The Big Man
written by Duke Moon II
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I for one really liked this start. Although the long dialogue on Spikes past could've been in flashback form, it still was pleasing to read and visualize. Also, I wanna see how all of this goes down. If you need a prereader or edior, Im more than happy to help you out. Good luck on this monumental project, and I hope it is well recieved.
P.S: When a girl calls you her baby brother during an intense make-out session, that intensity dies like an erection going flat when the mood's killed, only faster and it leaves ypu with an emotional scar.........
#JustSaiyan
Well, I'm gonna follow this and see where it takes me.
This, I will be following.
Loved the opening very much. I can't wait to see more of this.
Not too shabby :)
Type o.'s here and there , but i don't care this is Spike shipping and i love it. And the beast part is that this is humanized, this is so going into http://www.fimfiction.net/group/206214/spike-and-mares-humanized-shipping
can't wait to see what kind hijinks the girls pull to win over spike
I really liked it, even though it had a few errors here and there (like an occasional missing word)
I can't wait to see this harem take place, and the "Mature" rating to be put to use
NICE
5770789 I'll try to do better for the next chapter.
Not bad, a word of advice though, add an extra entre between paragraphs. It removes the wall of text feeling and tends to just make the tory more visually appealing to a reader opening it up for the first time.
Looking forward to seeing this play out.
UPDATE!
Update?
Twilight 'Sparkle' Sagan;
Iris 'Rainbow' Dash;
Marylin Flutters(hy);
Jacqueline Apple (Applejack).
Are the other two named Pinkamena Diane Pie and Rarity Belle?
A lot of low blows are a-coming.
"tiny peaks"
That's a good one!
I like this beginning. Alot.
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Eh, unless someone so happens to have a certain taste for such things.
Delilah 'Eris(?)' Discordia, huh?
As I reread this, I can't help but wonder, while the girls are busy going on and on about Spike, what could Spike himself be doing at that very moment.