 'control' part and want them to be partners. Sexy, cum-filled partners bend on breeding changelings, and capturing Twilight Sparkle to 3-way her all night long.
6189196 By "them" you mean Aria and Chrysalis? If so I'm afraid with two personalities as strong as theirs, partnership will always imply at least some power struggle. I mean at this point of the story they are the ones closest to a true couple out of the three different possible pairs (pairs involving Chrysalis that is; uhuhuhuh)because they see each other as rivals of equal measure. Put two dominant dogs together and they'll try to assert their superiority. If they are equal they will always growl and nip at each other, testing their strength all the time, but they will be fierce allies. Possibly even friends. Friends that want to kill each-other. I'm only talking about dogs of course. As for everyone's favorite book horse, I already wrote something with Twilight in it that takes place in this same universe, and she's not a happy camper. I have plans for her
6189798 Thanks for the compliment, glad to see someone that actually thinks that this is fucked up and not completely normal *cof EmperorOfDarkness cof* And to answer your question, yes. But not in the way you could be thinking.
6189405 Holy crap, I haven't laughed out loud so hard in a long while, thanks for that!
6190756 Okay first off I do think that this is fucked up but COMPARED to other stories on this site and on others it's not as fucked up as they are. Most of which I skimmed read out of curiosity and instantly regretted it. Now I check out the comments/reviews before I take a look. But the nightmares, the images, they just wouldn't leave me ALONE!!
But all I'm saying is that we all think of some really weird shit every now and then, some more than others. Like you and me. Then there is the really fucked up shit that came out of the minds of the spawn of Satan and Hitler.
Ya know a way you could have kept the hot sex scenes but kept it somewhat tame was for Sonata to get lost in the cave, find a weak starving Chrysalis and after a brief chat they agree to help each other out. Chrysalis then tricks/seduces Sonata into doing it. Adagio and Aria follow suit after making an alliance. Or something like that.
I'm not saying you should change the story but I wonder how a story in which Sonata is courted by every female of MLP:FiM would go? Or one in which she turns futa and is driven to mate, able to seduce nearly every girl character.
6191182 Chrysalis having clean-not-rapey-kinda-consensual-mostly-lovey-sex with all three sirens? Now that's just silly! *cof* And the internet corrupts us all; you think you're going to have fun, you click a random link without taking precaution and BAM, right in the innocence. The stains never leave. Never. As for futa-Sonata (shit that has a nice ring to it) I'd guess it would be like Twilight's Misadventures but with a more bubbly and oblivious main character? Maybe she stays human when she comes back but grows a certain part of the male pony anatomy? Then scientific curiosity, rumor and horniness bring lots of ponies to her bed, without realizing that she's fertile? Could be called Sonata's Melodick Concerto. Hmmm... You want to do it?
6192366 Still think they ended up having rough sex even if it was consensual.
And yeah there are somethings you find on the internet that completely change or shatters your views of the world.
A basis for the plot of a futa Sonata could be that during the Battle of the Bands when she regained her sirens powers/form and had random thought of there being a lot of girls triggered her change and gained her male bits.
6192786 So she's still in the human world when she goes on a sex rampage? Can she still have a horse cock though? Horse cocks are fun. I remember an issue of the Crossed comics where a guy beats someone to death with a disembodied horse shlong, all the while yelling "HORSE COCK"; since then I can't help but find them hilarious.
6192799 She starts off in human world and then goes to Equestria at Sunset's urging (who wants Sonata all to herself) but shows up during mating season. And sure what the hell she can be hung like a horse. "Shudder" Worst way to die being beaten by a horse cock.
6192811 Oh, so she goes to Equestria because of a jealous girlfriend and arrives at the worst possible time, gotcha. Does she stay human, or does she transform into a pony, or even a siren when she goes through the portal?
6192860 So anthro? Don't know if I can write anthro very well, but I believe I'm going to give it a shot. After I finish this story though. Then I'll work on the sequel/spinoff and the Sonata story at the same time, alternating between them to keep the interest.
6188181 That has some sense to it, but of what it all seems to boil down to, is still that Chrysalis is more of a male in all regards xP At least going by how their "dong" seems to act exactly like any other oversized dick for any pony. Which, again, makes it rather pointless for Chrys to even bother identifying/coming off as a female, when, like you said: he prefers both female targets, and to be male himself.
I'm kinda mixed on that description, as it sounds like there's something there, but most of it just being used in order to make a guy with tits archetype character xP Like, as said: There's some interesting basis on it, but most of that is hurled out the window to support the "only males can rape" stereotype among other things. Otherwise it'd work as a reasonable theory yes :P But as said: From the sounds of it, you have Chrys act as if they're actually female, which breaks character in what they are doing and acting as :3 It's a bit of a plothole. As, you have a reason for x, but x has no reason to exist in the first place ;P
Oh, and think I forgot to ask last time: What anatomy do you go with? Aka: Human, porn or equine genitals on the characters?
6201977 Ooooh, that's what's been bothering you about the male/female parts? I shall clarify. In the story I explain that Chrysalis has both sets of genitals during her nuptial flights and she chooses to embrace the male role, but when it's over she's always reverted back to being only a mare. She then cares for all her drones like a mother and will actually play the role of a female, carrying their youngs, but only for her own species. That's something that I touch upon in chapter five so I won't go into to much details. So she's not a guy with tits, she's a girl with a dick.
About the "only males can rape" I didn't really think about that since in my mind Chrys is female, she considers herself a female even when she's packing heat. I mean yes you don't need a dick to rape someone, there are many other fics where a female takes advantage of another female or a male, but this story just happens to involve the futa fetish. And rape is not really the focus of the story: it's about power play, manipulation and impregnation. So no, I didn't write this to support the "only males can rape" agenda or whatever, that's a big assumption to make my friend. I am shocked and appalled by this accusation and will proceed to hug my cat for comfort.
As for anatomy they are 100% natural: equine bodies, equine mammaries, equine genitals.
It's weird how many stories do what happened here. Start off with either a dark or light tone, then about halfway through switch completely. This started out as a rape fic and then turned into a sitcom with sex. How does this kind of thing happen
"I mean, it's not like I'm saying that we want to escape or nothing,
You know that moment in Rainbow Rocks near the end right after Trixie traps the Rainbooms and Sonata says that stupid thing that's at the same time hilarious? Remember how Adagio damn near smacked her eyes out of the back of her head via facepalm? That was me when I read that.
Poor satyrs
You fucked with the satyrs?? You ASS!!!
I like this compromise. This is an okay compromise. This is fantastic, actually. Also, Aria has no fucking chill and I love it.
Holy Hate-Sex, Batman!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
6181006 I do. It adds a bit of an extra layer imo, or how to put it. You know? Kinda plays on the whole Changeling>Love part... even though sex and love can be utterly unrelated, but you know, I still find it more nifty than just having plain dirty language, it's less cliché :P
Well, hopefully this won't come off as too rude but: Even for a random story with the sole intent of being mindless porn, that concept is really retarded :P (though, maybe that was intended) As, you got a female, with 0 reason to be female, as they at the times where "it counts", genderswaps into a guy, whips his dick around, then reverts back to female once it's done, having spawned either actual herms, or just guys with tits xP (depending how said "ovipositor" would work) So yeah, if aimed to be nonsensical, which would fit with the loony tunes reference, then yes, you certainly succeed xD As you certainly seem to follow every single porn trope as well in terms of gender roles :P With the "only males can rape" thing after Chrys becomes male. Have to say the "lore" for this one has been the most hilarious one for any inexplicable R63 story I've heard off so far, so cudos on that :3
And heh, allright :P That sorta makes sense, in a nonsensical way xP
6187273 there is such a thing as a futa, which is a female with a dick, so no, she did not become male
6187273
Nope, I have a reason for everything my good sir/madam, allow me to give you some explanation about my thoughts on changeling reproduction.
*Cof cof*
As the title of this story implies changeling queens have mating habits somewhat similar to ants: flying away from their hive of birth to colonize other regions of the world, spreading the influence of their species. At that point since they are alone they need another species to cross-breed and create a new variant of changelings, one with the abilities of the queen and the other species. Because of this the queens look for the best specimens, and to ensure that they don't have restricted choices they have both male and female parts (hermaphrodites do exist in the animal kingdom). So the queen can either breed with males, and carry the new generation herself, or with females, like Chrysalis prefers. The changeling drones have ovipositors, so they can reproduce without diluting the original genetic makeup. Random mutations are observed, the beneficial ones are allowed to spread while the others are stopped from multiplying. The queen doesn't need to reproduce anymore so she sheds her more cumbersome extra baggage, i.e. her dong. But if she loses her hive it grows back, like species regenerate lost members in real life.
See? Perfectly reasonable explanation for this nuttier than nutella story. Yes it's a bonkers theory, but I really like it. Gonna expand on it with a fic about one of Chrysalis' original hive member integrating with pony society. With hilarious and kinky results.
She's not seriously giving them that much freedom is she? A lot could happen in a week.
Speaking of that, what are those pendants again? Why hasn't Chrysalis confiscated them?
6188667
A week is not that much if you consider that traveling around Equestria can't be that fast; they got no cars, their trains are made out of pastries and the whole line just stops whenever random animals decide to play chicken with the locomotive. I mean if sheep decided to stop on the tracks in our world I don't think any conductor would stop to ask them nicely to move. Maybe he'll give them a courtesy *toot toot* before splattering them. Also Chrysalis is cocky and was thinking with her balls; it's pretty hard to concentrate with a pair of boobs slapping you in the face.
In the Rainbow Rocks movie you see that the pendants are the source of the sirens' power. It's a red jewel; in the human world it's a on a collar, and in Equestria they are embedded into the siren's chest. They absorb negative emotions. You think I should explain the pendants better in the story?
6188706 Good point, Equestria isn't very efficient, but those are the ponies. Unlikely that the sirens would do any of that. As for explaining what they are. Well, maybe. Some of us didn't watch those movies.
6188714
Righto; will insert a more comprehensive explanation for future readers, thanks for the feedback!
6188181
You just reminded me of the fish species that can change genders when there are no males around. Which had me thinking even more about a futa-sirens story.
Anyway this was an unexpected turn of events, Adagio and Sonata are in for a big surprise next chapter. Oh are we getting an foursome next chapter? Really liking this so far.
6188772
Let's just say that the "pond of spring water" will be very full. I'm afraid the next chapter will take a little more time to come out though, maybe sunday but I can't promise it.
And I can definitely say that there will be no siren futas in my story. Nooooo sir. I sit on a throne of lies, it's itchy and damp.
6188820
Meh I can wait.
And as for futa-sirens bit well I've been wanting to read one for a while.
6188846
Well I hope you like it weird then, cause it's weird. Don't know if I could write something that's not fucked up in some way. Even the vanilla story I'm writing right now keeps deviating into pervert central. I just wanted to write about a changeling making sweet sweet love with ponies, I'm 2K words in and the story is already full of power play, gang bangs and even incest references! WTF!
6188861
And yet that's not the weirdest or most messed up thing I've read, heard about or came across while surfing the internet..... AAAHHAAHAHAH!!
....Sorry flashback which I'm once again suppressing.
And you're not alone in the whole trying to come up with story and it goes to pervert central. Pretty sure a lot of writers on site go through the same thing. Just let your mind wander and write whatever comes to mind before looking it over and editing it.
Hell how do you think I came up with so many story ideas? Check Clopfics forum to see. Of course most have the same basis but different story/plot lines.
Yay for shutting up Aria with cock! And I'm kinda torn on 'control' part and want them to be partners. Sexy, cum-filled partners bend on breeding changelings, and capturing Twilight Sparkle to 3-way her all night long.
6189196![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
By "them" you mean Aria and Chrysalis? If so I'm afraid with two personalities as strong as theirs, partnership will always imply at least some power struggle. I mean at this point of the story they are the ones closest to a true couple out of the three different possible pairs (pairs involving Chrysalis that is; uhuhuhuh) because they see each other as rivals of equal measure.
Put two dominant dogs together and they'll try to assert their superiority. If they are equal they will always growl and nip at each other, testing their strength all the time, but they will be fierce allies. Possibly even friends. Friends that want to kill each-other. I'm only talking about dogs of course.
As for everyone's favorite book horse, I already wrote something with Twilight in it that takes place in this same universe, and she's not a happy camper. I have plans for her
6189360
Huehuehue, it's because Aria is a bitch, I get it
6189366
I confess nothing! And Chrysalis knotted the shit out of her.
I really should stop using this annoying lil' itty bitty text. But I won't.
6189398
Fixed your itty bitty text , no need to thank me :3
This was some seriously fucked up piece of clop... but nevertheless, one that I have thoroughly enjoyed with every last particle of my perverted soul!![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
I can only think of one thing that would make this story better in my eyes... do you, perchance, plan to include some kinky birth scenes later on?![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
6189798
Thanks for the compliment, glad to see someone that actually thinks that this is fucked up and not completely normal *cof EmperorOfDarkness cof*
And to answer your question, yes. But not in the way you could be thinking.
6189405
Holy crap, I haven't laughed out loud so hard in a long while, thanks for that!
6190756
![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
Okay first off I do think that this is fucked up but COMPARED to other stories on this site and on others it's not as fucked up as they are. Most of which I skimmed read out of curiosity and instantly regretted it. Now I check out the comments/reviews before I take a look. But the nightmares, the images, they just wouldn't leave me ALONE!!
But all I'm saying is that we all think of some really weird shit every now and then, some more than others. Like you and me. Then there is the really fucked up shit that came out of the minds of the spawn of Satan and Hitler.
Ya know a way you could have kept the hot sex scenes but kept it somewhat tame was for Sonata to get lost in the cave, find a weak starving Chrysalis and after a brief chat they agree to help each other out. Chrysalis then tricks/seduces Sonata into doing it. Adagio and Aria follow suit after making an alliance. Or something like that.
I'm not saying you should change the story but I wonder how a story in which Sonata is courted by every female of MLP:FiM would go? Or one in which she turns futa and is driven to mate, able to seduce nearly every girl character.
6191182
Chrysalis having clean-not-rapey-kinda-consensual-mostly-lovey-sex with all three sirens? Now that's just silly! *cof*
And the internet corrupts us all; you think you're going to have fun, you click a random link without taking precaution and BAM, right in the innocence. The stains never leave. Never.
As for futa-Sonata (shit that has a nice ring to it) I'd guess it would be like Twilight's Misadventures but with a more bubbly and oblivious main character? Maybe she stays human when she comes back but grows a certain part of the male pony anatomy? Then scientific curiosity, rumor and horniness bring lots of ponies to her bed, without realizing that she's fertile? Could be called Sonata's Melodick Concerto. Hmmm... You want to do it?
6192366
Still think they ended up having rough sex even if it was consensual.
And yeah there are somethings you find on the internet that completely change or shatters your views of the world.
A basis for the plot of a futa Sonata could be that during the Battle of the Bands when she regained her sirens powers/form and had random thought of there being a lot of girls triggered her change and gained her male bits.
6192786
So she's still in the human world when she goes on a sex rampage? Can she still have a horse cock though? Horse cocks are fun. I remember an issue of the Crossed comics where a guy beats someone to death with a disembodied horse shlong, all the while yelling "HORSE COCK"; since then I can't help but find them hilarious.
6192799
She starts off in human world and then goes to Equestria at Sunset's urging (who wants Sonata all to herself) but shows up during mating season. And sure what the hell she can be hung like a horse. "Shudder" Worst way to die being beaten by a horse cock.
6192811
Oh, so she goes to Equestria because of a jealous girlfriend and arrives at the worst possible time, gotcha.
Does she stay human, or does she transform into a pony, or even a siren when she goes through the portal?
6192841
Listen to your heart. My tells me that she should be some kind of hybrid or shift between forms.
6192860
So anthro? Don't know if I can write anthro very well, but I believe I'm going to give it a shot. After I finish this story though. Then I'll work on the sequel/spinoff and the Sonata story at the same time, alternating between them to keep the interest.
Looking forward to it.
Many faps were abused that day...
6198379
... and we will mourn all those faps, cherishing their memories for times immemorial.
For like a day or something.
6199484 most likely yes:D
6188181 That has some sense to it, but of what it all seems to boil down to, is still that Chrysalis is more of a male in all regards xP
At least going by how their "dong" seems to act exactly like any other oversized dick for any pony. Which, again, makes it rather pointless for Chrys to even bother identifying/coming off as a female, when, like you said: he prefers both female targets, and to be male himself.
I'm kinda mixed on that description, as it sounds like there's something there, but most of it just being used in order to make a guy with tits archetype character xP Like, as said: There's some interesting basis on it, but most of that is hurled out the window to support the "only males can rape" stereotype among other things. Otherwise it'd work as a reasonable theory yes :P But as said: From the sounds of it, you have Chrys act as if they're actually female, which breaks character in what they are doing and acting as :3 It's a bit of a plothole. As, you have a reason for x, but x has no reason to exist in the first place ;P
Oh, and think I forgot to ask last time: What anatomy do you go with? Aka: Human, porn or equine genitals on the characters?
6201977
Ooooh, that's what's been bothering you about the male/female parts? I shall clarify.
In the story I explain that Chrysalis has both sets of genitals during her nuptial flights and she chooses to embrace the male role, but when it's over she's always reverted back to being only a mare. She then cares for all her drones like a mother and will actually play the role of a female, carrying their youngs, but only for her own species. That's something that I touch upon in chapter five so I won't go into to much details. So she's not a guy with tits, she's a girl with a dick.
About the "only males can rape" I didn't really think about that since in my mind Chrys is female, she considers herself a female even when she's packing heat. I mean yes you don't need a dick to rape someone, there are many other fics where a female takes advantage of another female or a male, but this story just happens to involve the futa fetish. And rape is not really the focus of the story: it's about power play, manipulation and impregnation. So no, I didn't write this to support the "only males can rape" agenda or whatever, that's a big assumption to make my friend. I am shocked and appalled by this accusation and will proceed to hug my cat for comfort.
As for anatomy they are 100% natural: equine bodies, equine mammaries, equine genitals.
It's weird how many stories do what happened here. Start off with either a dark or light tone, then about halfway through switch completely. This started out as a rape fic and then turned into a sitcom with sex. How does this kind of thing happen![:rainbowhuh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowhuh.png)
That was hot. I think they're meant for each other.
Also, right in the changemakers!
You know that moment in Rainbow Rocks near the end right after Trixie traps the Rainbooms and Sonata says that stupid thing that's at the same time hilarious? Remember how Adagio damn near smacked her eyes out of the back of her head via facepalm? That was me when I read that.
You fucked with the satyrs?? You ASS!!!
I like this compromise. This is an okay compromise. This is fantastic, actually. Also, Aria has no fucking chill and I love it.
6331477 Magic