An interesting and very solid setup. I also get the feeling that Les Miserables wasn't picked just for its generally high quality as a play... well, we'll see where this goes, won't we?
Human setup, its okay, make it more interesting how you setup Twilight and the gang, like are they hero, is she just a nobody? Aniway I add that story to twixie groupe, please tell me if I am mistaken so I can remove it as soon as possible.
6088620 Equestria's still Equestria even if no one's equestrian. I've heard of stranger names for real world places; May as well keep to the spirit of the source material. Heh.
Jokes aside, I do find myself questioning the rather fidgety style. Not that it isn't very well done, but it give the impression that Trixie is somewhat fragmented, mind jumping from topic to topic like a hamster on meth. I don't know what kind of mental state you want Trixie to have, though I would hazard a guess at denialist, superiority-inferiority, and with extrememly bipolar self confidence. If so, this is excellent, though if that wasn't your goal, I'm very interested to see where you are going. Screw it, I'm interested anyway.
Hate is a strong word. But a strong word needs to be said when you're ignoring a stronger feeling.
The opposite of love is ignoring someone. The best couples hate each other, that doesn't stop them from loving each other,
the stagehand's resolve fizzled into nothing with every word he said after their eyes met.
The Great and Powerful Trixie has that effect.
"But, Trixie, the script's already written! If you had a problem with it--" "The idea had only come to me now," Trixie dismissed the director with a wave
This chick's difficult to work with.
My name is Trixie Lulamoon Esquire the First. Normally you hear of people not wanting to bore others with the details of their life. But in all honesty, your dull lives could only benefit from hearing the immaculate tale of yours truly.
Why am I thinking of John Joseco art right now?
I hate everything about her! How her hair's so flat that it captures moonlight in it like the stream's surface. How she holds herself up... always so modest and picturesque. The way her nose wrinkles around the nostrils when she has something to say that she thinks is so obvious. She... Disgusts me... I hate her. I hate her with all of my being.
Aww. That's sweet.
"...Trixie, it's three in the morning here..."
Damn it Trixie. This looks like it's going to be pretty good. I await the next chapter.
Ooh it's been a while since I've stumbled upon a good Twixie story. I definitely following this one!
Anyway great job with the first chapter, it's an interesting backstory for tis version of Trixie. While so far it's been mostly a kind of inner monologue for Trixie, there are still a lot of blind spots and whether or not her claims are totally true or embellished to a degree. I'd love to see when the Truth comes out and we get to see the whole picture.
I wouldn't be suprised if she didn't read her script fully till filming was well underway, and upon realizing that Javert declines and kills himself, demand that she play Javert in the first half, and Jean Vallejan in the second half.
Well, Trixie seems to be up to her normal shenanigans. Nice start. I get the feeling this is going to be quite enjoyable.
An interesting and very solid setup. I also get the feeling that Les Miserables wasn't picked just for its generally high quality as a play... well, we'll see where this goes, won't we?
Human setup, its okay, make it more interesting how you setup Twilight and the gang, like are they hero, is she just a nobody? Aniway I add that story to twixie groupe, please tell me if I am mistaken so I can remove it as soon as possible.
(even if i dont think i am)
"Equestira" Monthly?
Interesting start. Not very many humanized fics grab my attention, so I'm curious to see where this goes.
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Must be a typo, or a parody of Equestria.
6088620 Equestria's still Equestria even if no one's equestrian. I've heard of stranger names for real world places; May as well keep to the spirit of the source material. Heh.
Edit: oh! I see the problem now. Whoopsie!
i really like this so far and hope to see it be continued!
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I hate seeing typos in story descriptions, and this is one I'm interested in checking out later. :)
I must admit, I was expecting Trixie to hate Twilight a bit more, but judging by those last few paragraphs, I'd say they may be friends yet
6088816 Thank you. Sometimes you can't help missing a small detail amidst the flow of writing in the moment until it's too late. Oh well.
I believe you meant confirmation. This is the only thing that really jumped out at me. I look forward to the later chapters.
Esquire, huh. The great and powerful lawyer.
Trixie enjoys this. Bring me more. Now.
WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!
Jokes aside, I do find myself questioning the rather fidgety style. Not that it isn't very well done, but it give the impression that Trixie is somewhat fragmented, mind jumping from topic to topic like a hamster on meth. I don't know what kind of mental state you want Trixie to have, though I would hazard a guess at denialist, superiority-inferiority, and with extrememly bipolar self confidence. If so, this is excellent, though if that wasn't your goal, I'm very interested to see where you are going. Screw it, I'm interested anyway.
YOU STILL HAVEN"T UPDATED!
Welp, once again I hop aboard the Flinx bandwagon. Curious thought: is Twilight going to be a Princess in this, or is that not present in this AU?
6090329 In a way.
You mean "exude." "Exhume," means to dig up a corpse, which for me is a real mood killer in a clopfic.
6090363 luckily the clop hasn't started. But, note taken.
6090332 Interestingly cryptic answer.
I'm gonna keep following this for a bit, even though I despise Trixie. I'm curious. Very solid so far.
Well if it isnt my two favorite hate/love ponies. Looks like I've got some reading to do.
Curious to see where you take it. Its nice to read about successful Trixie.
The opposite of love is ignoring someone. The best couples hate each other, that doesn't stop them from loving each other,
The Great and Powerful Trixie has that effect.
This chick's difficult to work with.
Why am I thinking of John Joseco art right now?
Aww. That's sweet.
Damn it Trixie.
This looks like it's going to be pretty good. I await the next chapter.
Not often we see lawyer Trixie hope she gets into some outrageous courtroom hi-jinx.
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6089401 Not fans of a person adding fake titles onto their name, huh?
6092453 Generally, people don't know what it means. Figured I'd point it out. (IRL it is also (depending on title) illegal)
I like apples.
Someday Trixie will rule. Someday.
6094145 This conversation is over. Thank you for coming and commenting.
Pfffft...
By the way, was the name "Podunk" a Borderlands 2 reference?
6098085 No. It's just a word that means of bad quality.
Ooh it's been a while since I've stumbled upon a good Twixie story. I definitely following this one!
Anyway great job with the first chapter, it's an interesting backstory for tis version of Trixie. While so far it's been mostly a kind of inner monologue for Trixie, there are still a lot of blind spots and whether or not her claims are totally true or embellished to a degree. I'd love to see when the Truth comes out and we get to see the whole picture.
update soon... or you die D:
6102518 Yeah. What's wrong with this guy?
I don't think exhume is the word you were looking for there... Unless she's also doing some archeological work on the side. Exuded?
Interesting start. Especially if it's actually Twilight on the other end of that call. On to the next chapter to find out!
I wouldn't be suprised if she didn't read her script fully till filming was well underway, and upon realizing that Javert declines and kills himself, demand that she play Javert in the first half, and Jean Vallejan in the second half.
Well, this certainly has peaked my interest.