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Love this story, I follow it on Fanfiction.net. Hope this doesn't interfere with your updating time. Good luck and God speed on your hunt for views and comments.
Hey! I remember this from Fanfiction! I really liked this one, too! HAVE MY SUPPORT.
This is one of the better stories on this site. Hope you continue to make more!
"One was a curved sword and the other appeared to be some kind of pack..."
"One was a curved sword..."
"a curved sword..."
Curved Swords
This shit kicks gum and chews ass!
While everything was great, I will say that some of the dialogue did seem a little out of character in regards to Celest and Luna.
994240 have you seen those soldiers from space? they have curved swords.. Curved Swords.
My biggest complaint right from the get go, and that makes it my only complaint really since I haven't read it yet.... No spacing or paragraphs.
That's always annoying.
BLERGH
story advances too fast,and nopony is freaked about the alien
Okay, first off, that little diplomatic bit went by a little fast... but I mean, I'll give you the benefit of the doubt for now... after all, it is a long story, so you probably figured out how to properly move stories forward.
Who the hell is named Jaze.
"A type of crazy belgian person that likes to dabble in the art of homoerotica while getting too excitable."
Thanks, urbandictionary
3124365 really? I looked up my name and got a mad man with a universe in his head
4125081 I got "A person with a volatile temper and very difficult to subdue. The only thing that can stop one is to apply a sweaty gym sock to their mouth and nose. Upon application, they will immediately be pacified".
Accurate I guess. Although I've never experienced it, I'm sure a sweaty gym sock would take me out. I'd better avoid ever fighting with Mick Foley
Other than going heavy on the fanfic liberties(species assumptions, same language w/o translator, and underwhelming calm), which I get makes the story move along, this story is amazing!
Holy cliché, batman!
The beginning seems abrupt and rough.
Not at all impressed so far. Not even a little bit. I will continue though, hopefully it gets better.
3124365 So I guess this is going to be a Big Mac ship then? Cool, I haven't seen a whole lot of those.