I have a feeling that this story is going to be wrapped up soon. It will be sad to see it go, but it is by far one of the best stories on this site. I eagerly wait for the next chapter. Have a nice day!
So Tamara is the mother of Celestia and Luna, Linda grew the Tree of Harmony, is Crazy Dave going to be Discord? With the way you put Linda into the story I think that you could probably do that and still somehow make it entirely possible without it being BS. Hell I wouldn't... Well, I would be surprised, but it would explain how Tamara got the book that started this chain of events. After all, Discord was the one who sent Tamara to the past, but Tamara herself hasn't ever traveled back in time under her own power on purpose...
Anyways I'm probably reading way too much into this, like I said in my last comment I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and have a nice day.
6963915 Maybe... six more chapter? Which compared to the rest of it already published is soon, yes.
After that, because I am a terrible person, will be yet another (even I'm rolling my eyes, here) Human In Equestria story. Or... sort of? Sort of not. Frankly, I've got several half-written stories with tens of thousands of words and no second opinions...
Everybody! Looking for a beta, here! I've got an HiE and a weird... crossover-type deal I'd like to put up that's... sort of but not quite an HiE? Must be nitpicky in the obsessive extreme and a complete dork. SWF seeks beta, here. Thank you!
Comment posted by megabyte97 deleted Feb 23rd, 2016
6964750 ...Jill? The coffee shop worker? The female coffee shop worker? Actually now that I think about it, coffee shops are pretty hectic late mornings, and Discord could always change his gender... So we might have three transgender individuals in one story. That's actually pretty interesting.
6964933Could have been more fleshed-out, yeah, but...
Frankly, this chapter was just a way of putting out all the 'extra' scenes in my head that wouldn't fit. I thought, 'This is really cool, but it doesn't fit!' or 'If only I hadn't already set the viewpoint as continuous and on Tamara, I could do this!', and thus was born this chapter.
Frankly, the grammar would be nice, but I used to have huge problems with ease-of-reading. Basically, does it sound nice, or does it read as easy as it should?
And though I'm ashamed to admit it, I tend to write stories in pieces. Before, after, midways... and always sort of avoid doing one of the three until I'm not sure what I want to do.
The twenty-ish unpublished stories on my account point to just that, really. So, sort of like a writing-buddy? I'd be willing to help out as a beta myself, of course.
Because really, 'beta' just means 'sneak previews', yeah?
That you manage to get a decent timeline-ish sort of narrative with what are supposed to be snippets is great!
I have to admit I tend to go with phrases that sound right as opposed to actually checking if they are grammatically correct , so probably not the person to beta then. XD
Mind, if any of those 20 ish unpublished stories of yours are anything like this and your other story with the reincarnating humans, then I'd probably read and enjoy those. You should totally publish them.
So...mind if I ask if when the next chapter might be up? And if Tamara will finally reunite with her girls next chapter?
I keep rereading And rereading and rereading. I'm in suspense here! I just want to see the reunion.
Also, where is Jill and Dan? If Linda was the tree...Discord did say that Tamara was familiar to him when they first met and he got blasted by her (not so) God Killer. So maybe crazy Dan?
I just realized... Will Tham'ra be able to understand anyone besides her children? She has been speaking ancient tongues for her entire time in Equestria. How much has the language changed?
I'm finally caught up. I stumbled across this story a while back, just started reading a few days ago and I've been shotgunning it since. It's made me laugh and cry and even surprised me in several pleasant ways. Darn, but I've really enjoyed this so far.
So the dimensional fold was a causality loop, and its echo of an echo of an echo of an echo- ad infinitum, forever repeating that time space disturbance to mutually meet and receive "Faust" into their world.
*sits up from chair, takes a deep breath* "...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...!" *Continues to scream to the sky in eternal love, heartbreak, and pain*
I have a feeling that this story is going to be wrapped up soon. It will be sad to see it go, but it is by far one of the best stories on this site. I eagerly wait for the next chapter. Have a nice day!
So Tamara is the mother of Celestia and Luna, Linda grew the Tree of Harmony, is Crazy Dave going to be Discord? With the way you put Linda into the story I think that you could probably do that and still somehow make it entirely possible without it being BS. Hell I wouldn't... Well, I would be surprised, but it would explain how Tamara got the book that started this chain of events. After all, Discord was the one who sent Tamara to the past, but Tamara herself hasn't ever traveled back in time under her own power on purpose...
Anyways I'm probably reading way too much into this, like I said in my last comment I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and have a nice day.
6963915 Maybe... six more chapter? Which compared to the rest of it already published is soon, yes.
After that, because I am a terrible person, will be yet another (even I'm rolling my eyes, here) Human In Equestria story. Or... sort of? Sort of not. Frankly, I've got several half-written stories with tens of thousands of words and no second opinions...
Everybody! Looking for a beta, here! I've got an HiE and a weird... crossover-type deal I'd like to put up that's... sort of but not quite an HiE? Must be nitpicky in the obsessive extreme and a complete dork. SWF seeks beta, here. Thank you!
This story.....this story....heh...is the best story......I've ever found.....
but like every story... it must end....
6964068 No comment! Which is to say, no comment except for this:
You're still forgetting Tamara's third human friend.
Am I providing clues? Am I being cryptic? Who knows!? (Except for me. I know.)
You'll see, either way, in a couple of chapters. Thanks for reading so far!
6964750
...Jill? The coffee shop worker? The female coffee shop worker? Actually now that I think about it, coffee shops are pretty hectic late mornings, and Discord could always change his gender... So we might have three transgender individuals in one story. That's actually pretty interesting.
NOOOOOO!!! I mean, Yes! Update! But how could you??! Where's the heartfelt, tearful reunion to gut my heart with ALL THE FEELS?!?!
Loved seeing the sisters' side of this. Feels like, I dunno, could have been more fleshed out?
What does a beta do exactly? I assume a bit of grammar and maybe spellcheck but is there anything else?
Pleas update faster this is one of the best stories i've ever read and I NEED MOAR
As usual, it was a great chapter, I can't wait to see more of this story.
And so the story comes in a full circle.
6964933 Could have been more fleshed-out, yeah, but...
Frankly, this chapter was just a way of putting out all the 'extra' scenes in my head that wouldn't fit. I thought, 'This is really cool, but it doesn't fit!' or 'If only I hadn't already set the viewpoint as continuous and on Tamara, I could do this!', and thus was born this chapter.
Frankly, the grammar would be nice, but I used to have huge problems with ease-of-reading. Basically, does it sound nice, or does it read as easy as it should?
And though I'm ashamed to admit it, I tend to write stories in pieces. Before, after, midways... and always sort of avoid doing one of the three until I'm not sure what I want to do.
The twenty-ish unpublished stories on my account point to just that, really. So, sort of like a writing-buddy? I'd be willing to help out as a beta myself, of course.
Because really, 'beta' just means 'sneak previews', yeah?
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That you manage to get a decent timeline-ish sort of narrative with what are supposed to be snippets is great!
I have to admit I tend to go with phrases that sound right as opposed to actually checking if they are grammatically correct , so probably not the person to beta then. XD
Mind, if any of those 20 ish unpublished stories of yours are anything like this and your other story with the reincarnating humans, then I'd probably read and enjoy those. You should totally publish them.
So...mind if I ask if when the next chapter might be up? And if Tamara will finally reunite with her girls next chapter?
Need more!
I keep rereading And rereading and rereading. I'm in suspense here! I just want to see the reunion.
Also, where is Jill and Dan? If Linda was the tree...Discord did say that Tamara was familiar to him when they first met and he got blasted by her (not so) God Killer. So maybe crazy Dan?
But where's Jill?
Loved it can't wait for moar.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I just realized... Will Tham'ra be able to understand anyone besides her children? She has been speaking ancient tongues for her entire time in Equestria. How much has the language changed?
I'm finally caught up. I stumbled across this story a while back, just started reading a few days ago and I've been shotgunning it since. It's made me laugh and cry and even surprised me in several pleasant ways. Darn, but I've really enjoyed this so far.
The time will be nigh, I hope. Please stop being misplaced across time and space.
swept
Ah, so that explains it.
So the dimensional fold was a causality loop, and its echo of an echo of an echo of an echo- ad infinitum, forever repeating that time space disturbance to mutually meet and receive "Faust" into their world.
Almost to reunion. Almost.
OH GOD THE FEELS!!! FIRST OAK AND HETHER, THEN WINTER, THEN LINDA, THEN......AAAAAH.........YOUR AMAZING!!!!
*sits up from chair, takes a deep breath* "...aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...!"
*Continues to scream to the sky in eternal love, heartbreak, and pain*
Wonder what effect becoming an alicorn had on Celestia's little " problem"