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Well, Trixie seems to be up to her normal shenanigans. Nice start. I get the feeling this is going to be quite enjoyable.
An interesting and very solid setup. I also get the feeling that Les Miserables wasn't picked just for its generally high quality as a play... well, we'll see where this goes, won't we?
Human setup, its okay, make it more interesting how you setup Twilight and the gang, like are they hero, is she just a nobody? Aniway I add that story to twixie groupe, please tell me if I am mistaken so I can remove it as soon as possible.
(even if i dont think i am)
"Equestira" Monthly?
Interesting start. Not very many humanized fics grab my attention, so I'm curious to see where this goes.
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Must be a typo, or a parody of Equestria.
6088620 Equestria's still Equestria even if no one's equestrian. I've heard of stranger names for real world places; May as well keep to the spirit of the source material. Heh.
Edit: oh! I see the problem now. Whoopsie!
i really like this so far and hope to see it be continued!
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I hate seeing typos in story descriptions, and this is one I'm interested in checking out later. :)
I must admit, I was expecting Trixie to hate Twilight a bit more, but judging by those last few paragraphs, I'd say they may be friends yet
6088816 Thank you. Sometimes you can't help missing a small detail amidst the flow of writing in the moment until it's too late. Oh well.
I believe you meant confirmation. This is the only thing that really jumped out at me. I look forward to the later chapters.
Esquire, huh. The great and powerful lawyer.
Trixie enjoys this. Bring me more. Now.
WHAT ARE YOU WAITING FOR!
Jokes aside, I do find myself questioning the rather fidgety style. Not that it isn't very well done, but it give the impression that Trixie is somewhat fragmented, mind jumping from topic to topic like a hamster on meth. I don't know what kind of mental state you want Trixie to have, though I would hazard a guess at denialist, superiority-inferiority, and with extrememly bipolar self confidence. If so, this is excellent, though if that wasn't your goal, I'm very interested to see where you are going. Screw it, I'm interested anyway.
YOU STILL HAVEN"T UPDATED!
Welp, once again I hop aboard the Flinx bandwagon. Curious thought: is Twilight going to be a Princess in this, or is that not present in this AU?
6090329 In a way.
You mean "exude." "Exhume," means to dig up a corpse, which for me is a real mood killer in a clopfic.
6090363 luckily the clop hasn't started. But, note taken.
6090332 Interestingly cryptic answer.
I'm gonna keep following this for a bit, even though I despise Trixie. I'm curious. Very solid so far.
Well if it isnt my two favorite hate/love ponies. Looks like I've got some reading to do.
Curious to see where you take it. Its nice to read about successful Trixie.
The opposite of love is ignoring someone. The best couples hate each other, that doesn't stop them from loving each other,
The Great and Powerful Trixie has that effect.
This chick's difficult to work with.
Why am I thinking of John Joseco art right now?
Aww. That's sweet.
Damn it Trixie.
This looks like it's going to be pretty good. I await the next chapter.
Not often we see lawyer Trixie hope she gets into some outrageous courtroom hi-jinx.
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6089401 Not fans of a person adding fake titles onto their name, huh?
6092453 Generally, people don't know what it means. Figured I'd point it out. (IRL it is also (depending on title) illegal)
I like apples.
Someday Trixie will rule. Someday.
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Pfffft...
By the way, was the name "Podunk" a Borderlands 2 reference?
6098085 No. It's just a word that means of bad quality.
Ooh it's been a while since I've stumbled upon a good Twixie story. I definitely following this one!
Anyway great job with the first chapter, it's an interesting backstory for tis version of Trixie. While so far it's been mostly a kind of inner monologue for Trixie, there are still a lot of blind spots and whether or not her claims are totally true or embellished to a degree. I'd love to see when the Truth comes out and we get to see the whole picture.
update soon... or you die D:
6102518 Yeah. What's wrong with this guy?
I have no idea what just happened.
What drag said.
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6174846 Reflecting.
Hm, so Twilight's a dentist? That's certainly a new one to me, darling!~
6175057 Actually, From the description of her hair and eyes, the dentist is probably Colgate
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Huh.
1:it was confusing as fuck
2:I was expecting Twilight and did not get her
3:The update took time, and didn't deliver
4:The dentist was a fucking jerk, dentist who work with children are not suppose to be jerk and call people bitch
Its still good, I was just really looking forward to the next chapter of this story, but it really didn't live up to my expectation (it may just be me though)
Still, like I said please do continue
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1. Tried something new that'll come into play later. If it didn't go well, oh well. Always next time.
2. She's in the next chapter for a switched perspective.
3. Yeah...
4. She's great with kids; not so much with Trixie.
But, hang tight, the next chapter will be out much sooner. This week or the next.
6176640 glad to know Twilight will appear next chapter, and like I said, its still good, it was just....not...the way I was thinking it was gonna be
6176716 It's just a different form of building. Making things a little different.
6176640 Hm, I think Colgate could have gone for something a bit better than:
It sounds very forced and out of place, especially since she works at a children's clinic. I'm quite sure that she would have been able to think up of something a bit more condescending than simply "bitch". With how creative this story is, I'm quite surprised that such a mundane insult was in it. Heck, considering that she does work in a children's clinic should give her quite the imagination to replace expletives with much more colorful and varied descriptors of how miraculously rotted Trixie's teeth were.
Also, shouldn't Colgate have her own set of x-rays from her Dentistry School days? Why does she even have to use ones from her patients?
But I do like the the style of the chapter, the quick flashbacks to Trixie's time at the dentist. It's an interesting way to describe her first meeting with Colgate, but I find that it lacks quite a few details and just glazed over their first meeting. We don't even see what happened between them after Trixie's procedure, which I'm quite sure would have been cute and funny.
Anyway, hope to see the next chapter soon.
6177293 I know. I was a bit tired running on the end there. But, I'll do a little rewrite.