I don't like the part where Chysalis admitted to Spike that Twilight and others pretty much assaulted her, even when she told him that it was all her discretion and request. NOT. ONE. BIT. And even less when Chrysalis is pretty much pleading to Spike to not maim and/or harm the husbands of the Mane 6. Especially when Velvet told Chrysalis that Spike almost beat his own adopted father Night Light to death just because Night Light orignally objected to Chrysalis being's Spike's mate. I get that Chryssie made those actions as a kind of repararations for all that she did over a decade previous.
You are basically expecting me to be able to accept that Spike just adapts to this after a bombshell like that?? I know in a way that I can't, probably because even though I'm pushing 30 I still want payback of some sort. Probably also shows why I'm still pathetically single--if I can't let something like that go even when your significant other has stated that she and others have come to an understanding, I don't deserve to have a mate, because more than likely I would pretty much have assaulted those that did that.
I get that in the entire story it shows Queenie is truly reformed, and in hindsight all the reparations she did to the Mane 6 and related was more than enough to be on good terms once again ( and not just because of the fear of a angered dragon wanting to settle the score when his mate was harmed). I just wanted to let you know that I don't like that part at all--it just doesn't jibe with me.
6274440 It's your view on the matter and I respect it, I just wrote like that to mostly show how Chrysalis can influence Spike's actions almost as much as he has influenced hers. And yes I know I know the scene was a bit of cop out, but I honestly didn't want have to write a massive assortment of Spike being something of a douche at his own wedding, that seemed more out of character to me in regards to him than anything else.
YAY!!!
SEQUEL!!!
What about a bonus chapter?
6273715 Considering it.
6273999 Something about those two want to have a fantasy come true.
Guess I have to be the asshole...
I don't like the part where Chysalis admitted to Spike that Twilight and others pretty much assaulted her, even when she told him that it was all her discretion and request. NOT. ONE. BIT
. And even less when Chrysalis is pretty much pleading to Spike to not maim and/or harm the husbands of the Mane 6. Especially when Velvet told Chrysalis that Spike almost beat his own adopted father Night Light to death just because Night Light orignally objected to Chrysalis being's Spike's mate. I get that Chryssie made those actions as a kind of repararations for all that she did over a decade previous.
You are basically expecting me to be able to accept that Spike just adapts to this after a bombshell like that?? I know in a way that I can't, probably because even though I'm pushing 30 I still want payback of some sort. Probably also shows why I'm still pathetically single--if I can't let something like that go even when your significant other has stated that she and others have come to an understanding, I don't deserve to have a mate, because more than likely I would pretty much have assaulted those that did that.
I get that in the entire story it shows Queenie is truly reformed, and in hindsight all the reparations she did to the Mane 6 and related was more than enough to be on good terms once again ( and not just because of the fear of a angered dragon wanting to settle the score when his mate was harmed). I just wanted to let you know that I don't like that part at all--it just doesn't jibe with me.
6274440 It's your view on the matter and I respect it, I just wrote like that to mostly show how Chrysalis can influence Spike's actions almost as much as he has influenced hers. And yes I know I know the scene was a bit of cop out, but I honestly didn't want have to write a massive assortment of Spike being something of a douche at his own wedding, that seemed more out of character to me in regards to him than anything else.
I really liked what you did with this chapter and this story in general. I look forward to seeing what the sequel will contain and explain.
That was a nice finish. Sweet, and it was kinda funny to hear what Spike did. You don't threaten to harm his loved one without a limb being broken.
A nice final chapter to the story, and there is definitely sequel potential here.
I do believe that should be "in no immediate danger", though.
Wow, four balls, walking will be awkward. XD But Chryssie will be really happy.
That wad nice, though yeah, could've gone without all the abuse towards Chryssie as "reparations".
Cya
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