Derpy isn't perfect, nopony is after all. Yet she still can't hide the feeling that she isn't loved. Calvin, a human who has stayed with the kind mare for a year now has always been there for Derpy when she needed it.
Please keep going with the story there are not any derpy stories like this and I fucking love it. Please keep going and if you can make them just a little longer please.
Honestly, I think it might be best to leave it as a one-shot. It seems to have the quick pace of a one, and I'm not sure how you'd really continue it after hitting pretty much everything in enough detail!
Ok, I need to address this. This is an issue on previous stories of mine as well. Whoever is leaving a downvote on every single positive comment. Fuck you. I work hard and if people like my work, they have every right to leave a comment and say so. Stop being a debby downer.
Hey hey loved the story track and a favourite just one thing: "She hopped up onto the couch and waited for Andrew to lay back before climbing up onto his chest and nuzzling into him." Might want to take a look at that one again other than that good work :D
I'm always game for some Derpy lovin' but I must say now that this start is a bit rushed.
And I see we have some serial downvoters here. Such a sad life it must be, having no greater purpose than to click little downward thumb buttons on everyone's thoughts like a lonely monkey in a cage fruitlessly flinging its feces at its happier kin in the next exhibit over.
Oh, poor insecure Derpy. Just because you have screwy eyesight and no depth perception doesn't mean that you're stupid or ugly. It means that you should wear an eyepatch when carrying the mail so you don't run into things, silly.
“Your eyes are one of your best traits. It sets you apart from other mares, that is what makes you special. You’ve got the looks and the mind. Don’t let anypony tell you that you are not loved, because you are. Dinky loves you, I love you.” Calvin let the last part slip out of his mouth.
Calvin: if someone can't see you as beautiful in spite of some physical deficiency, then they do not have perfect love. If they can only accept beauty as seen by the eyes alone, then they shall be impoverished in doing so.
That was… quick.
Best trigger warnings ever...
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Please keep going with the story there are not any derpy stories like this and I fucking love it. Please keep going and if you can make them just a little longer please.
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If you read my other stories, I'm not one for long chapters but I'll see what I can do.
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I know I was just thinking maybe like 1,500 to 2,000or 2,500
I need more!
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Duley noted! I'll have another chapter out soon hopefully. I don't have a date but I'd say maybe within the next week.
Loved it. There's not enough love given to good ol' Ditsy.
Keep up the good work, mate!
5607826 I had to "define" the black text since I was on mobile. Something was funny about that.
Define "cuddle muffin"
Daww :3
Honestly, I think it might be best to leave it as a one-shot. It seems to have the quick pace of a one, and I'm not sure how you'd really continue it after hitting pretty much everything in enough detail!
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Oh trust me, I can build off of it. Just read some of my other stories.
Ok, I need to address this. This is an issue on previous stories of mine as well. Whoever is leaving a downvote on every single positive comment. Fuck you. I work hard and if people like my work, they have every right to leave a comment and say so. Stop being a debby downer.
Hey hey loved the story track and a favourite just one thing:
"She hopped up onto the couch and waited for Andrew to lay back before climbing up onto his chest and nuzzling into him."
Might want to take a look at that one again other than that good work :D
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Thanks, I'll get on that! Next chapter is in the works!
i liked this a lot. im always a sucker for sweet fics, especially the ones with derpy in it. why the sad tag though? you got something planned for it?
anyways i like it very much. gifsec.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/03/yes-gif.gif
THE FEEEEEEEEELS!!!!!!!!!!
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I figured you'd like it Dibs.
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Idk why but I can't get into Luna lament. And also bon boys lament still wasn't finished...or it ends in an odd way anyway...
I like to imagine that ,when word first gets around, Taylor is enjoying a sandwich with Bon Bon and responds with this.i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/539/302/a33.gif
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Nope, its not finished yet. I've had midterms and other shit to do. Also, I have writer's block.
That was cute, can't wait to read the other chapter now! :D
I'm always game for some Derpy lovin' but I must say now that this start is a bit rushed.
And I see we have some serial downvoters here. Such a sad life it must be, having no greater purpose than to click little downward thumb buttons on everyone's thoughts like a lonely monkey in a cage fruitlessly flinging its feces at its happier kin in the next exhibit over.
D'aww factor present, though a bit on the low side. Will keep reading. Rushed romance...ehh I've seen it work before.
Oh, poor insecure Derpy.
Just because you have screwy eyesight and no depth perception doesn't mean that you're stupid or ugly. It means that you should wear an eyepatch when carrying the mail so you don't run into things, silly.
Yeah, ummm...wow, I was expectin'...I dunno but not that
I figured there'd be, ya know, some build to it
Who is this Andrew you speak of?
5613869 no need to fear this Debby downer, I'll just up vote wherever there is a down
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Sometimes it works.
It was cute and yeh who is the Andrew
I like this. It's very good and as so much heart warming to it.
I love the story but their are some errors but otherwise it's pretty good.👍👍
Don't delete it, I finally found love. Please don't do this to me. 😢
The mythical Andrew makes his appearance!