Oh lel. Had to change the cover art, huh?

Good to see this out finally :D

As I commented on the last chapter: NO EMERGENCY PRECAUTIONS!!!! GAH!

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How is that not happy? I'd trade places with one of them if you're worried about them :)

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Big brother is watching.

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Oh I understand I write a lot of tragedy. I've always been fascinated though that what some see as tragedy, another sees as a happy ending... Granted I doubt many would want to be in dash or vinyls place.

Try meeting my hero, secret story of big Mac, Scootaloo the fugitive, or some of the other hidden gems... I do write things with happy endings, they just don't get the kind of recognition a heart breaking tragedy does. :)

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Man, I knew something like that was gonna happen. I was just waiting for it.

And yet, this isn't that bad. I was halfway expecting that someone would bury the box in the garden, or that they'd be sold to someone who'd just leave them in there as a permanent erotic art installation. As it is, they're gonna be found and let out, it'll just take a little longer.

Yeah... whatever insane mind gave you this idea, I don't think it's the good kind of insane.

5390826 You could at least write an Epi-epilogue where someone (maybe Neon Lights or Soarin') finds them.

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True, but it's more fun to leave it up to the reader to imagine... though I am quite tempted to write a fake episode of "My Little Pony: Storage Wars" where someone unboxes their very own Rainbow Dash and Vinyl! Of course, if you guys don't want to leave it up to imagination and I do write it... well, I have a track record of depressing endings. It's up to you.

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You've got to appreciate bondage and edge-play and if you do, the thought of being sealed in a box for months and denied orgasm starts to sound good... and since we can't do it in real life, we do it to ponies.

Besides, you know you're jealous and want to be in there with them.

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But imagine the orgasm you'll have after 3 months of being denied one. It'd probably blow a hole in the side of the box.

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Yes, a permanent display piece is much better than being buried. Replace the lid with a plexi-glass lid, and you'd have two mares in a museum, trapped forever in a state of constant denial, squirming against each other. Unfortunately, people still think that's too dark and tragic, even for me to write! Just give it time, I'm progressively getting more sinister.

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Oh, I read your Fluttershy sex doll story You can do it right now if you want, it is within your power I believe in you!

5391176 I'll cast my vote for "Neon Lights buys them and lets them go." I also have an OC that has *ahem* ties to Vinyl, though I don't know whether or not you'd want to include him.

Unrelated: I wrote a thing about how my headcanon's characters (Vinyl, said OC, Neon, etc.) go to the Twilight's Dollhouse dimension and save the ponies trapped there, and how Vinyl basically goes apeshit from the revelation. Here's a link.

5391176 I...wish that were possible. Still, if I was aware that I was so close and couldn't cum for 3 months I would lose my mind, then promptly screw the other person until one of us passed out. In my head that seems cruel and unusual, maybe I just don't get you bondage people.

If something like this was possible.
Well one can dream.

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Yay, someone who shares the dream ;)

5392098 If I ever find a way to make it a reality ill let you know. ^^

Ooooooh~ very nice. I know some people just don't understand, but orgasm-denial can be very fun. I like complete encasement and sensory deprivation, and this has that and more.

Though, while I don't care for dark or unhappy endings (even though I love stories like Fallout: Equestria), I love this because it has an open-ended ray of hope for Vinyl and Dash. That in mind, my only qualm is that Shine died. Personally I would have had him severely injured or in a coma, that way he's still alive but unable to tell people what happened. Just my opinion, the story is still awesome.

Nice story. Epilogue... I did't expect this, but it was interesting.
I hope for further story of this one. I'm curious what happen next. They ( Dash & Vinyl) have about 8 days until life support system will turn off by the lack of energy... And then what?

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Over three months it went down twenty percent on power, so they have plenty of time left to enjoy and be rescued. As long as the pony who rescues them doesn't decide to plug them into a wall and keep them on display...

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True, he needed something bad to happen since he would have been too responsible to leave them alone. The epilogue was extra since I wanted that small ray of hope ending, so Shine had to be eliminated. :)

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Yes, indeed it went down twenty percent on power. I read that eight precent (8%) remained. That change a lot.

5393639 Yes. I still liked it, but, ya know, like everyone else that reads and comments on a story I have my little things that I would have preferred. Still a great story and the ray of hope was a great idea; perhaps I'd like more grimdark if they had a small one too.

For something like this, if I were Shine, Vinyl, or RD, I would've had a back-up plan. If Shine were incapacitated, another would take his place, or they would leave a note detailing what they were doing to have on Shine and in the house. Something this big doesn't go without all possible bases covered.

Now, I hated the epilogue. I wanna see both of their three-month pent-up orgasms destroy all of Ponyville!!!!

I want to see someone buy it and open it up (possibly Daring Do because of confusion with a lost artifact). Just imagine the parenthetical: RD wakes up with her idol Daring Do, and sexy threesome ensues.

This is my second day I've gone through with the feeling of dread. I need someone, and I don't really care who, to write about how they get out. This dread is making me sick.

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Hmm, well I suppose I can't have you living in dread... I'll see what I can do.

5394018 T'would put me at ease. Please do.

*Shudder* Well.. that was not what I expected... if you are gonna do stuff like this for the love of god can you put up a Dark tag? I expected an Epilogue where, I don't know they are not in potential life threatening danger, don't know what will happen to them, don't know who will buy the box if anyone... Maybe i'm just overthinking this but ... juch

5394018 So you're actually gonna write a happy ending for once? You? Wow, sweet. Could I send you a few suggestions through PM, perhaps?

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Yes, some people want to be trapped in sensory-deprivation orgasm-denial for an unspecified amount of time with their waifu... I suppose that more vanilla people might call that dark.

5394709 Well it was all fun and games but in this ending you took out the security element.. which kinda made me see it in a different light

PLEASE put up a dark tag, darling. Good lord, Spare us from your fantasies. It's all well and good to have them, but what you find arousing might be horrifyingly disturbing to others. This falls in the later category. You simply must warn your audience. PLEASE. Put up a warning, use the spoilers box, do something to give your audience SOME kind of regard or at least acknowledge this may upset some people. You're a talented writer, and thats quite the problem. I wouldn't have kept reading if I knew there was such a dark twist towards the end. Please, think of your audience.

when i saw the title, a different picture came to mind:
https://erictheblue.deviantart.com/art/5a1690e2d34d684da423041aee76c6f2-643059199

This is very hot, but a magic suppression ring that can't turn off if the batteries get too low is a horrible design. I'll overlook that though

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