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Darn it, Liz! This is why we can't have nice things!
With all this breeding going on, I have to wonder what your plans are. Is this story only to just say they're pregnant or is there going to be more involvement of the 2nd generation actually depicted rather than just alluded to?
Not sure what the issue with Liz and her group is, or if she is just the bearer of bad news. Could be either one, considering Liz is in charge of infiltration groups that would have intelligence on what the military is doing.
Liz might want a power play of her own; she is pretty independent.
Still, I'm pretty surprised at this time jump, I suppose you wanted to move the story along to get at something new happening?
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6091778 I mean I could have detailed Will's approach of each and every little town and gathering of people, but I didn't feel the story would be enhanced by it? Was I wrong?
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?... I think the time skip is warranted, but why did you respond to my comment yet not actually give a reply?
6091821 I am a mysterious pony, but it is related. We'll find out in the future if skipping ahead that hard is warranted, but I feel I won't do that in this story. This story's about Will, not Will's eventual foals.
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Not at all, it's just a rather jarring jump considering it was multiple chapters per day previously, then in the middle of this chapter "thus the week was spent". I guess it must be nice to actually be in charge of events instead of having events happen to Windy. Of course, a lot can happen over the course of a week, across the world, let alone the country.
I wonder about Windy's powers, she doesn't seem that much more powerful than Crystal, yet there is apparently an order of magnitude different there, I guess? Or Windy is not yet used to her powers (because Cindy and William aren't syncing their thoughts, I suppose).
6091832 Two areas Cindy has shown superior power is the ability to reach/find ponies, and the ability to manipulate the gift.
Will's right; even with his apprentice transmuters, this is still way too dependent on him. If Liz hadn't come, he may have soon reached the limit of what he could personally oversee. Well, we'll see what she wants. And does. If she sneaks some scarved changelings into the human communities, that could set pony-human relations back to square one.
well it was going good till Liz.
funny that is my wife's name and I feel the same way.
Harts Fire
awww yeah reproduction in the
misspony position for the purposes of procreation this is some sick shiz6091842
found one!
6122138 Tweaked.
We're back in Kansas, Toto!
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No flight yet for Windy (going with this when speaking collectively cause...I'm being lazy!)