A hunter frozen by tragedy. A flame regretting what it’s burned. A beauty trying to forget the beast inside. An outcast searching for family. Join Cerulean and his companions as they embark on an epic adventure.
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Nice to see another chapter of the story. Lapis reminds me of Saphira and I got to say that Fluttershy unintentionally flashing Cerulean was hilarious (May she keep doing that to guys in your other stories).
So much yes!
Also, was that a reference to Cressida Cowell's How to Train Your Dragon series I saw in there?
6375364 Not sure what you're talking about.
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You too? I wasn't sure if anyone else would think of Saphira.
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Not sure if joking or serious.
Yup. This is Fairy Tail and Gale is Erza. Great work. I feel your pain on the writers block issue. Keep up the good work!
6376135 True, I do see the resemblance to Erza. I mostly based Gale on two people: Erza and Akame, from Akame Ga Kill.
Now before everyone jumps down my throat, let me just say something. No, I didn't copy and paste their characters and reformat them into the setting. Gale is a character all her own. While she may have certain tropes that resemble them, she can stand alone as herself in this fic. Besides, I've always used things I'm a fan of as inspiration. Hell what writer HASN'T done that? So I do not intend to plagiarize either of these great characters. I merely looked to them for inspiration because they are strong complex characters that I can (Somewhat) relate to. I would never dream of ripping these two characters off. (and expect to survive their reaction. Seriously have you see these two mad?)
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Welp, I know who's going to be haunting my dreams for a while.
6376299 Nice. I actually just got into Akame ga Kill. Halfway done. Just went back and noticed the resembling kindness. Don't worry. Your fine with the characters. They're great and original, even if they are inspired and work great as individuals.
And ditto. That's two three sleepless nights. While pissed Akame is unmatched, there is only one person I fear more than Erza... pretty sure we all know her...
6376345 Who? Pissed Mirajane?
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6376368 GAH! *hides behind couch* I did, said, and heard nothing wrong...
No, but there is a movie
6377355 Oh right. Wasn't really mking a reference, just worked out that way.
Now comes the difficult part for any author writing a story like this:
Not making Blueblood into a generic, lazy Hate Sink. That he's supposedly an A rank mage is promising in that regard, even if so far Blueblood only seems to exist to provide Cerulean with a target to show off his powers and "badassitude" (which, from a certain perspective, comes off as being just a jerk).
6377482 Lulz.
Did you see any of the HtTYD movies?
Well it hasn't been that long that I needed to reread the last chapter so that's good. Lets see what's new:
Damn, haven't even started reading and already we get a Doctor Who reference.
Something that came from a dragon that became a dragon. Was he expecting a manticore or something?
Ah, look like the puns are here to stay.
Looks like somebody is a Steven Universe fan.(started watching it awhile ago.)
I see what you did there.
So Hobbits do exist in this world. So is the Hobbit a true story or not?
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I laughed at that.
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So griffins are just griffins.....So then there is no Gilda?
Nice save. I really wish I could see what Gale looks like(is she going to be one of Cerulean mates?)
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The A stands for Asshole.*end of review*
Well I enjoyed this chapter very much, it had plenty of comedy and tension. Five chapters in and nothing shipping related has happened yet. I wonder how soon before the real fun begins?
6380354 Never watched an episode of Steven Universe, nor do I plan to. Just not my cup of tea. I just thought the rock was pretty. Gilda and those like her would be considered Griffonian, the Griffin is just their national animal. Like dragons for draconia and Alicorns for Equestria.
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So there are Alicorns that aren't the princesses? Also you should give Steven Universe another shot, it gets better throughout the season.