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Derpy and The Doctor

While out on a picnic, a changeling stumbles upon the Whooves family. Derpy, Doctor, and Dinky. Now, Doctor Whooves has to find out who's who before the changeling can do some real damage. That's about it. Quit reading this description and go read the story. Why are you still reading this? Quit it!

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TheMutatedDeity

TheMutatedDeity #1 · Feb 5th, 2015 · · ·

Hmm. Well, the story looks like it could use a bit of editing here and there, but I don't really want to point anything out that I'm sure you can find on your own without knowing if you'd like help pointing out the errors. Other than the errors, I think that you have a slightly wobbly story that could use a little bit of support.

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