Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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... Shit... that umm... escalated quickly...
I forgot why, but how come Daybreak's always the person who watches the fight and can almost do nothing about it than being the person who should still be able to at least pull a little bit out of his remaining magic. I mean he IS the son of Discord and Celestia, right?. He could've at least inherited some of Celestia's magic. It almost seems like every female character in this story are the ones pulling the punches(I mean come on, even the villain is a strong female) while the guys are the ones being beaten in less than a minute. Mate this needs balance in my opinion. You can't always give the girls the limelight for every fight, it makes guys almost like pushovers.
Still, this a good chapter if I may add, these are the only problems I have with this story.
Okay, it was nice to see Twilight reveal why she was so against Daybreak and RD's romance and fir her to make peace with Daybreak. The light reading relationship between RD and Daybreak was sweet, especially how he and Jackie had fun making RD mad. The fight with Jackie was damn intense as she was a juggernaut who practically survived any attack the girls and Daybreak threw at her while she could screw over with one attack. Hell, I'm surprised that even Twilight couldn't do anything, so Jackie probably was something supernatural like Famine (my bet is that she's War). The ending, however, is nothing short of tragic given that it looked like it was going to be happy with Twilight and Daybreak finally rekindling their friendship before Jackie came and ended the moment. Hope the next chapter comes soon and that a way to save Twilight appears because that ending is really going to set off the waterworks.
7477006 Ohhhooooo my good sir, we have but merely scratched the surface of what is yet to come. Forget not, despite the many ass kicking's he has received, we have yet to see Daybreak...umm how best to word it...Lose his shit? I promise I do not intend for him to remain a punching bag forever. Fret not. The males will have their time to shine.
I mean after all.
He is a demi god right?
Right?
7477130 Hope you've got alot of liquid in ya. That Dark title ain't for nothing.
But I wouldn't go assuming toooooo much just yet. I do love long comments though. Kind of a fun time for me to see peoples thoughts on my chapters. Keep 'em coming.
You seem more like a pathetic sorcerer than ze son of Discord.
It's true he a complete weak pushover that any random person could kill
I highly doubt he ever was more powerful than twilight he is literally the weakest "hero" I've ever read about. This is just getting stupid now