All I ever wanted was to be recognized. I was Celestia's most prized pupil and loved it more than anything. But everything changed when SHE was born. Now I'm back and my sister Twilight Sparkle and everyone else will pay for what they did to me.
Nice chapter was not expecting dusk to being a softie, i am still confused i thought Rising Dusk already knew about what Celestia planned for Twilight, thanks to his spy that is in Canterlot castle
Well, if you look at the facts. Why would they continue to talk about him? After running away they more than likely shut up and never spoke about him again else Twilight would began to wonder. Not only that, but do you seriously think that a family that threats one of their own like that would even care if he/she one day disappears? I don't think so. Just look at Harry Potter and his adoptive family.
P.S. Bro, this story is so bucking incredible. It keeps me glued to the screen wondering 'what happens next' and when I reach the end of the chapter pray to Cthulh or whoever is up there -The Author of my life? Maybe. Anyway.- that there is another chapter waiting to be read. Alas, I have find the end. Now is the moment were I began to think ways to get myself into a cryogenic pod and left for a few hundred years till all the awesome unfinished stories of today would be finished by the time I wake up.
P.S.S wasn't really expecting clop, but damn now I got a bonner and I'm in my car... I hate you and admire you right now.
7284544 true but Night Light Sparkle unintentionaly squeled to twilight without knowing that led to the whole scene of chapter 9, and if you read the end of said chapter it clearly states that 1 of Rising Dusk's spies that was in the castle managed to hear EVERYTHING that was said in throne room and yet said spy did not mention anything to Dusk of the information other then Celestia hiring 4 would-be assassins, 2 of which died after their encounter with their target
Yes, indeed. But it was AFTER the incident in the gala. Obviously they would talk about him when he came back and the spy was put there after the Changeling attack obviously. Since Dusk found Chrysalis after the invasion and so her spies were his.
P.S. She may have heard that before the gala though, but that would be easily because Glimmer told them about why she was 'suddenly' coming back, or Celestia told them before hand-hoof-whatever. Things always move behind the scene xD.
Hmmmmm... It would. But maybe it don't. After all, she became an enemy of Twilight and went as far as to alter the time line. Why would she side with Dusk? Make some background ideas maybe? Like changing the plot line as to why Sunburst went to Camterlot. Who knows, the possibilities are endless and it is up to the author to give us what we last expect. Sunset Shimmer though, seems to have more chances. Seeing as she have experienced the same as Dusk. Yet, once more. Let the author surprise us with his ideas.
P.S. Just wonder how Dusk would fight Discord though... Scorpan? Maybe even Grogar? Or reviving Sombra? Secret artifact? Changing him to his side? Blackmailing? Beat him senseless with an under hoofted tactic?
Fuck, author! See! This is why I hate waiting! The waiting is killing meeeeeeeee!
YAY New Chapter, I love this story more than what the fish say about innocent juice
Nice chapter was not expecting dusk to being a softie, i am still confused i thought Rising Dusk already knew about what Celestia planned for Twilight, thanks to his spy that is in Canterlot castle
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Well, if you look at the facts. Why would they continue to talk about him? After running away they more than likely shut up and never spoke about him again else Twilight would began to wonder. Not only that, but do you seriously think that a family that threats one of their own like that would even care if he/she one day disappears? I don't think so. Just look at Harry Potter and his adoptive family.
P.S. Bro, this story is so bucking incredible. It keeps me glued to the screen wondering 'what happens next' and when I reach the end of the chapter pray to Cthulh or whoever is up there -The Author of my life? Maybe. Anyway.- that there is another chapter waiting to be read. Alas, I have find the end. Now is the moment were I began to think ways to get myself into a cryogenic pod and left for a few hundred years till all the awesome unfinished stories of today would be finished by the time I wake up.
P.S.S wasn't really expecting clop, but damn now I got a bonner and I'm in my car... I hate you and admire you right now.
P.S.S.S. As a wise man once said... MOAAAR!
7284544 true but Night Light Sparkle unintentionaly squeled to twilight without knowing that led to the whole scene of chapter 9, and if you read the end of said chapter it clearly states that 1 of Rising Dusk's spies that was in the castle managed to hear EVERYTHING that was said in throne room and yet said spy did not mention anything to Dusk of the information other then Celestia hiring 4 would-be assassins, 2 of which died after their encounter with their target
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Yes, indeed. But it was AFTER the incident in the gala. Obviously they would talk about him when he came back and the spy was put there after the Changeling attack obviously. Since Dusk found Chrysalis after the invasion and so her spies were his.
P.S. She may have heard that before the gala though, but that would be easily because Glimmer told them about why she was 'suddenly' coming back, or Celestia told them before hand-hoof-whatever. Things always move behind the scene xD.
7284579 either way Night Light stilled squelled like de slutty and whorse like bitch that he, his wife, his 1st daugther and his daugther-in-law is
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Yes, indeed. That is a fact ma bro.
7284610 i hope starlight glimmer show up and joins team Dusk
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Hmmmmm... It would. But maybe it don't. After all, she became an enemy of Twilight and went as far as to alter the time line. Why would she side with Dusk? Make some background ideas maybe? Like changing the plot line as to why Sunburst went to Camterlot. Who knows, the possibilities are endless and it is up to the author to give us what we last expect. Sunset Shimmer though, seems to have more chances. Seeing as she have experienced the same as Dusk. Yet, once more. Let the author surprise us with his ideas.
P.S. Just wonder how Dusk would fight Discord though... Scorpan? Maybe even Grogar? Or reviving Sombra? Secret artifact? Changing him to his side? Blackmailing? Beat him senseless with an under hoofted tactic?
Fuck, author! See! This is why I hate waiting! The waiting is killing meeeeeeeee!
Pleese sah may ah have sum mor?
But in all seriousness keep it up. This is an amazing story!
7284856 true glimmer would a pain to deal with 4 Dusk seeing as he is twilight's older brother
When is the next chapter coming out?
This is fantastic can't wait for more. Keep up the great work
BEGIN THE CHANTS!!!!!!MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR MOAR!!!!!
7740206 YES!
Are you just taking a break from writing or is the story just dead for the time being?
New chapters ????