Derpy isn't perfect, nopony is after all. Yet she still can't hide the feeling that she isn't loved. Calvin, a human who has stayed with the kind mare for a year now has always been there for Derpy when she needed it.
i honestly hate your Sparkler, even if she is a scientist, she can´t just do that to an intelligent creature, even if it is supposed to be like that, i can´t like that right now.
Somehow the moment Sparkler arrived, was the moment i didn´t liked the story anymore.
5661321 Let me explain this. I guess it wasn't stated quite clearly. Sparkler thinks humans are the equivalent of talking dogs. If the dogs talked but still acted like a normal dog. She thinks Calvin is just another animal rather than an intelligent lifeform like that of ponies. It becomes a little clearer in the next chapter.
5661337 well okay, i can give it a chance, but it reminds me badly at another fanfiction, where the Humans really are animals, and they are forced to rut them too, like zoophilia.
Okay i know this is a bit different, but i guess it is weird to think Derpy would do so less about the whole situation, but maybe the next chapter explains it more.
I guess i just don´t like the way she is acting around Calvin, probably because i don´t know enough about her right now, usually i can accept it if i have a good explanation. I don´t know if i can see it the way, that Calvin could be seen like a talking "animal", i guess it would help if i would know the story with Bon Bon, maybe there are a few good informations.
“I want you to rut me.” Sparkler said, hooding her eyes.
at least she doesn´t seems to understood what her mother meant
I. Freaking. Love. This. Story. I could read a light novel's worth of this universe and author, at least from what I've read thus. Love this setting and writing so far.
(Man, I really hope infidelity stays the hell out of this story)
Then, suddenly, a Japanese harem comedy happened out of nowhere. All that's missing is Calvin rocketing off into space on fountaining nosebleeds every time he catches a glimpse of anything remotely exciting and a resident samurai mare to chase him off with a sword every time one of the girls comes on to him.
Well, that escalated... none, actually. She was full throttle from the get go. I wonder how accepted that is in Equestria.
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Run Calvin Run!
This is awesome. Please keep it up
Throw
Sparkler
Out
A
Window
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DERPY HELP CALVIN !!!!!!
i honestly hate your Sparkler, even if she is a scientist, she can´t just do that to an intelligent creature, even if it is supposed to be like that, i can´t like that right now.
Somehow the moment Sparkler arrived, was the moment i didn´t liked the story anymore.
5661321
Let me explain this. I guess it wasn't stated quite clearly.
Sparkler thinks humans are the equivalent of talking dogs. If the dogs talked but still acted like a normal dog. She thinks Calvin is just another animal rather than an intelligent lifeform like that of ponies. It becomes a little clearer in the next chapter.
5661337 well okay, i can give it a chance, but it reminds me badly at another fanfiction, where the Humans really are animals, and they are forced to rut them too, like zoophilia.
Okay i know this is a bit different, but i guess it is weird to think Derpy would do so less about the whole situation, but maybe the next chapter explains it more.
I guess i just don´t like the way she is acting around Calvin, probably because i don´t know enough about her right now, usually i can accept it if i have a good explanation. I don´t know if i can see it the way, that Calvin could be seen like a talking "animal", i guess it would help if i would know the story with Bon Bon, maybe there are a few good informations.
at least she doesn´t seems to understood what her mother meant
I. Freaking. Love. This. Story. I could read a light novel's worth of this universe and author, at least from what I've read thus. Love this setting and writing so far.
(Man, I really hope infidelity stays the hell out of this story)
Sparkler is kinda spoiling this.
More!!! Russian needs more!!! *Pulls out AK47* Zasha and I enjoy the story!
Sparkler you're a fucking pervert go decect a human corspe instead.
Well saw that one coming!
Then, suddenly, a Japanese harem comedy happened out of nowhere. All that's missing is Calvin rocketing off into space on fountaining nosebleeds every time he catches a glimpse of anything remotely exciting and a resident samurai mare to chase him off with a sword every time one of the girls comes on to him.
5707090 and giant octopus tentacles
Funny but interesting