Orchid?...that name seem familiar. A giant Pony? man... it really long time now i hear it again. from movie pacific rim. also Sea pony, I love it. A first fiction about sea pony!
"Orchid, who's my big pony?!" I brought the rake down across Orchid's muzzle. Orchid's ears flicked, shooting water across the boat. "I am--"
5601400 You know? i never read fiction about sea pony about this but i like it. I always want to read about sea pony but i never hear or maybe seeing it.
5602135 if i ever feel what wrong? just remember, there are people who fap to cartoon ponies. fapping on pony isn't so useless. pedophile are worst. Also here
5602144 Yes I know of that part of the fandom. All fandoms will have those kind of people. It's just not something I like. I beg to differ on the statements you have said. The first implies you are ejaculating on an miniature equine. The second is your matter of option.
I would also request that you refrain from linking adult content onto the site. It is against the rules.
Wow, I was really surprised when someone linked this one to me. Nice to see someone using the shark tail design that seemed so popular. The actual artist who does these pictures about the character is AlloyRabbit. You can see more of them right here.
This story has some promise, though, and I'd like to see more. It's similar to the original in the basic idea you can see it here for a quick reference, but it looks like you have your own setting design going. I'm impressed, and I'd like to see where this goes.
Just as a reader's note though: "I walked back to the cabin, I'd kept a surefire way to get her out in there. "
Seems like a strange sentence to me. Would you consider rewriting that one as something like "I walked back to the cabin where I'd kept a surefire way to lure her out"? You could even slow down the pace a little and describe the main character getting inside and maybe noting a personal item he had in the boat to build some more backstory or take a moment to describe where he actually had the bag, like a fishing bait box labeled "Emergency Kaiju Bait." He reaches in and pulls out the bag of chips and stares at it for a second before he finally nods and starts shaking it around on his way to check over the stern for the pony.
Orchid?...that name seem familiar.
A giant Pony? man... it really long time now i hear it again.
from movie pacific rim. also Sea pony, I love it.
A first fiction about sea pony!
*Heart Attack*
i.imgur.com/xe1Mc9o.jpg
"To battle monsters, we had to create monsters of our own"
5601321
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5601400 You know? i never read fiction about sea pony about this but i like it.
I always want to read about sea pony but i never hear or maybe seeing it.
So much D'aww.
Kinda reminds me of Sunless Seas.
5601402 5601551 That not be a Sea Pony. That be a Kaiju Pony!
5601676 https://derpiboo.ru/tags/kaiju+pony Here you go.
derpicdn.net/img/2014/11/11/762638/large.jpeg
i am gonna get Heart attack soon...if... about...over...cute.
5601908 And here you go.
derpicdn.net/img/view/2014/7/11/672667__safe_oc_cute_glowing+eyes_micro_hand_nom_biting_artist-colon-alloyrabbit_kaiju+pony.jpeg
5601924 FFFUUCCCKK
5601927 Lololololololololololol Have some more!th05.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2014/181/3/8/snack_time_by_alloyrabbit-d7oq074.jpg
th07.deviantart.net/fs70/PRE/f/2015/020/1/3/orchid_plays_tennis_by_alloyrabbit-d8eqilu.jpg
th02.deviantart.net/fs71/PRE/f/2014/256/4/d/orchake_by_alloyrabbit-d7z3bs1.jpg
5601938 *More heart attack*
i.imgur.com/xe1Mc9o.jpg
5601938 Hey, dude. Check rule 34. she have a nice pussy.
5602118 What the hell is wrong with you?!
5602115 And for the killing blow!
fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2014/173/8/b/the_most_adorable_nightmare_by_alloyrabbit-d7ni44x.jpg
5602118 ... ew. Why would you say such a thing?
5602135
if i ever feel what wrong? just remember, there are people who fap to cartoon ponies.
fapping on pony isn't so useless.
pedophile are worst.
Also here
5602144 5602135 Well, now that weird, now cartoon pony have more civil rights then real womans. LOL!
5602144 Yes I know of that part of the fandom. All fandoms will have those kind of people. It's just not something I like.
I beg to differ on the statements you have said. The first implies you are ejaculating on an miniature equine. The second is your matter of option.
I would also request that you refrain from linking adult content onto the site. It is against the rules.
Sweet Celestia this is amazing!!
5602173 Yeah, The rule, but, why i other guy post 18+ about Glida? anyway i think this story gonna be Romantic somehow. i read Artist person draw about Orchid also this fiction seem...i don't know. feeling. look at this... Bad kiss
fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2014/264/1/0/orchid_is_bad_at_kissing_by_alloyrabbit-d803dsz.jpg
*FUCKK! CUTE*
5602173 Sorry, next time i will check
5605754 Thank you.
5601321
hmm, nnnnnnng, heart attack...
Wow, I was really surprised when someone linked this one to me. Nice to see someone using the shark tail design that seemed so popular. The actual artist who does these pictures about the character is AlloyRabbit. You can see more of them right here.
This story has some promise, though, and I'd like to see more. It's similar to the original in the basic idea you can see it here for a quick reference, but it looks like you have your own setting design going. I'm impressed, and I'd like to see where this goes.
Just as a reader's note though: "I walked back to the cabin, I'd kept a surefire way to get her out in there. "
Seems like a strange sentence to me. Would you consider rewriting that one as something like "I walked back to the cabin where I'd kept a surefire way to lure her out"? You could even slow down the pace a little and describe the main character getting inside and maybe noting a personal item he had in the boat to build some more backstory or take a moment to describe where he actually had the bag, like a fishing bait box labeled "Emergency Kaiju Bait." He reaches in and pulls out the bag of chips and stares at it for a second before he finally nods and starts shaking it around on his way to check over the stern for the pony.
Huh. Ponific Rim? A peculiar concept. Let's see what happens.
(I don't even want to imagine how the kids will work this time around...)
~In coming!- heavy (tf2)
Sir Hat, I don't know if you're still gonna continue this one but it's awesome so far! I'd like to red more!
I love this story. A bit wierd, but yeah, i love what it's about :D