As interesting (and hot) as this has been, it's starting to get stale. The power dynamics currently between them have been established, they have an alliance to take Equestria, and common and personal goals for the future. But now the chapters are starting to feel like they're just saying 'screw exhaustion and refraction periods, more sex!' and are just one long string of orgies and one-upsmanship. I get that that this is mostly clop and little plot, but I kinda want to see them move on and start doing their evil plan instead of having another round of sex. Especially considering that Chrysalis also wants at Celestia and Twilight plus all the kinky things the sirens could do with their magic.
6219970 I agree, this is the last chapter of this story and I was getting kinda tired, I want to go to the next chapter in this universe. All is left is the epilogue released tomorrow (started small but got kinda huge) that takes place some time later. Then there already is a sequel that changes the focus in the works, will be done soon.
Sonata's post-delivery orgy party is most likely shaping up to be a very violent kind of affair But I'm sure Chryssi and Aria will reconcile with each other after a bout of frenzied, anger-fueled, messy bucking
6222080 Nah, that would be too easy. Catching Twilight is Chrysalis' goal, but she would be disappointed if she just got her as a present. You have to enjoy the hunt, makes eating your prey more satisfying. And Aria is like a flying tank, she can survive. For some time.
As much as I have enjoyed this story up to this point... I HATE the way sonata is becoming. It's nothing against your writing or your story, just personal preference, I just never liked that whole relationship of "this is the cock I'm obsessed with and nothing else will do".
“I’m thinking the see-through is not an esthetic choice,
I think you mean aesthetic?
“WHAT?!” Adagio screamed at the top of her voice, making SS Sonata capsize with a squeak.
Most of this story has been me saying "Poor Adagio."
Adagio slapped the offending organ out of the way, only for the length to swing back and hit her jaw.
While I still uttered what I have deemed this fic's catchphrase, the thought of Adagio being hit in the face with her sister's dick completely by accident was just freaking hilarious.
As interesting (and hot) as this has been, it's starting to get stale. The power dynamics currently between them have been established, they have an alliance to take Equestria, and common and personal goals for the future. But now the chapters are starting to feel like they're just saying 'screw exhaustion and refraction periods, more sex!' and are just one long string of orgies and one-upsmanship. I get that that this is mostly clop and little plot, but I kinda want to see them move on and start doing their evil plan instead of having another round of sex. Especially considering that Chrysalis also wants at Celestia and Twilight plus all the kinky things the sirens could do with their magic.
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I agree, this is the last chapter of this story and I was getting kinda tired, I want to go to the next chapter in this universe. All is left is the epilogue released tomorrow (started small but got kinda huge) that takes place some time later.
Then there already is a sequel that changes the focus in the works, will be done soon.
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Just put the pope on a boat and let him roam the oceans for a week or so.
Then ALL the water will be holy, ALL OF IT!
There are documented cases of women giving birth to fraternal twins in which each child has a different father. Just throwing that out there.
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We'll see what happens
Polish almost done, epilogue will be released later today, depending on when the sequel passes through moderation.
Sonata's post-delivery
orgyparty is most likely shaping up to be a very violent kind of affairBut I'm sure Chryssi and Aria will reconcile with each other after a bout of frenzied, anger-fueled, messy bucking
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Well you're half right. Not gonna say which half though!
Damn Aria fucked up. She better go and snag Twilight and present her for Chrysalis as a peace offering.
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Nah, that would be too easy. Catching Twilight is Chrysalis' goal, but she would be disappointed if she just got her as a present. You have to enjoy the hunt, makes eating your prey more satisfying.
And Aria is like a flying tank, she can survive. For some time.
Now... personally I am rooting more for chryssi to win in this impregnation nation but whatever floats your goat;) or hippocampi
Doomed. Doomed.
As much as I have enjoyed this story up to this point... I HATE the way sonata is becoming. It's nothing against your writing or your story, just personal preference, I just never liked that whole relationship of "this is the cock I'm obsessed with and nothing else will do".
Welp, this is gonna get violent. Dammit, Aria.
I think you mean aesthetic?
Most of this story has been me saying "Poor Adagio."
While I still uttered what I have deemed this fic's catchphrase, the thought of Adagio being hit in the face with her sister's dick completely by accident was just freaking hilarious.
DAMMIT ARIA YOU HAD ONE JOB!!
Well that was a huge clusterfuck