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You broke the italics yo
Especially Vash, that would be like canabalisem for him.
With what happened to Vash, I couldn't look in the mirror. And if I was in his place, I would just shot him in the head. Multiple times. And then, when his head was reduced to nothing, I would shove down his throat a frag grenade. After when he gave birth of course, I'm not evil. At least not enough to do so. That's all I wanted to say.
I got that title reference :^)
This story is nice but...I think this chapter kind of explains that how the story is getting really...boring. Like it's either Vash being treated as nothing more punching bag for literally everyone that it's just sad to see the main character be treated like that for the most part(even if he's completely fine with it), or honestly well written sex. It's one of those two things and I'd like the story to actually do more things then that. The amazon zebra stuff was interesting but things started going down hill as Jason just basically made it apparent too many times that 'even if this is friendly banter I can do anything and everything to you and I don't care'...again I like this story and it's nice but...it's getting boring to see the main character treated so poorly(even Vash wasn't treated like that if memory serves) and then whenever he actually grows a back bone everyone just tells him 'you're not allowed to have one' and then he just agrees with them and loses it.
I'm sorry for the rant about the story, I still like it don't get me wrong it's just...maybe try to make it a little less 'let's beat up Vash cause he won't do anything'
Oh, Vash... such an adorable foal! That kind of reaction from Poison Joak (rather fond of that spelling) is fatally cute - unlike mine, where I merely change from male to female... although that has its interesting bits, too.
Anywho, this chapter was hilariously awesome, and I'm looking forward to the next one. I can't wait to see the reactions of everyone back in Equestria!
Nice chapter, but I wouldn't mind Vash not being a butt monkey for a while.
7955831 It does seem like Compared to everyone else he seems a little underpowered and his only real power he cant use because it kills him. The love of his herd to me feels like the only thing going his way but others people involvement ...while enjoyable to us... just makes me feel as to why they haven't told him to get in the kitchen and make them a sandwich I mean I realllllly liked him being turned into a girl but he was a man not even a day earlier and because there comfortable with it he's supposed to be comfortable with it too its like come on they used him like a sleeve yah he enjoyed it in the end...lol... but it's sad when you gotta use sex as a type of currency to get things to go your way she should have returned STOLEN property and waited to see what they gave her as a reward Vash basically had to prostitute himself.....grrrrrrrrr... and Jason to me was more at fault there for the pregnancy i mean come on norse God levels of constitution versus Vashes constitution and like ...5?... voices in his head to tell him what a bad idea it was I know it takes two to tango but it feels like Jason lays all the blame on vash. Vash is basically a emotional door mat the way he's treated. I know he's playing the comedy relief kinda attitude from Vash with his antics but Vash in the anime when he got serious shit got done ... I can't respect this vash. it's like when I read a Alucard fimfiction but it's the abridged version ...ugh... good in small quantities but toxic if it's too much you need to portrait both of his sides. I like this story enough to give it a chance and see where it's going and I have high hopes for if you go into a darkrai saga in her world to help.
7961805 Thank you! At least someone figured it out. But that story(which I read through the entirety) can be quite a lot of bullshit but I read it, it was fun in the beginning, started going down hill, had some at least nice things in between but still had the same pitfalls if you do things to that extent.
7961805 Sorry to break it to ya, but that Zinnia plot isn't going anyway. The author of her story deleted it off the site and did a full reboot.
7955831 It'll get better once the zebra thing is over. Thunder and I work together often and when we get inspired we tend to just keep writing.
7961933 Ah alright then...hopefully it get's better cause I really like this story. I just hate seeing Vash being nothing but a door mat to literally everything and everyone. *shrugs* But oh well.
7961927 noooooooooooooooo why God why .. thanks for the heads up. Hymn..well ill just see where he takes things there's still a lot of different ways he could go with this and displaced to meet to season things up.
Not big on matriarchies, though I can't entirely hate a culture that would geld a peeping-tom.
Also, you might want to recheck the ending bits there, as much of it seems to be erroneously italicized.
7974371 I've been trying to get that fixed. I swear I've closed off the brackets for the italics correctly three times already.
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Then I might suggest deleting them all, and starting from scratch.
Hmm Have to wonder just how much Jason knows, god, I swear this guy uses just about everything. Shit from DBZ to Final Fansty. its like ok he's a Norris god but knows all this other stuff and god ben 10? eh.. I tried getting into that show when I was younger but I hated it..
Hmm just wonder how well he would fare with Beerus the Destroyer?
Not saying i don't like Jason other then a few things that sorta bug me, overall he seems like he has a good heart despite being an
asshole. xD