Inspired by "The Girls of My Life" by Wildcard25, Spike navigates through his first year of high school with the help of his friends. Trouble is in the horizon as Spike confronts a new, schoolastic world.
Marvelous job, my friend. I can't wait to see the next chapter where Spike gives the girls the gifts he had for them. And I wonder who else he'll meet in this new school, and what kind of girls will take a shine to him. I eagerly await your next chapter. And if you require suggestions and ideas I am always opened to help.
Albert himself smiled evilly and turned to his henchmen. “Please inform as many students as you can about this rather tasty turn of events. See that it spreads before the lunch hour.”
I'm the antagonist. I've: tied you're girlfriend to the railroad tracks, put a bomb on a bridge and ate puppies for dinner... no reason, I'm just evil... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I'll admit, this was pretty interesting. Nice to see that Fluttershy has not only a sweet side, but a seductive one as well... man, this story has a lot of possibilities.
“Twily is a big girl, Spike,” Shinning said, cutting off Spike. “She trusts you, I trust her and that’s all that matters. Still, I am her big brother, so…” “Is that why you really wanted to give me ride, Shinning? To give me fair warning?” asked Spike. “I love my sister, Spike,” Shinning said. “She’s my LSBFF.” “Say no more, officer,” Spike said, getting the hint.
....awww. that's so sweet. Too bad for Shining though, but Twilight's got resevations for a private dinner with Spike, and have already convinced the staff that they will not have seen anything if their reputations are worth keepin.....a very 'private' dinner indeed...hehehehehe
I couldn't help it. Shining threatens Spike with the standard 'you hurt her, I hurt you and make you disappear' threat because it's his little sister. At times it just seems so cliché that I just want Spike to say, "Well I will remember that while Twi's bouncing me on my lap/crotch and she has those looks in her eyes that say she's gonna eat me alive" right in front of Shining's face. (Yes, I'm aware that pretty much would make Spike an asshole and it would be grossly OOC, but sometimes you want to have a bit of Charlie Sheen in his personality)
I just typed this while reading, so advise: I haven't seen the rest yet, this was a heat of the moment type of thing. And I haven't read the rest of the chapter yet.
Regardless of what Featherweight says, that ain't luck, that, my boy, it is skill and just Spike being Spike, unlike Blueblood (going off on this, I kinda was expecting like a friendly rivalry, like he knows he's the big man on campus but knows Spike's probably got that now from jump, and now Blue is just gonna compete and be at least cordial and honestly friendly around Spike, not another issue where Blueblood's an asshole and the obvious bad guy.) And of course, the antagonist has to have his idiot minions that have more muscles than brains.
Did like the vignettes with all the characters. Each one was well placed and characterized. Really gets the sense that's it your typical high school, and that there is already a little way to how the school works.
Luna as the School Nurse instead of the Vice Principal==definitely new to me. I'm looking forward to more of Nurse Luna, origianlly I thought she would be Cadence but it's refreshing to change the status quo a bit.
And then that little kiss at the end. : So cute. Boy he's got a charmed existence, doesn't he?
“I’ll let you in on a secret,” Spike said. “Those smiles those girls have…especially from- “Especially from whom, Spike?” a kindly voice asked. Spike turned to the source voice and couldn’t help but smile even wider. Fluttershy was standing in front of him with a curious smile on her face. Meanwhile, Spike’s friends were at a loss for words. Featherweight was trying hard to breathe while Pipsqueak had a small blush adorned on his cheeks.
Marvelous job, my friend. I can't wait to see the next chapter where Spike gives the girls the gifts he had for them. And I wonder who else he'll meet in this new school, and what kind of girls will take a shine to him. I eagerly await your next chapter. And if you require suggestions and ideas I am always opened to help.
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I'm just hoping for a smaller gap between chapters.
I'm the antagonist. I've: tied you're girlfriend to the railroad tracks, put a bomb on a bridge and ate puppies for dinner... no reason, I'm just evil... AHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
I'll admit, this was pretty interesting. Nice to see that Fluttershy has not only a sweet side, but a seductive one as well... man, this story has a lot of possibilities.
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Thanks!
....awww. that's so sweet. Too bad for Shining though, but Twilight's got resevations for a private dinner with Spike, and have already convinced the staff that they will not have seen anything if their reputations are worth keepin.....a very 'private' dinner indeed...hehehehehe
I couldn't help it. Shining threatens Spike with the standard 'you hurt her, I hurt you and make you disappear' threat because it's his little sister. At times it just seems so cliché that I just want Spike to say, "Well I will remember that while Twi's bouncing me on my lap/crotch and she has those looks in her eyes that say she's gonna eat me alive" right in front of Shining's face. (Yes, I'm aware that pretty much would make Spike an asshole and it would be grossly OOC, but sometimes you want to have a bit of Charlie Sheen in his personality)
I just typed this while reading, so advise: I haven't seen the rest yet, this was a heat of the moment type of thing. And I haven't read the rest of the chapter yet.
Now I've read the latest chapter.
Regardless of what Featherweight says, that ain't luck, that, my boy, it is skill and just Spike being Spike, unlike Blueblood (going off on this, I kinda was expecting like a friendly rivalry, like he knows he's the big man on campus but knows Spike's probably got that now from jump, and now Blue is just gonna compete and be at least cordial and honestly friendly around Spike, not another issue where Blueblood's an asshole and the obvious bad guy.) And of course, the antagonist has to have his idiot minions that have more muscles than brains.
Did like the vignettes with all the characters. Each one was well placed and characterized. Really gets the sense that's it your typical high school, and that there is already a little way to how the school works.
Luna as the School Nurse instead of the Vice Principal==definitely new to me. I'm looking forward to more of Nurse Luna, origianlly I thought she would be Cadence but it's refreshing to change the status quo a bit.
And then that little kiss at the end. : So cute. Boy he's got a charmed existence, doesn't he?
Until next chapter!!
Ah, you mean like this?
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Yeah, I'd appreciate her smiles, too.
You know i got to ask before i read is blue blood the antagonist or minion of the antagonist.
Edit nevermind read it and the i'm leaving the building.
Put up the next one plz
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Already working on it.
Preview on my Deviantart page.
Duke moon ll keeping it coming man your doing a good job
It's just a kiss!!!