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ThatNerdKid456 #1 · Mar 30th, 2015 · 2 · · Prologue ·

Hmmmm.... Interesting so far, i shall keep an eye on this one. My suggestion to you is not to put all your time on this story since you have a few others that you have many more fans of, balance the publishment of the chapters well and leave some good cliffhangers to keep the readers attention so that if something does happen with late chapters, or you get sick or writers block or something people will still be interested
P.S. Since you are including guilds in this one, im hoping not to see Fairy Tail references or cut and paste scenes in here cause you had a few in your Grey characters story. But if any are gonna be in here I am happy that i found them cause Fairy Tail is awesome
P.P.S. Please try not to put any spoilers/references in here from the newest season of GoT, im not all caught up yet :(
~ Whatever my profile name is cause I forgot

Silentpegasus #2 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

5799736 There will be some refrences to Fairy Tail because it's awesome and it was loosely based on GoT. I've only watched up to Season 4. I will not 'Cut and Paste' scenes from either, sure there may be similarities in a few things but not a direct copy.

Moongaze14 #3 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

This story looks great so far. I hope to see more chapters soon.

History Freak #4 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

Cerulean gulped and dropped his pick axe as his life flashed before his eyes.

Did you mean Slate?

huntinguy #5 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

I noticed an error in the first paragraph: 'and poured a hot cup of hot coffee from his dark metal thermos.' I really love everything you've done so far with The Fable of the Zealot and can't wait to see what you add to it with a new character.

DuckOnQuack #6 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

Damn, normally fics with that many tags are autistic fuck ups and while its too early to tell, this fic os shaping up to be great, just like the rest of your stories

DuckOnQuack #7 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

Btw, will you be adding character tags as they show up in the story? Because im interested to see Luna but not Celestia even though she is mentioned

xluferx

xluferx #8 · Mar 30th, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

As expected...a good story coming from you

Silentpegasus #9 · Mar 30th, 2015 · 1 · · Prologue ·

5800479 Celestia will make brief appearances, but Luna will play a more pivital role in the fic.

SolarEclipse912

SolarEclipse912 #10 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

Is it sad that I came here because I recognized the picture from Radiarc's The Frozen North?

DuckOnQuack #11 · Mar 31st, 2015 · · · Prologue ·

5802403 Ahh ok, anyways, like i said man, shapin up to be great, keep it up!

Cheers, Duck

Shadow Bolt #12 · Mar 31st, 2015 · 1 · · Prologue ·

So a new fresh story has posted....hmm, not much feedback on this one. Well I got a job to do, so lets review:

“There’s a huge storm coming down from the North.” Slate sighed heavily at the news. Storms were common North of the wall. A massive wall of ice that separated the mountains and the nearby village where his home was.

Well that didn't take long with the GoT references.

He heard a hacking noise and heard something fall on the snow covered ground.
He opened one eye to see a mass in the snow. The man slowly approached the object with lantern in hand. The light shined and he saw what looked like a small boy, only a year older than his six year old daughter.

So a dragon coughed up a boy? That's something you don't see everyday. Part of me is wondering if this is a Doctor Who reference or not.

His skin was pale and his hair was an icy blue.

Is he a White Walker?

Cerulean nodded and cracked his fingers. He clapped his hands together and there was a bright blue glow from his palms. When he lifted his hand there was a snowflake made of solid ice in his hand.
“Ice mage.” He smiled as the ice shattered.

*shiver* Just got a Frozen vibe for a second there.

“This guild doesn’t need anymore weaklings.”
“Hey watch it!” Cerulean yelled at the stranger. The surrounding mages looked at him in surprise.
“Learn your place commoner! I am Prince Blueblood. Nephew of Princess Celestia herself!”

Oh look, Bluebloods in this story. And he's an asshole, who knew?

“I am talking!” Blueblood bellowed.
“And I don’t care!” The ice mage yelled back in a mock version of the Prince’s voice.

Ooh, shoot. you almost had it.
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She said as she saw a familiar indigo haired scholar. Twilight’s eyes shrank as she saw the woman and gulped nervously.

Okay, now I'm curious as to what that was about.(This better not be some lesbian thing.)*end of review*

Well so far, nothing wrong. Maybe it was the timing(and the fact you already updated another story on the same day.) I will say that this is new, but at the same time I feel like you're redoing The Ranger's Journey. Hopefully this story will branch out to keep comparisons low. Just have to wait and see what happens next.

Moongaze14 #13 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

Ok, this chapter was great. I liked the characterization of Ambar and Orchid. Keep up the good job.

Shadow Bolt #14 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

Good thing this wasn't a prank or I would have been pissed. So without further ado, lets review:

Chapter I
Testing, Testing, 1 2 3 4

Yeah, just because you added an extra number doesn't mean you're not ripping off an episode title.

Navy looked at the ice spikes and sighed as he made them vanish.
“I-I’m sorry.” Cerulean said as he cried. “I-I was scared....I didn’t mean-” The man wrapped him in tight hug.
“It’s gonna be okay.” He said as he gently rubbed his son’s back.

Looks like we're going to get plenty of Frozen references with this story.

“What kind of magic can you do?” She set her cup down and held out her right hand. An orange fireball with green tips then appeared from her hand.
“I’m a fire mage. What about you?” Cerulean put his finger on his cup of coffee and the girl saw it turn to ice. “Ice magic?”

Oh, god dammit. You're going to do the old fire and ice relationship cliche. Well whatever, it's rare to find a straight Sunset Shimmer shipping story on this site.

Sunset reached inside her robe and pulled out what looked like a long whip.
As the first wolf charged at her, she cracked the whip and the rope was ignited with flames.

I know you got this from somewhere, but I can't put my finger on where.

“Awe poor thing.” Sunset said looking at the trap. “I thought poaching in this forest was illegal.”

There in the Everfree Forest, who's going to put laws there? Better question, who's going to enforce it?

“Did you hear that fox talk?”
“Yup.”

What does the fox say?

The fox’s body started to glow bright orange and the two mages had to cover their eyes. The animals form started to shift. It grew and it’s limbs started to lengthen while the fur started to move up it’s back and become hair. Her face went to that of a normal human’s and her whiskers vanished.
The two opened their eyes to see a human girl with long auburn hair, golden eyes and a pair of fox ears, the same color as her hair, were coming from the top of her head along with a similar colored tail with a white tip was coming from her lower back. The woman stood at 5'9” and her hair went down to the middle of her back.

Have been watching Spice & Wolf?

“PUT SOME CLOTHES ON!” Cerulean said turning around with crimson red cheeks.

You know, you think for once you can make a OC that wasn't such a......pussy? No that's not the right word. Eh, I think you get what I mean.

“I can change into any kind of fox, but it’s not the best in combat and it uses up a lot of magic.”

So why change into a fox? I don't see much of a benefit of turning into a fox. If anything it makes her more vulnerable and defenseless in her travels.

The purple haired girl clapped both her hands together and slammed them on the ground.
Purple sparks came from the surrounding area and the ground shot upwards in the shape of a fist that connected with the man’s jaw.

I still love doing that clapping thing from FMA.*end of review*

Well looks like we already have our team for this story. Amber and Orchid do seem like great characters and their personalities will bring plenty of entertainment throughout this story. Let's see if these four can work together in beating a dragon or will they crash and burn? And then get roasted afterwards.

Silentpegasus #15 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

5813694 Yeah I forgot that was an episode title and I have yet to see Frozen all the way through.

Shadow Bolt #16 · Apr 2nd, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

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Okay, I'm finding it hard to believe that you haven't finished Frozen.

Silentpegasus #17 · Apr 3rd, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

5814742 Honestly I haven't. I know what happens because of my friends telling me and wikipedia, but I've only ever seen the 'let it go' musical number that was on Youtube.

Moongaze14 #18 · Apr 4th, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

Really loved the Hobbit's reference and the fight with the dragon.

GrandSpear #19 · Apr 5th, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

I like this story so far.

Dundundun #20 · Apr 5th, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

Hey silent peagausus when do you think you will be done with the next chp for Living with the night?

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #21 · Apr 5th, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

gratuitous RWBY reference.

Shadow Bolt #22 · Apr 6th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter II: Venator ·

Why you post on a Saturday? I'm pretty sure I told you I don't review on Saturdays.(It's my day off and I don't have time for reading.) Just FYI for next time. Well anyway, since it's not Saturday, it's once again review day:

“It ain’t about the clip, it’s about the respect. If I let some idiot steal from me then some other guy will try it too.” She said putting her hands on her hips.

It's kind of ironic that she says that knowing that she's going to do that to someone else. Kinda makes her a hypocrite.(I hate hypocrites.)

Amber turned around and showed the gauntlets.
“These help pack a punch and if I need more reach.”

I knew we were getting a RWBY reference in this story.

“Somethings not right here.” She said as her tail and ears started to twitch. “Something’s in here with us.” Cerulean then felt a burning sensation in his right hand. The blue haired man looked down at the light that was burning through his white glove.
He felt a small pulse go through his arm and he dropped to the ground.

Very curious.

As the girl opened her mouth she felt the coins beneath her feet starting to move. The alchemist quickly got off the pile just as a pair of grey scaled wings the size of sail boat sails erupted from the mound sending gems and bits flying in every direction. The rest of the pile exploded showing a wall of thick grey scales that stretched for seventy feet to form a slim tail that had a large club at the tip. There were several scars and damaged scales across the creature’s body.
The head had several scars over it’s face and it’s eyes were white matching the two scars over it’s eyelids. The group hid behind a few nearby boulders.
“Thieves!” The beast started trampling around the cave. “I can smell your fear!”

I think I love the Hobbit more than Lord of the Rings.(I still have to get the last movie.)

“This is the worst plan ever, of all time.” The alchemist groaned picking up a rock.

Classic Red vs. Blue.

“Trying to get us out of this in one piece.” Cerulean took a step forwards. “We apologize oh great fire drake. We know not that we took from such a magnificent and powerful creature such as yourself.” The man mentally thanked the Creator that he’d read ‘The Hobbit’ three times.

Is the Hobbit based on a true story in this world?

“Who are you to command something from a creature such as I?” The dragon smirked. It had been years since he’d seen mortals grovel at his feet and always found it amusing.

It's been years since he last saw anything.*ba-dum tsss*

The beast slammed it’s claw down on the ground making several bits of coin and rock fly. One of the cold coins hit the man in the forehead.
“Damn it!” He said as he put his hand on his forehead to feel blood coming from the wound.

Okay, that coin have to have been traveling at great speed to be able to cut him.

“Did you think the great Tenebris would be beaten by stone?” The beast yelled.
“For a second there, I did.” Cerulean gulped.

I've never seen Kill Bill. I hear great things about it, is it that good?

He smiled as he held it in his arms. “Ladies, meet Ivory.

I think this is the second time where you reuse a name.(branch out will you?)

The handle started glowing and the bow split into two single bladed axes. “she’s also a pair of axes.”

I'm still trying to imagine how it does that?

“That damn lizard scorched all the gold!” She moved a rock and the group saw a hardened puddle of gold mixed with jewels.

Should it really matter? Gold is gold, no matter what shape it's in. It might even be worth more now with the jewels fused into it. Plus all she has to do is take the gold once it's solid to a metal shop and have them melt it in any shape she wants. (So much knowledge in my head.) Also didn't she stuff her pockets with plenty of gold so it's not like she's empty handed.

“Can’t you just do your alchemy thing?” Amber asked.
“No, I can’t use alchemy to transmute gold.”
“Why?”
“It's the rules.”

Yeah I never understood why. Did they ever explain that?*end of review*

So this chapter was pretty awesome. I knew there was going to be action in this one and I wasn't disappointed. Imagine Blueblood's surprise when he finds out that Cerulean killed a dragon. That will obviously show how strong and powerful he is, meaning that he shouldn't mess with him. Of course, we all know that ain't happening but it means that he'll have to come up with something big to take on Cerulean. And that will be something worth finding out.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #23 · Apr 27th, 2015 · · · Chapter I: Testing, Testing 1 2 3 4 ·

Loving the story so far. I can see a possible fire-ice relationship between sunset and cerulean somewhere. Also love the guild reference; almost like fairy tail.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #24 · Apr 30th, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

Is this going to continue? (Please say yes, please say yes, please say yes)

mylaptop

mylaptop #25 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter II: Venator ·

Update?

mylaptop

mylaptop #26 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

Love it!

colt alchemist #27 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

I love this story so far! I can actually imagine this as it's own show or anime

Moongaze14 #28 · May 1st, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

Great chapter. I really loved the Nap-ception part and the straw competition.

Shadow Bolt #29 · May 5th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

Busy, busy, busy. Haven't had the time to sit down and read until now. So lets cut to the chase with the review:

“Twilight, I just killed a dragon. I’ve killed a bear with nothing but, an icicle and my fist and I’ve fought off a pack of wolves with a torch and a hatchet.”

Man, he's like Liam Neeson.

“I was napping so hard I was dreaming about having a nap.”
“Nap-ception?” Amber asked. The cyan flyer gave a nod. “Those are the best.”

I don't take naps, but I have had Sleep-ceptions so that counts right?

“Draco Venator.” The words went through the Princess’s mind and her eyes shrank.
“I thought they all died in the war?”
“There are always survivors Luna. While they are few, they are strong.” Celestia sighed. “His mother is know as the White Winged Wraith.”
“She sounds formidable.”

Wait...was Rime that dragon from the beginning?

“I’m in.” She smirked. “You’re up next mutt.” She said looking at Amber.
“I’m a fox not a dog!” She hissed before entering the room.

Foxes and dogs are part of the same family.

The three girls got their symbols, each in a different place and different color. Sunset’s was orange and got hers on the top of her left hand. Nix’s was dark purple and hers was on her left upper arm. Amber was last, her’s was a dark red and got it on her stomach near her belly button.

Any reason why the marks are different colors?

Amber wanted a place in the middle of town that was next to a musician’s house. The walls were vibrating from the sound output of the DJ neighbor.

You think with those ears, the music would be torture for her.*end of review*

So after a epic battle, the group gets some downtime. These chapters are nice, they all don't have to have fights(for now.) I am curious about Sunset's shtick, so I'll be keeping my eye on that. Also is Spike in this story? Makes you wonder how the group will react when they see a dragon walking around?

Silentpegasus #30 · May 5th, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

5942059 Yes, sleep-ceptions count. It's happened to me a few times. I plan on introducing Spike next chapter and the different color thing, it let's the guild members personalize the seal with their favorite color.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #31 · May 26th, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

When is this continuing? I loved this story. I especially love where it's going.

Gobeman

Gobeman #32 · Jul 6th, 2015 · 2 · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

DAAAAAW

xluferx

xluferx #33 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

Cute deadly little guy

AC Punk

AC Punk #34 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

Aw he's cute.

Moongaze14 #35 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

I really missed this story. Amber is an amusing gal and Cerulean's new friend is awesome and cute.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #36 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

1. Yes! The story continues.
2. Adorable.
3. Great job. The characters and their interactions are really interesting and the story has me hooked. Keep up the good work.

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #37 · Jul 6th, 2015 · · · Chapter III: Living Arrangements ·

5928657 So far it might as well be a ponified Fairy Tale with a new storyline.

rikusorasephiroth

rikusorasephiroth #38 · Jul 6th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

“He sent a bird?” Fox yelled.
“In the mail?” Nix said.
“Oh he does this sort of thing all the time.”

...
Meh.
It's no corgi in a post tube with several dozen tins of food and a can-opener.

Shadow Bolt #39 · Jul 7th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

So after removing a shit load of virus's and rereading the last chapter, I'm now ready to review this chapter:

“I’m Spike. Twilight’s assistant.”
“Cerulean Frostwork. I work at-”
“Oh everyone knows about you. They say you killed a dragon.” The boy said in amazement. Fear quickly filled the young boy's eyes.

That moment in your life when you go 'Oh shit' in your head.
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“Gale is gonna have a few words with you about that.”

Who that?

“Okay, what up with the glasses?”
“These are enchanted glasses that help me search the library for specific books in seconds.” She said in a proud tone. “Watch. Spike name a book title.” The child put a clawed finger to his chin and thought for a moment.
“Um, ‘Cooking for Dummies.’” The glasses flashed for a moment and Twilight pointed towards the top shelf. The book then flew into her hand. “Might want to give that one a read through Twi.” The girl furrowed her brow at the boy.

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“Anyway, Princess Celestia calmed me down and the magic wore off, but when Spike went back to normal size he turned into a human with some of his dragon traits still intact.”

Didn't you already do this in another story? Stop repeating yourself.(Be original)

After the smoke had cleared the group saw a large bird standing on top of the seal. The bird was covered in white feathers with the tips a blazing orange, the same as it’s eyes. It was bigger than an eagle and had talons sharp as knives. “Snow!” The bird squawked and hopped on the fire mage’s shoulder as it heard it’s name.
“He sent a bird?” Fox yelled.
“In the mail?” Nix said.
“Oh he does this sort of thing all the time.” Sunset said as she scratched the bird’s chin.
“Your uncle or your peacock?” Cerulean said as he looked at the bird who tried to nip at his hand.
“Snow is a phoenix.” Sunset corrected.

Whats with you and phoenix's?(repeating yourself *squawk* repeating yourself.)

“Phoenix tears have healing powers, they can carry twenty times their body weight and they turn into ash when they reach the end of their lifecycle and are reborn by the ashes.” She smiled. “They also bond to one person and hate everyone else.”
“Nerd.” The alchemist glared at the fox girl’s remark.

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Sunset gave it a try, but no apples fell.
“Ow.” She said rolling her ankle.

Oh gee, if only she had someway to make the apples fall down by themselves as if like magic.

The farmer looked at the man’s torso and saw several scars across his chest and back.

Chicks dig scars.(Although how many of your OC's have scars?)

“W-we were playing and-” The girl’s words were cut off as the bushes the three came out of were crushed by a large manticore. The three girls hid behind the two men as the beast locked eyes with them. Cerulean put his shirt and jacket back on.

Oh yeah, the first thing I always do is put my shirt back on before fighting a monster that will probably shred my clothes in the process.

“You two need to chill out.” Cerulean sighed.
“Only an ice mage could make a pun that frigid.” Nix deadpanned.
“I wasn’t making a pun.” He groaned.

This is why you shouldn't be a master of just one thing?

“No problem. Least we could do for ya after you killed it for us. That thing’s been skulking around the farm for a few weeks and all we’ve been able to do is scare it off with Lil Mac.”
“Lil Mac?” Sunset asked.
“Mac’s shotgun.” The farmer said. “It’s a bit old, but it works well enough and scares the tar out of anything that tries to sneak on our farm."

You know, if a Manticore was stalking around their farm, instead of just using a shotgun to scare it off why didn't they oh I don't know GET THE FUCKING GUILD TO TAKE CARE OF IT!? Seriously isn't that what they're there for?

Two leather like wings sprouted from it’s back and it’s eyes were like two emeralds of the deepest green. At the end of it’s legs there were sharp claws. It’s front two hands seemed to have thumbs. On top of it’s head were two horns pointing towards it’s back. “It was an egg.” Cerulean groaned and dropped to the ground.

Man I wished my birth involved a big ass explosion and a pillar of light shoots out into the sky. Does that happen every time a dragon hatches?(Imagine how big it would be if it was a nest.)*end of review*

So plenty of funny moments in this chapter. I'm loving the comedic personality of Spike. Not sure why Sunset got a phoenix?(Didn't really explain that.) And Cerulean got himself a pet dragon.(Wait till it grows and he starts riding it like a total badass.) This chapter was worth the wait.(But don't take too long with the next one.)

ChasingResonance

ChasingResonance #40 · Aug 15th, 2015 · · · Chapter IV: Hatchling ·

6173277
Yes! Somebody else who gets the RWBY reference!

Moongaze14 #41 · Aug 30th, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

Nice to see another chapter of the story. Lapis reminds me of Saphira and I got to say that Fluttershy unintentionally flashing Cerulean was hilarious (May she keep doing that to guys in your other stories).

ChasingResonance

ChasingResonance #42 · Aug 30th, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

So much yes!
Also, was that a reference to Cressida Cowell's How to Train Your Dragon series I saw in there?

Silentpegasus #43 · Aug 30th, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

6375364 Not sure what you're talking about.

ChasingResonance

ChasingResonance #44 · Aug 30th, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

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You too? I wasn't sure if anyone else would think of Saphira.
6375378

Not sure if joking or serious.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #45 · Aug 31st, 2015 · 1 · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

Yup. This is Fairy Tail and Gale is Erza. Great work. I feel your pain on the writers block issue. Keep up the good work!

Silentpegasus #46 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

6376135 True, I do see the resemblance to Erza. I mostly based Gale on two people: Erza and Akame, from Akame Ga Kill.

Now before everyone jumps down my throat, let me just say something. No, I didn't copy and paste their characters and reformat them into the setting. Gale is a character all her own. While she may have certain tropes that resemble them, she can stand alone as herself in this fic. Besides, I've always used things I'm a fan of as inspiration. Hell what writer HASN'T done that? So I do not intend to plagiarize either of these great characters. I merely looked to them for inspiration because they are strong complex characters that I can (Somewhat) relate to. I would never dream of ripping these two characters off. (and expect to survive their reaction. Seriously have you see these two mad?)

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Welp, I know who's going to be haunting my dreams for a while.

Nova Arc

Nova Arc #47 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

6376299 Nice. I actually just got into Akame ga Kill. Halfway done. Just went back and noticed the resembling kindness. Don't worry. Your fine with the characters. They're great and original, even if they are inspired and work great as individuals.

And ditto. That's two three sleepless nights. While pissed Akame is unmatched, there is only one person I fear more than Erza... pretty sure we all know her...

Silentpegasus #48 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

6376345 Who? Pissed Mirajane?
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Nova Arc

Nova Arc #49 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

6376368 GAH! *hides behind couch* I did, said, and heard nothing wrong...

Jman796

Jman796 #50 · Aug 31st, 2015 · · · Chapter V: The Oncoming Storm ·

“but how are you going to handle her? I doubt there’s a book that teaches you how to train a dragon.”

No, but there is a movie

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