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6653979 Surely they were doing so in jest lol
Best cliff hanger ever!
Sniff...this cliffhanger is the best I have ever been seen...i want more...
A Juggernaut huh? Ive run the simulation, its tough but it ain't invincible. Stay with the Titan he'll know what to do.
I really really really hope Eris is at the Tower to creep the hell outta Twilight.
I also think it'd be funny to see Holliday freaking out over an adorable purple pony and wanting to pinch Twi's cheeks :P
I have to ask. Will we see any of the Reef in this? Perhaps some interactions with Lord Shaxx and/or Lord Saladin?
What's the timeline for this again? Is Crota dead? Is Skolas dead? It's definitely pre-TTK though, but with the story we got from that DLC I have to wonder if this series of events have an affect on Eris and the Queen's plan.
One last question After the Vex threat is over, will we be seeing Oryx? I know the Vex seemed bad, but the Hive were actually the worst threats to the entirety of the universe.
Now that is a good entrance.
6654461 easy there, cowboy lol
I'm still debating the time line, but it is definitely after Crota's end, but before The Taken King so there will some creeper action from Eris.
Don't think she'll meet Lord Saladin (nor do I believe he'd be interested in meeting her) but she will definitely be meeting Lord Shaxx seeing as he's on the Consensus.
Not sure about how Holliday will handle seeing that the alien princess is a pony. I'll figure it out when I get there.
Finally, this story ends once I resolve the conflict with the Vex; there will be tears, laughter, some singing and new friends will be made. I don't plan on a sequel story at this time, but I won't be leaving that door closed, you have my word.
That... That was the most beautiful cliffhanger I've ever seen...
It's like hanging off the edge of a cliff in a 4 star hotel!
6654881 If you need more guardians then I can supply the three I have on my account.
*demented growling sounds not unlike that of Gollum* NeEd mOaR give us MOAR!!!
HE'S ALIVE! YEAH! NO VEX KILLS ARMOR AND GETS AWAY WITH IT!
Just finished the stoey up to this point and i must admit im moderately impressed with your work. Lots of interesting plot points and story poc changes. Your new classes of vex are fascinating and they add a fun new element to the story.
I am definitly intreigued by how you handle the fallen and changelings and focus on a redemption of sorts.
Also just the fact this is an adeventure sort of story rather than a comedy or rom com is a nice twist of sorts.
On a final note it seems that your bringing more fire teams to combat the vex which will be an interesting twist of fate especially if you bring in some of your fans guardian teams. If that is the case i would happily volunteer fireteam Ignition for you and include their back story's. Since this seems pretty house of wolves I even remember their gear set ups.
I will say on a last note a disapproval I have is not knowing what gear they have beyond "Vanguard issue". Seems bland considering many of us can go just equip the old armor. Having visual reference would make mentally imaging gospel, aveline, and Sampson a little more fun
6859385 lol nice running commentary.
Shining Armor: "I'm BACK!!!" Also MORE!!!!
6959900 got a better idea? Meters aren't my forte sadly.
6961243 Well there are a thousand meters in a kilometre, and a meter is approximately 3 and a bit feet. There is somewhere between 5000 and 5500 feet in a mile (I was too lazy to go look this up) and Denver- one of the highest cities in the world- is only a mile above sea level. A standard mountain is approximately 6000-7000 feet above sea level at the top. The conversion factor for km to miles is something like 1.6 km/mi, so Denver is approximately 1.6 km above sea level. I'm assuming those ruins aren't at the top of the mountain, so the altitude difference should be similar to Denver.
Just to put that in perspective, 850 km multiplied by 1.6 is 1360. 1360 miles above sea level. 1360 multiplied by 5280 (I looked that up just now) is 7,180,800 feet above sea level. Seven million! Considering a passenger jet's cruising altitude is only 20,000-30,000... Well you get the idea.
6928544 Also: SPOILERS!
6962796 Shining Armor: OOH! Wunderbar!
6962796 Shining Armor: INVOKEM GIGANTUS INMY PANTUS!!!
6962779
5,280 feet in a mile to be precise.
6962796 Shining Armor: I'm alive! ALIVE!!!
6962888 Lmfao. Are you a comedian?
6963006 No. I was quoting some tf2 medic outtakes. Many of them seemed to be from a halloween update. That was one quote.
6962894 numbers... thou hath slain me!
6962779 perhaps I should run between 3000 - 4000 m. That's about 13,000 feet at the highest, if the Andes are anything to go on.
Shining Armor fighting that Vex Stalker(good name choice BTW along with the Vex Juggernaut) was badass and a nice bit of payback.
This was a awesome chapter with so many great moments and feels and I like how you write Daring Do,Chrysalis and Star Swirl their great characters.
Also that was one of the best entrances and cliffhangers ever of all time.