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... WHY!?!?
Seriously? Seriously?
531659>>536215 whats wrong don't know how to open it?
540962 I think they (as am i) are confused as to why you put this chapter in Docs rather then just posting it here.
WHY DID YOU LIE!?!?
THE LONGER YOU LIE THE WORSE THEY WILL REACT WHEN YOU TELL THE TRUTH!
this bit is nonsensical
25.media.tumblr.com/d23ee0e2c94798678b4d96e6c5204367/tumblr_mn7j9mtXYG1qbtxe8o1_500.gif Jaze reminds me of Boone.
Sentence fragment.
Also, soldiers hardened from combat DO NOT just go somewhere peaceful and think, 'Oh I'm at peace now.' Post Traumatic Stress Disorder is very real and it's effects last for life. They do not just go away. I am no more impressed than I was before. I will give this ten or so more chapters and if it does not improve, I will Downvote for complete unoriginality.
SHIP! SHIP! *cough* I mean it was OK chapter.