Dear Celestia, it feels my should is dislocated! No, you pervs, I just got up, and as I read more of this story, them more the pain set in. I sleep in the weirdest positions. Better than sleeping with my neck at an angle and getting a crick. Any who. Please, sir, may I have some more?
5941717 I wish I were that lucky. My sex life is deader than disco. I won't lie. If it were Celestia and Luna, then I would more than likely do what Sunset Shimmer did. In a strange way, certain types of pain turn me on. Not whipping and such, more like physical exhaustion. The lactic acid burning my muscles, but that is only in the MOST extreme cases when I go beyond a certain point.
I actually discovered that little bit of info during my Sophomore year in the weight room. Long story short, I came VERY close to dying of embarrassment.
As your eyes clear, you look around the room and realize that all her clothes are still here.
That can either mean two things; she's still somewhere in the house, naked, or she returned to wherever she came from, not only naked, but looking like she had a good time.
Well this chapter was rather pleasing I must admit,after so much beating and shaming it's nice to get a chapter when sunset is alowed to fell at least wanted and apreciated by someone
6090337 because I know lingerie. I don't think it's any of your business but iI used to work in adult novelty store specializing in bdsm gear. That was a question iI got a lot. "Why don't you carry satin corsets?" Is there any particular reason for questioning me?
I mean, they do make them, but they aren't really a bdsm garment.
There was never any Futashy. I made it very clear, in the comments of the previous story, that the ending of that story did NOT involve Futashy, and that I was disturbed by how everyone's mind just automatically went there.
Just to make it absolutely clear: I HATE FUTA and will never write it except as a joke (and never as clop).
I have mixed feels about this. Though it has pornographic material, it doesn't focus very much on the smutty parts and spends a lot of time disparaging the reader.
She studies me silently for a minute. "And now you're trying to guilt me into having sex with you," she says.
Let's...let's make each other feel special, just for tonight.
It just wasn't what I was expecting. It's sad and bittersweet (my favorite kind of sweet I think), yet charming and hopeful. "You" is a special kind of dynamic character who weighs decisions against turbulent emotions. Sunset is self-deprecating, probably equally depressed (esp in light of her recent life/realizations about her life). One thing that made this really sad for me was that even though the sex started to be a very sweet, tender scene, Sunset still got the short end of the stick... what with "you" losing control and thrusting too hard and then coming inside her. Sigh: and just after she finally had a say and was genuinely enjoying herself for once. Anyway, I hope there'll be more ^__^
You know, I can't help but imagine the second chapter of this takes place chronologically after Sunset Shimmer's Naked Marathon. With the way I see it, Hi-Def was blessed enough to witness several glances of Sunny's glorious, mostly-naked body, and thus his idea for the porno sprung forth.
6243880 This isn't one of those stories that HAS a "finish". It's just single standalone stories with a common recurring theme. As such, this will update whenever I feel like writing porn about Sunset Shimmer.
6244399 ...I don't think I can explain it any more clearly than I already have.
There is no "end" to this story. Every chapter of it is a complete story by itself. It's something I'll be adding to when I feel like it, and each time I add a chapter, that chapter is also a complete story by itself.You know, like an episode.
6382549 It is not "pretty much dead". I am on a writing hiatus at the moment for personal reasons. And it's INCREDIBLY RUDE of you to ask about a story status in that particular manner. (Seriously, people being as rude as you are a large part of WHY I'm on hiatus right now...)
Is it bad I inserted Adachi from persona 4 instead of myself. I find myself (persona 4, P4 ultimax and the Equestria girls trilogy spoilers) shipping a couple reformed nutters.
Dear Celestia, it feels my should is dislocated! No, you pervs, I just got up, and as I read more of this story, them more the pain set in. I sleep in the weirdest positions. Better than sleeping with my neck at an angle and getting a crick. Any who. Please, sir, may I have some more?
Aww, that was so sad.
The footjob put me off, since that's one thing I just don't get and is a major turn off for me. Other than that, enjoyable.
5941717 I wish I were that lucky. My sex life is deader than disco. I won't lie. If it were Celestia and Luna, then I would more than likely do what Sunset Shimmer did. In a strange way, certain types of pain turn me on. Not whipping and such, more like physical exhaustion. The lactic acid burning my muscles, but that is only in the MOST extreme cases when I go beyond a certain point.
I actually discovered that little bit of info during my Sophomore year in the weight room. Long story short, I came VERY close to dying of embarrassment.
And then, nine months later, you learn the joys of child support payments.
Hot...
5942990 Yeah, that's what happens when the sub isn't actually into BDSM...the whole reason BDSM works is because the sub gets off on the pain.
5941711 Indeed.
That can either mean two things; she's still somewhere in the house, naked, or she returned to wherever she came from, not only naked, but looking like she had a good time.
Stuff like that makes me laugh.
Does anyone else sing the title in their head when they read it?
Well this chapter was rather pleasing I must admit,after so much beating and shaming it's nice to get a chapter when sunset is alowed to fell at least wanted and apreciated by someone
5990238 Not really no. Sex is weird and people are weird therefore it is normal. Great logic eh? XD
Am I the only one that thought the footjob/sleep molestation scene was kinda hot?
6090337 because I know lingerie. I don't think it's any of your business but iI used to work in adult novelty store specializing in bdsm gear. That was a question iI got a lot. "Why don't you carry satin corsets?" Is there any particular reason for questioning me?
I mean, they do make them, but they aren't really a bdsm garment.
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There was never any Futashy. I made it very clear, in the comments of the previous story, that the ending of that story did NOT involve Futashy, and that I was disturbed by how everyone's mind just automatically went there.
Just to make it absolutely clear: I HATE FUTA and will never write it except as a joke (and never as clop).
6124002 The word you're looking for is "original character".
I have mixed feels about this. Though it has pornographic material, it doesn't focus very much on the smutty parts and spends a lot of time disparaging the reader.
It just wasn't what I was expecting. It's sad and bittersweet (my favorite kind of sweet I think), yet charming and hopeful. "You" is a special kind of dynamic character who weighs decisions against turbulent emotions. Sunset is self-deprecating, probably equally depressed (esp in light of her recent life/realizations about her life).
One thing that made this really sad for me was that even though the sex started to be a very sweet, tender scene, Sunset still got the short end of the stick... what with "you" losing control and thrusting too hard and then coming inside her. Sigh: and just after she finally had a say and was genuinely enjoying herself for once.
Anyway, I hope there'll be more ^__^
You know, I can't help but imagine the second chapter of this takes place chronologically after Sunset Shimmer's Naked Marathon. With the way I see it, Hi-Def was blessed enough to witness several glances of Sunny's glorious, mostly-naked body, and thus his idea for the porno sprung forth.
This story is so Awesome, when will you finish it?
6243880 This isn't one of those stories that HAS a "finish". It's just single standalone stories with a common recurring theme. As such, this will update whenever I feel like writing porn about Sunset Shimmer.
6244223 What does that mean exactly?
6244399 ...I don't think I can explain it any more clearly than I already have.
There is no "end" to this story. Every chapter of it is a complete story by itself. It's something I'll be adding to when I feel like it, and each time I add a chapter, that chapter is also a complete story by itself.You know, like an episode.
6244433 I see, so you'll make the next chapter soon, if you are, I'll wait then, good luck.
6245155 That isn't what I said at all, but whatever.
6245319 Okay then, can't wait.
So my friend, how have you been doing?
I upvoted it because it's s great story and I didn't like it having 666 votes.
so is this still being worked on or is it pretty much dead
6382549 It is not "pretty much dead". I am on a writing hiatus at the moment for personal reasons. And it's INCREDIBLY RUDE of you to ask about a story status in that particular manner. (Seriously, people being as rude as you are a large part of WHY I'm on hiatus right now...)
6382749 okay great just checking
Beautiful. Thank you. I love Sunset Shimmer. It felt like she was really there with me.
6624716 What about second person lesbian stories?
Is it bad I inserted Adachi from persona 4 instead of myself. I find myself (persona 4, P4 ultimax and the Equestria girls trilogy spoilers) shipping a couple reformed nutters.
I vote that was Flash Sentry doing Sunset!
Damn man why'd you have to make it end so sad?
I would very much love if there was a continuation of this specific part where they are reunited. Thatd be pretty epic.