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A very interesting fight scene, and good development.
However, you desperately need an editor. The dialogue in some places - especially Twilight - feels off, and there are other grammar issues, though I didn't spot any spelling errors.
i'm going to just go out on a limb here and guess that these three are queen chrysalis, king sombra, and lord tirek. and the fourth one is nightmare moon
Great chapter.
Well celtic_fire beat me to the punch about the four evil masterminds. We already knew about Nightmare Moon from last time (which makes me wonder if Luna is back in Equestria running the place in Celestia's absence like I previously speculated or if this is her) and you revealed Tirek this chapter while the other two could be guessed based on the horn shapes.
The fight was good for its purposes. But I am starting to wish to see some scenes where it is just Spike and one or two of the girls. As it is having all 6 of them around all the time is starting to make for some awkward dialogue when there is less explaining going on.
Love this story so far. Just went through all the chapters in like 30 minutes. Can't wait for more.
5993913 I'm gonna say you're right.
Don't think I don't know what you're pulling.
[And that is...]
You're shipping together Trixie and Descent together, 'cause you're trying to do something new!
[Maybe I am, maybe I'm not, only time will tell]
And I think I know who the master of those four are.
CUE the fight music!
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Well spoiler alert, You and other evil antagonists gets defeated by spike & the girls, probably in the final battle.
rita "Nightmare" repulsa
Despite Spike suddenly being a skilled badass only after 2 days of training, this was an okay chapter. I definitely agree with QuietNightBrony and hope to see some scenes with just a few of the Mane 6 and Spike to help development them a bit more.
Applejack, you can't honestly expect me too
panting from over usage of fire
1. To.
2. Overusage, one word in this case.
Spike's first kickass fight.
One weekend of training = one level in Badass. Yepp yepp, that´s anime logic for ya. Also, chronical overconfident villians. Makes it only more comical when they fail in the first big confrontation.
Figures, TIrek, Chrysalis and Sombra are involved.
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Honestly surprised discord isn't there as well.
I know this is the natural reaction for these kind of situations but come on he's been seriously hurt that It's just a stupid question that I don't get why people do It
Good chapter nice to see that even with basic training Spike's strong
That was a awesome first fight I can't wait to see what nightmare will is going to do.
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Maybe he shows up as a minor villain. Or maybe he'll be an unexpected ally
Also I'm confused. is it luna or full on nightmare moon?