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it story isn't updated as much as it should be.
Good chapter though.
A bit tumbly with the words, but the action was getting up there.
Seriously? No one told the bounty hunters that he used a red and yellow suit of armor? Or that he invented stuff for fun? Kinda disappointed in Celestia. Also, it would of been interesting to read about him setting up his companies rather than "oh yeah, and I own two fairly successful companies in different nations now." Did he buy out the two companies in question, or did he make them? I honestly want this story to be more than a crossover vehicle, because it has got an impressive potential as a story. It will also let you do world building.
6296637 If it makes you feel any better, I plan on doing a homage to my favorite avatar moment in the next chapter.
6296918 Only a little bit, also if it involves cabbages, been there, done that, got the t shirt, and blew the place up.
I have a plan to fill in the time gap. Just trust me.
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Nice, but one thing. In my ( to be writen the rest of the way) story after beig in stone for eons and finaly esacaping I gave clestia a bitchslap up side the head for her idotisy abd becam on if her assassins. Helped kick sombra to the curb too. You might find that to be a bit of fun.
Aww, I wanted to see the turtle destruction wave, otherwise known as...
KAMEHAMEHA!
A number of problems I see already. For one, Jason never introduced himself, so what was his name being mentioned there for? Secondly, where in the world did Hyde come from? There was no explanation in the story... Well, still gonna read more regardless.