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Great job with both chaps sweetie
We all know that that wouldn't last
Yeah, I too would rather be a butler even if they made me wear skimpy clothings with a bowtie than never having to be able to sleep with them again.
Eh, Tirek's Revenge was way better.
Assimilate is an immaterial thing; you can take in knowledge, for example. The way it's phrased here makes me think they're about to bring Spike into a collective hive mind. Draining, leeching, or even absorbing would've been a better verb.
As for the absorbing thing itself... it's too overpowered. It's basically what Tirek can do, except way less subtle. From how it was depicted in the movie, they took an already-existing disparity between a group of people, enhanced it, then fed off the negativity that came from it. A way for that to be portrayed in this fic would be to take the existing disharmony among the Mane 6 (and assorted others) and amplify that to a devastating extent. Their coordination would be way off, someone would say something that couldn't be taken back, and they'd be fractured in terms of a well-oiled machine. Then it'd be up to Spike (or maybe even Stone Edge) to fix the problem after realizing there's wool being pulled over their eyes. Then their friendship becomes stronger than it was before, and they overcome the Sirens' strength. After that, Spike, taking pity on these girls, decides to help them find a different way to feed. Insert Changeling-esque redemption here.
But whatever, let's get on with the actual story, I guess.
Ugh... dude. You're the apex baddie of this fic. What do you gain by blustering that you're as strong as your underlings? If you want to prove your badditude to the main protag, you have to say that you're stronger than them.
{Spike: Each one of your flunkies and partners thought they could defeat me and the girls.
*Meanwhile*
Stone Edge: Huh... I feel the need to pummel Spike for some reason.
...
Spike: What makes you think you're so much better?
Tirek: Heheheh, pitiful worm. I'm more powerful than all of those whelps put together; infinitesimally so. If I wanted, you would've been decimated to ashes the second you were reincarnated by that coward Bahamut. But your antics amuse me. It's so quaint to see another wide-eyed hopeful in the world, thinking he can change the course of destiny with nothing but friendship at his side. Because it's much more satisfying for those eyes to turn to abject horror as everything they cared about is crushed underneath my hooves.
What makes me think I'm so much better, boy? I am Lord Tirek, the master of the universe and all it has to offer!}
Seems legit; why would people be civil with other people? The concept just blows my mind.
Well, Spike's not the listening type. He let the voice in his trousers override the voice that knows everything that happens to him.
Also, interesting to see that the Dazzlings aren't the type to get desensitized about how they eat. I feel Monster Girl Quest did a much better job addressing this point, and that was with people literally being eaten.
Spike didn't so much turn against his friends, so much as he became completely unreasonable. And I think there'd be a bit more than just Spike who they absorbed energy from.
Yeah, because Spike was totally going to betray Twilight and everyone else he loves just from being slightly irritable.
Anyways, see you.
KO awesome chapter, they may have escaped from Tirek’s grips but he won’t give up the hunt on taking magic powers for himself and ruling both worlds! Hope our heroes will ready for him.
Nicely done! Glad to see things are fine!
Do I spy with my little eyes a Toy Story 2 reference?
And without a doubt, that locater spell from Jackie Chan Adventures.
They're the "Girls of Your Life," Spike.
Well, that was not what I expected.
But Spike is right about Tirek and I do know many beings who seek great power will be destroyed by it,
So, when will we see the changelings again?
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One thing that's always bugging me.
You plan to have Trixie part of his harem someday?
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Highschool DxD re-enters tomorrow btw.
8854581 I know. I can't wait to see what happens in this season
I just watched the first season of Highschool DXD, and about to watch the second season. I'm very glad you based this story on it, and I hope you write more chapters. You're amazing! Keep it up!
All that was left was Fluttershy saying they should scar them...Emotionally
...Nice motivation if you ask me...lucky bastard
...Good to see he has his priorities straight
Nice Toy Story 2 reference.