DAAAAAW

Cute deadly little guy

Aw he's cute.

I really missed this story. Amber is an amusing gal and Cerulean's new friend is awesome and cute.

1. Yes! The story continues.
2. Adorable.
3. Great job. The characters and their interactions are really interesting and the story has me hooked. Keep up the good work.

“He sent a bird?” Fox yelled.

“In the mail?” Nix said.

“Oh he does this sort of thing all the time.”

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Meh.
It's no corgi in a post tube with several dozen tins of food and a can-opener.

So after removing a shit load of virus's and rereading the last chapter, I'm now ready to review this chapter:

“I’m Spike. Twilight’s assistant.”

“Cerulean Frostwork. I work at-”

“Oh everyone knows about you. They say you killed a dragon.” The boy said in amazement. Fear quickly filled the young boy's eyes.

That moment in your life when you go 'Oh shit' in your head.
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“Gale is gonna have a few words with you about that.”

Who that?

“Okay, what up with the glasses?”

“These are enchanted glasses that help me search the library for specific books in seconds.” She said in a proud tone. “Watch. Spike name a book title.” The child put a clawed finger to his chin and thought for a moment.

“Um, ‘Cooking for Dummies.’” The glasses flashed for a moment and Twilight pointed towards the top shelf. The book then flew into her hand. “Might want to give that one a read through Twi.” The girl furrowed her brow at the boy.

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“Anyway, Princess Celestia calmed me down and the magic wore off, but when Spike went back to normal size he turned into a human with some of his dragon traits still intact.”

Didn't you already do this in another story? Stop repeating yourself.(Be original)

After the smoke had cleared the group saw a large bird standing on top of the seal. The bird was covered in white feathers with the tips a blazing orange, the same as it’s eyes. It was bigger than an eagle and had talons sharp as knives. “Snow!” The bird squawked and hopped on the fire mage’s shoulder as it heard it’s name.

“He sent a bird?” Fox yelled.

“In the mail?” Nix said.

“Oh he does this sort of thing all the time.” Sunset said as she scratched the bird’s chin.

“Your uncle or your peacock?” Cerulean said as he looked at the bird who tried to nip at his hand.

“Snow is a phoenix.” Sunset corrected.

Whats with you and phoenix's?(repeating yourself *squawk* repeating yourself.)

“Phoenix tears have healing powers, they can carry twenty times their body weight and they turn into ash when they reach the end of their lifecycle and are reborn by the ashes.” She smiled. “They also bond to one person and hate everyone else.”

“Nerd.” The alchemist glared at the fox girl’s remark.

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Sunset gave it a try, but no apples fell.

“Ow.” She said rolling her ankle.

Oh gee, if only she had someway to make the apples fall down by themselves as if like magic.

The farmer looked at the man’s torso and saw several scars across his chest and back.

Chicks dig scars.(Although how many of your OC's have scars?)

“W-we were playing and-” The girl’s words were cut off as the bushes the three came out of were crushed by a large manticore. The three girls hid behind the two men as the beast locked eyes with them. Cerulean put his shirt and jacket back on.

Oh yeah, the first thing I always do is put my shirt back on before fighting a monster that will probably shred my clothes in the process.

“You two need to chill out.” Cerulean sighed.

“Only an ice mage could make a pun that frigid.” Nix deadpanned.

“I wasn’t making a pun.” He groaned.

This is why you shouldn't be a master of just one thing?

“No problem. Least we could do for ya after you killed it for us. That thing’s been skulking around the farm for a few weeks and all we’ve been able to do is scare it off with Lil Mac.”

“Lil Mac?” Sunset asked.

“Mac’s shotgun.” The farmer said. “It’s a bit old, but it works well enough and scares the tar out of anything that tries to sneak on our farm."

You know, if a Manticore was stalking around their farm, instead of just using a shotgun to scare it off why didn't they oh I don't know GET THE FUCKING GUILD TO TAKE CARE OF IT!? Seriously isn't that what they're there for?

Two leather like wings sprouted from it’s back and it’s eyes were like two emeralds of the deepest green. At the end of it’s legs there were sharp claws. It’s front two hands seemed to have thumbs. On top of it’s head were two horns pointing towards it’s back. “It was an egg.” Cerulean groaned and dropped to the ground.

Man I wished my birth involved a big ass explosion and a pillar of light shoots out into the sky. Does that happen every time a dragon hatches?(Imagine how big it would be if it was a nest.)*end of review*

So plenty of funny moments in this chapter. I'm loving the comedic personality of Spike. Not sure why Sunset got a phoenix?(Didn't really explain that.) And Cerulean got himself a pet dragon.(Wait till it grows and he starts riding it like a total badass.) This chapter was worth the wait.(But don't take too long with the next one.)

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Yes! Somebody else who gets the RWBY reference!

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Zwie!