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Yay patience is the best virtue especially when it comes to this story hopeto see the next chapter soon.
I have to ask for access, was it intended?
7334980 no, usually people see it anyway, I'll fix this.
7335033
Okay, now it's working.
The chapter was a quite nice setup for the action we're sure to get in the next ones, but there was one part that irritated me greatly;
Now count how many times there's "control" in that and see what I mean.
7335074 I honestly didn't notice it when writing that part. Thanks for pointing it out.
The comics showed that boxing exists in Equestria, so that bit there was odd... ah well. Back to reading.
Caleb grunted, “That would be nice.”
What would be nice? There was nothing pre-ceding that statement.