A hunter frozen by tragedy. A flame regretting what it’s burned. A beauty trying to forget the beast inside. An outcast searching for family. Join Cerulean and his companions as they embark on an epic adventure.
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Hmmmm.... Interesting so far, i shall keep an eye on this one. My suggestion to you is not to put all your time on this story since you have a few others that you have many more fans of, balance the publishment of the chapters well and leave some good cliffhangers to keep the readers attention so that if something does happen with late chapters, or you get sick or writers block or something people will still be interested
P.S. Since you are including guilds in this one, im hoping not to see Fairy Tail references or cut and paste scenes in here cause you had a few in your Grey characters story. But if any are gonna be in here I am happy that i found them cause Fairy Tail is awesome
P.P.S. Please try not to put any spoilers/references in here from the newest season of GoT, im not all caught up yet :(
~ Whatever my profile name is cause I forgot
5799736 There will be some refrences to Fairy Tail because it's awesome and it was loosely based on GoT. I've only watched up to Season 4. I will not 'Cut and Paste' scenes from either, sure there may be similarities in a few things but not a direct copy.
This story looks great so far. I hope to see more chapters soon.
Cerulean gulped and dropped his pick axe as his life flashed before his eyes.
Did you mean Slate?
I noticed an error in the first paragraph: 'and poured a hot cup of hot coffee from his dark metal thermos.' I really love everything you've done so far with The Fable of the Zealot and can't wait to see what you add to it with a new character.
Damn, normally fics with that many tags are autistic fuck ups and while its too early to tell, this fic os shaping up to be great, just like the rest of your stories
Btw, will you be adding character tags as they show up in the story? Because im interested to see Luna but not Celestia even though she is mentioned
As expected...a good story coming from you
5800479 Celestia will make brief appearances, but Luna will play a more pivital role in the fic.
Is it sad that I came here because I recognized the picture from Radiarc's The Frozen North?
5802403 Ahh ok, anyways, like i said man, shapin up to be great, keep it up!
Cheers, Duck
So a new fresh story has posted....hmm, not much feedback on this one. Well I got a job to do, so lets review:
Well that didn't take long with the GoT references.
So a dragon coughed up a boy? That's something you don't see everyday. Part of me is wondering if this is a Doctor Who reference or not.
Is he a White Walker?
*shiver* Just got a Frozen vibe for a second there.
Oh look, Bluebloods in this story. And he's an asshole, who knew?
Ooh, shoot. you almost had it.
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Okay, now I'm curious as to what that was about.(This better not be some lesbian thing.)*end of review*
Well so far, nothing wrong. Maybe it was the timing(and the fact you already updated another story on the same day.) I will say that this is new, but at the same time I feel like you're redoing The Ranger's Journey. Hopefully this story will branch out to keep comparisons low. Just have to wait and see what happens next.
this reminds me of fairy tail blueblood is laxus
Hm another " I'm new here and now I have to do badass stuff and be overpowered af" I'm not saying it's bad but it seems like every other story is like that. Some variety where like the main character is not all that strong and he has to rely on the powerful ones but is still over confident or something. Idk I'm not the author buy some diversity between your stories is all I'm asking as a fan of you for three years and still running. :)