Damn, Chrysalis had a rough childhood. I can't wait for them to actually 'get it on'. I know it will be a long while until then. I love how Twilight said 'when' and not 'if' in her letter. I think the denizen of the whole Everfree Forest, Ponyville, and any other place nearby will hear when 'it' happens.

6117539 The next chapter is me delving a bit further into earlier years, so there will be a break in the sexual tension. It's more me trying to build up her character than anything else.

I couldn't help but chuckle at Chrysalis's daydreams XD

6117559 I don't mean. I like character and world building in stories.

They can't ignore it anymore and don't leave anything good out.

...wow...I...wow...I'm...is this because of me?

6118847 The main reason I didn't give him wings was because every fan art I've seen of an adult Spike he has wings, and wanted this adult Spike to be something that broke away from the pack.

6118354 Why would you think that?

Oh god stop the laughing hurts
Keep up the good work, this has been sexy and hilarious so far. (I lost it at Luna's letter)

~The Rift Walker

Nice, better than the first chapter, and their internal monologues were simply gold, especially Chryssie's.

Though her childhoods sucks, I hope she'll be halt with Spike. Though I imagine she might end up being the most powerful queen since she'll gain draconic features and, if everything goes right, will be powered by freely given love.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Man I felt so bad for chrysalis, even before Twilights letter came. Everypony deserves a better childhood than the she had.