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6403746 I'm busted, I love Steven Universe.
6406805 Really, You kill Shining armor just so that you can make him into a guardian?
6406945...
Wooooooww seriously? Question were the heck did that ghost come from? According to your story the travelers light cannot reach equestria..
6406945 I can see how you feel that way. Him becoming a Guardian is something I've had planned since the beginning, before I had even thought to write in Daring Do. The idea behind this was that I needed a Guardian with a real connection to the world they're trying to protect.
6407561 She's been there the whole time. She was captured by Xarksis, but then she escaped and hid on the Mischief Maker. She didn't just magically appear.
Ok ill go with that but again you wrote that the travelers light cannot reach that far how is that ghost functioning without that orb thing that has some of the travelers light?
Also if the ghost did escape how come the other ghost's did not sense the escaped one?
6407571 If so, then you could have used one of the named guards that died, or even a changeling. Sometimes it makes a little more sense to use an oc for this kind of situation than a named character. Otherwise we end up with characters that are needlessly overpowered, Like Twilight wearing a set of runic enhanced mjinior Armor(the armor from Halo) and her magical abilities tripled by a clean version of the alicorn amulet. Now that my mary sue complex has run it's course.
If you keep along this path, could you weaken the amount of magical power he can wield in return for the upgrade. Death should have at least SOME repercussions. or if ya feel really mean. erase some of his memories.
However. it's all up to you. I'm just giving you my opinion on the matter. besides the angst above. Keep up the good work, I love the story so far.
Shining as a Guardian. Unexpected, but welcome.
What no answere to my question ?
6409195 sorry, was working when you asked and it slipped my mind lol
Anyway, Ghosts don't need constant proximity to the Traveler to function. They hold a charge of Light and being close to the Traveler recharges them. This comes from the Grimoire card 'Ghost Fragment: Cabal' which is of a Ghost who stowed away on a ship to Mars in search of his Guardian. However, the harsh wastes made it an impossible search and thus he resigned himself to spying on the Cabal instead. After an indeterminate amount of time, his Light fails and he shuts down.
It's unclear how long Ghosts last away from the Traveler, but it can be assumed that it is a fairly long time.
Of course, I could always say she survived on the dew of a ginseng leaf and the energy of the universe.
6409286 well ill go with that cant wait w8 for the next chapter!
Shining Armor a guardian... wow.
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Slow down there, cowboy. We all fear the Gary Stu, but no need to jump the gun. Let's not forget that becoming a guardian is a straight upgrade to a human/ exo/ awoken because the have no powers naturally. Honestly, becoming a guardian for Shining Armor may do nothing more than elementally charge his magic and let him use light.
I say we just see what the author does first before we start throwing around suggestions. Beside's, this wasn't one of those kinds of character deaths. The repercussions don't have to affect him like that either. He's a Guardian now. His life as he knows it is pretty much over, he'll have to leave Equestria for Sol System, how will his relationships be strained because of this eventuality? That combine with his future prospects really are enough for me, but I want to see what the author will do.
6410672 Not necessarily. I know it's a bit of a stretch, but it's possible he could stay on Equus. It depends a bit on that orb thingy, but his ghost might be able to stay recharged from that. And if the orb ever needed to recharge, well, the trip to earth and back doesn't seem to be that bad.
The other thing is, it is very possible that the Darkness and it's associated forces will now have much more interest in Equus. The Vex are already there, and now the Fallen (or at least some of them) know about it. And if any of them make a push for Equus, Equestria is going to need an experienced and capable military commander to figure out how to marshal the local forces against them.
Moar? Moar.
Dear Teejaeche,
This story is the epitome of all under rated stories. There is no doubt in my mind that if word of this story were to get out you would have close to one thousand likes within the day. Every time I see this story update I check the featured box, hoping to see that you get the respect and appreciation that you deserve. A good number of the stories that go up in that box aren't even half as good as this story you've written.
While some say what happened to Shining Armor was out of the blue, it made my skin crawl with anticipation. Looking back the set up was all there for someone to become a guardian, I'm shocked I hadn't thought of it before. The one true question left on that road though is, what kind of Guardian will Shining be?
I eagerly await future chapters to find out... and to see how everyone reacts to him being alive. It's gonna be great, I just know it.
Your ever faithful reader,
DAUNTEDSUPERIER
P.S.: No idea why I wrote this comment like a letter, I'm half asleep as I write this. Just never give up, this story is too damn good to die.
6473162 lol thanks!
Oh shit...
Shining's a guardian now!?
SUPER SHEILD POWAHS! AWAAAY!!
Well, I don't know. That question seems to imply you are too dumb to live. Are you too dumb to live, bub? Think carefully before answering, little pony.
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Inb4 it's not Shining.
Okay the thought of Vex Guardians is terrifying but while half of me hopes they dont ever add something like that to the game the other half is thinking about the exciting challenge such a enemy would provide and how badass a fight that would be.
I thought that unbound Ghost would find a new Guardian in Equus glad to see I was right Shining Armor is going to be awesome as a Guardian.
HOLY SHIT
Haell fucking yes