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o.O what the hell?
Is this some weird fetish?
Abit too much.
Finally Vash gets some! This time before the end of the story! And without nearly killing any one!
OK, I'm happy for Vash and, as usual, I laughed at the mares hounding him due to their heat. Still don't know what to think of the nagafication of Morning. Nonetheless, it was a great chapter. BTW, nice detail about the tail sensitivity from Monster Musume.
6326496 It's a Thing, believe it or not.
... I am pleased
well. this was a thing. this was a thing that just happened... I'm not sure what it was, but I enjoyed it. I think.
Though I am curious do you plan to ever include clop scenes or will you continue to leave them out like in this chapter
6326818 I might. It all depends. For now I'll keep skipping before things get too sexual. At the moment I just don’t think I could write a clop scene I'd like for this story.
6326859 perfectly understandable although I will say don't shut yourself out like that I would recommend just trying to write a scene as a test and if you don't like it, well at least you tried.
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You noticed that too? Monster Musume was the first thing I thought of when I saw that Morning became a naga.
*sares blankly at his phone..* ......more please.
The rating change... Why. Just why. Another one I liked down the drain >_>
Monster musume, now celestia papi, luna centorea, crisalis arcne, shu ?, mero ?
teh naga pony is now best displaced.
6329182 Don't worry, the adventure part will be coming soon hopefully. I just have a few more things planned for this time period and then it'll be time for the mane six's time period.
As donkey kong once said,
That show. It needs to die
6329595 Sounds like somebody could use a banana slamma.
6329628 NoooooooooooooooooooOOOOOOOO!
Death by snu-snu. the end.
Ko hope this gets more excitement in adventure and love.
When DJ String or Game Junkie do a crossover you can say goodbye to the all safe mode and the seriousness
Just started reading this a couple of hours, rather liked it you had a good tone down for a displaced 'Vash'. Then this chapter happened, still a good story I'll definitely be back next chapter, but the weirdness that happened after Doxuna popped up kinda came out of nowhere and felt alttle to close to mindfuckery, with some forced shape shifting, and was there what amounts to chemical rape there too? Some hard core fetishy stuff there, and coming out of nowhere shook the tone you had going.
6373511 Yeah, that stuff can happen when you work with other people. I'm not saying that I hate this chapter because I don't. I had fun writing it with the two other authors. But it is vastly different than something I would write by myself. As for the next chapter, I've got a little over 3,000 words done so far and I think the tone matches what I did before this one. Here's hoping you continue to read and enjoy.
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Looking forward to the next chapter
Okay, I know these are VERY late, but still.
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Shhh, you know half of it. We can be VERY serious at times....
Just not with these stories.
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*totally didn't persuade that into the mix after watching Monster Masume a billion times*
That's just cruel, Luna!
A lot happened in this chapter. Morning turning into a snake pony takes some get used too, but it would probably fit her character.
Edit: Wait. More importantly, does the transformation give her a longer life span? That would be useful!
However, there was one thing that was bugging me. Luna and Celestia made it clear, that they don't see Vash as more than a friend, and then in the same chapter they suddenly 180? Personally the point where they were blind to see their feelings made me hope, that this would be an interesting aspect for the next chapters to work out, but these hopes seemed to be smashed all of a sudden.
On a sidenote, you have an high amount of crossovers, so high actually, that I kind of miss the story progress of your story. The crossovers are not bad, but like I said, they feel to me like filler episodes, and after some time, it is just getting old. Just my opinion.
6326859 Maybe you could do an Uncut version, in parallel to this so we would have a choice to see it or not?
6640291 I like snakes but giant snakes scare the shit out of me
WHAT iS MY LIFE?!?!?!?!
I am ofishaly dead inside:( :( :(
I can't live any more... Good bye world... 'Gunshot'
6854937 your not going to like this then
Death by snu snu!
Wait, how did Vash's package change?
Haha death by sexy snu snu XD!!!
I would understand how his junk changed. How and or when the hell did he become half plant??
Yup excellent song to listen to while reading
Or do you prefer the short video:
Well this has been a clusterfuck, Apparently in every way.
Someone's started her cycle methinks.
This chapter is just... wut? Like the sudden appearance of a Void Dweller appearing that's unrelated to the current crossover is just weird, kind of a random and sudden excuse to end the crossover and instead replacement with one with zero explanation of why it occurred. Also please, pleaaase don't tell me Morning is permanently changed into a naga-pony - no disliking, but kind of disturbs the flow of the story for me.
Second point, the main reason the didn't bed with Vash is because his equipment wasn't enough?! ARE YOU SERIOUS HERE! Also, when did Vash had a part of his body change without it being noticed, I pretty certain when a part of your body rapidly change in an instant is really noticeable unless your high or out-cold?