While the sex scene was short, I say that it was a fine start in the art of sexual writing. I say that you should read some HEAVY sexual-oriented stories in order to get a better feel and dimension as how to write them. Best informative and kinky chapter to me so far, and I UTTERLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!

Another good chapter but all the dominatrix garbage has killed about 70% of my interest in this story.

I'm a little surprised at how accepting Twilight and Cadence were to Chrysalis and Spike's union. Even encouraging their intimacy. You do need a proof reader though.
BTW, in Twilight's letter, she said Rarity, Rainbow, and Pinkie were going there. How come it was Fluttershy instead of Rainbow?

Bout time they did it, it's a decent sex scene. Now to the questions of her reproduction: How many eggs is she growing in her wombs currently?

6125773 I'm sorry about that, I intended for it to be an amusing aspect to Chrysaliss's character, and a comedic point to Spike's sexual preferences.

It's not like the kinky couple rutting it in front of a crowd.

6127153 Yet, you have to remember what Chrysalis said about what is socially acceptable for changelings. Just because Chrysalis is taking on some of Spike's traits doesn't mean that she'll lose her own base traits.

6127721 The spotty flashbacks were intentional, as was her youngest memory being one of the last she recovered.

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Hmm, yeah I get, but still while I do appreciate what you're trying to do here it still feels inconsistent while reading it. Though can you address whether or not the six to nine year jump in age is either Cicada just cannot remember her children's age or if it's a typo?

Wow, they've must've been really pent up if they came so quickly.

The changes sound fine and good to see that Chryssie is stronger now. And I very her wings do much better in water now too.

I love domination and bdsm, so Chryssie's domineering streak is fun to read about.

Cya
Raziel-chan

Yep good chapter. But I really want a scene where Spike lets his more dominant Dragon aspects out. I mean it is in his nature to be more dominating. When he senses a female in heat. And while Spike is known repressing his more primal instincts. He has slipped into them. Besides it's something Chrysalis wants as well if her daydreams. Are anything to go by.