Welcome to the first story arc of my experiment in creating a potential shared fetish universe.
Applejacked, the first story arc is finished and will be posted over the next two or three weeks, depending on response.
I think it runs over sixty thousand words.
Unfortunately it contains a large amount of world building that has little to do with the main story line, but I've tried to segregate the worst examples of those into their own chapters and give a warning at the beginning so they can be skipped if you wish.
Wow, this story, or at least the prologue, sounds really good. This story feels like a breath of fresh air and I do hope you continue it. And I'm going to hazard a guess that you're going to get quite a bit of down votes, but please don't get discouraged by it. Well, good luck to you, and happy writing.
finished chapter one or prologue and noticed the comment from later on that went like " celestria would deal with this" and as a history major and scifi writer "by another name" i'm just going to point out A. "country with powers you don't under stand you don't start a war till you do" and B. most country were forced to give up the slave trade by economic and political influences not war, the exception to the rule being the American civil war which was internal conflict, and hati where there was more slaves then freeman, a portion of the free man were decedents of slaves and most importantly it was also an independence movement against France.
The sound of The pegasus guard, Jot, giving Dis a surreptitious slap across the back of the head was loud. Celestia repressed a smile. The two of them were playing their roles nicely. She might not be able to express her true feelings, but Dis did a lovely job of it, and Jot was as adept at pretending her fellow guard was speaking out of turn.
well , that was certainly more detailed and heavy handed than i was expecting it to be :c , to dark for me to really get into like i did with who rules , but god danmit fuck nom he made me like this shit way to much , so i'll go a bit further......
5879698 and this guy makes a good point about something that was leaving me curious too which was that i thought the idea for this au from the way you were describing it this to me before was going to be that there's a new country found with a culture of gendered slavery (just cause) that they were all fine with and the mane6 or whoever were going to get involved with in some way some oh whom may eventually end up adopting the culture for themselves....
but that this wasn't going to be typical capture rape slave game over kind of fic that permeates this site , not that in the first fucking scene we have a character telling that same story as a lie to the princess to position themselves better to be able to invade equestria with merry sue villians and enslave everyone including the princesses and fucking cut off their limbs and mega rape them and shit , like god danm ._.".............
Welcome to the first story arc of my experiment in creating a potential shared fetish universe.
Applejacked, the first story arc is finished and will be posted over the next two or three weeks, depending on response.
I think it runs over sixty thousand words.
Unfortunately it contains a large amount of world building that has little to do with the main story line, but I've tried to segregate the worst examples of those into their own chapters and give a warning at the beginning so they can be skipped if you wish.
Wow, this story, or at least the prologue, sounds really good. This story feels like a breath of fresh air and I do hope you continue it. And I'm going to hazard a guess that you're going to get quite a bit of down votes, but please don't get discouraged by it. Well, good luck to you, and happy writing.
finished chapter one or prologue and noticed the comment from later on that went like " celestria would deal with this" and as a history major and scifi writer "by another name" i'm just going to point out A. "country with powers you don't under stand you don't start a war till you do" and B. most country were forced to give up the slave trade by economic and political influences not war, the exception to the rule being the American civil war which was internal conflict, and hati where there was more slaves then freeman, a portion of the free man were decedents of slaves and most importantly it was also an independence movement against France.
I think I like this set up.
well , that was certainly more detailed and heavy handed than i was expecting it to be :c , to dark for me to really get into like i did with who rules , but god danmit fuck nom he made me like this shit way to much , so i'll go a bit further......
5879698 and this guy makes a good point about something that was leaving me curious too which was that i thought the idea for this au from the way you were describing it this to me before was going to be that there's a new country found with a culture of gendered slavery (just cause) that they were all fine with and the mane6 or whoever were going to get involved with in some way some oh whom may eventually end up adopting the culture for themselves....
but that this wasn't going to be typical capture rape slave game over kind of fic that permeates this site , not that in the first fucking scene we have a character telling that same story as a lie to the princess to position themselves better to be able to invade equestria with merry sue villians and enslave everyone including the princesses and fucking cut off their limbs and mega rape them and shit , like god danm ._.".............