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Not to bad, a little iffy to follow at a few spots. but over all, not to bad
i like this
Dear Mr. Sword.
I came here after the sudden turn of events in one of my personal favorite 'A Four Letter Word', and I have to say, I have mixed thoughts. The pace is quite fast as you attempt to squeeze as much information into 1,000 + words as possible, the descriptions are bare bones minimum, you have a bad tendency of telling and not showing and to top it off, grammar errors are prevalent throughout this fic. Odd thing is, I can't bring myself to hate this nor rid it from my 'Read Later' tab. I'll be sure to keep an eye on this one, for now that is.
Sincerely Yours, The Cake Devil.
6148951 Either I am lucky or good at subtle manipulation. I don't know which though.
WHY? WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY? You have an Iron Man Displaced, you have him build an airship, and it ISN'T a Helicarrier? Why would you do that?
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You made Derpy cry.
"That makes since, here."
You mean 'sense' there.;) Now, back to reading.^_^
Hmm... seems the link to Wayde's story is literally a link directly to his story, not to the particular chapters that you partook in.:\ And that's a lot of chapters to look through.