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Oh yeah! This is going to be not so much fun...
but anyways,
Then it might be better to not get my token... 3 different voices whispering at once could lead him to think he is completely insane.
Or that the token is cursed. Probably the latter, a rabbitmen-voodopuppet can lead people to assume that. Oh well, I'd like to do a crossover, so... should I just PM you then?
5655132 Hey, there's at least one REEEEEEEALLY good one out there.
Seriously. it's epic.
5733825 pm
...
5734027 . . .
5734027 Judging from the fact that you didn't respond to the previous comment, I take it that you are pissed.
5734182 Actually it was because I was writing a new chapter but I'm not sure whether I should find myself annoyed or complemented by it.
5734296 Well it merely depends on if the original purpose was fulfilled. For instance, the purpose of this chapter was to give slight backstory and for character development.
You got my attention.
5733825 Actually the reason that I wanted my character to throw his token into the void was so that the energies and the pressure would cause the device to multiply and go to other displaced Equestrias.
I'm really tempted to make a a character based off of one of my favourite games rate now just to drag you into the world .... shame I have absolutely no idea for a story at this time.
5734601 We all did something like that for multiplying. One of my characters overpoured their token with Energy, causing it to vanish into the void and multiply.
5735466 I recommend that you read a lot of crossovers and take inspiration from them. For instance I got the idea of adding a picture in every chapter from The bridge, a Godzilla/ Mlp crossover.
You might want to slow down on your writing. You're dropping main plot points harder than the Twin Towers, and when you just threw in the pony after very little dialogue? Let me answer that question with another question: have you ever watched porn with fast-forward going? It's a little like this.
Anyways, you're going in the right direction with this one. Keep up the good work.
This story intrigues me, so if you ever wish to do a crossover, just hit me up.
5737105 Weird analogy, but I can see what you mean. I merely wanted to set up a wierd character with the Pinkie of that time. I plan on going to early Cloudsdale with a wierd character to use an epic introduction. Aka, [youtube=J5Jz4u8_J4U]
good so far please keep up the good work and writing
5757548 It may be a while because I am doing a crossover with Solarkness.
MOAR!!!!!!!!!!!
5757892 Sorry, can't help it:
But I would insert a 'because' in there
5765415 Thanks. Also, my editor, The Lonely Rhode, might be a while, so you might have to wait about a day.
5765616 You know, I call it a while if it takes a week.
And it didn't, did it now?
If understanding this right he also got Tony's 'brain' if he could read all that as if its nothing... nice
5767618
yep.
Some characters even get thier personalities too.
5765616 MOAR!!!!!!!!
5815293 If you want a chapter with yours truly all in it, then look up solarkness' chapter.
MORE NEEEEED MMMMOOORRRRREEEEEE!!!!!!!!
so are you going to update?
5890989 I am currently in the process of making a crossover.
5891034
1 that was not what I asked and 2 that's no excuse to slake on you storys.
5891631 Allow me to reiterate then. I am busy writing a crossover with a Spiderman displaced story. The crossover will be the next chapter. I don't know when this will come out as I am studying for finals. If you have an idea on how to study hard and be quick with chapters, then I would love to hear it. Otherwise, good day to you sir.
5891707
i know i read it, but I hate it when people go on ahead and spiller it for us.
This isn't as long as most stories are before I start reading them, but fuck it. Ironman.
Edit: I normally wait 'till a story passes 40k words, so I know the writer is invested and wont suddenly abandon the story.
Why... WHY...
...I DON'T FKING GET IT! Almost every time I go to a Displaced story, theres always some random out of nowhere Final Fantasy shit that as time progresses, makes the story worse! Please don't make this story worse for meh tiny brain!
(Edit: Okay, so now you added another Displaced character? This is the kind'a shit that turns me off. I don't like being "that guy",but baiiii!)
When I read Suprise, I hear Pinkie, is that wrong?