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Why are they depending on the Internet for life support?
I'm seeing just ONE issue here. No panic button. (Ok, maybe a second issue in that freeing them from the system would not be quick in an emergency).
This is...weird. Even for a bondage story this one takes crazy to a whole new level, what with all the tubes and life support. Also, being on the edge but unable to cum for 3 months? Yeah i'd rather be dead.
This is the kind of thing that a raving lunatic would look at and think, "A little excessive, don't you think?"
Kaidan, you need psychiatric assistance. Like, now.
I guess I'm alone in thinking this is goddamn awesome... oh well :P
Well, this story is definitely..........Different. I'm not saying thats a bad thing. It feels like you may have gone a little bit over board with the descriptions. Describing every little think is lovely, but it kind of feels like your pulling us out of the universe. It's Equestria, there are cloud walking spells. Surely you could have saved yourself some time, and simply wrote "It's magic" to let our imaginations fill the gaps. Unless the extensive explanation was a a part of your turn on for this particular story. I don't know, it just seems a little bit info heavy, you know?
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I actually thought it was the perfect amount of descriptiveness! I loved going along for the ride and putting myself in their place
5466545 No, you're not. Actually This is a bit of a fantasy of mine as well...
I must say, good sir, that this specific chapter of this specific story is very good.
Mistake spotted:
Since you retconned his death into a coma, you should change that bit as well.
I fully enjoyed and endorse this story's use of endotracheal intubation for sexual pleasure and control, and look forward to finding more in the future! What else ya got?*
*The sad part is I had to backtrack this story from art on Derpybooru as the search function on FimFic barely finds subjects related to ponies, much less so features and stories on advanced breathplay.
I wanna TRY this now!
5740778 Oh my gosh, me too!
This was very hot. Discovering one of my favorite bondage artists' work has accompanying stories is a very nice surprise!
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I thought it was a good amount of description, but different strokes (heh) for different folks. Uh oh; I've added myself as a filthy perv. Oh well.