Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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This chapter was great. I really love that Daybreak and Dash's relationship is known to the girls, though Twilight's reaction was heartbreaking. Hope to see the next chapter, especially since Pinkie hints that Sunset and Twilight are attracted to Daybreak.
Missed a formatting note.
Twilight's reactions to both Daybreak keeping check on her and his revealed relationship with Dash, that she obviously still have some feelings for Daybreak that she has buried under her hatred. It's sad really that things didn't work out, but even if she is justified in her hatred, she's frankly being a bit unhealthy about this now. It's been years and he made his intentions relatively clear. That she won't let go is rather worrisome, and something that really isn't Daybreak's fault at this point.
6752601 Aww son of a B****...thought I got 'em all for once
thanks for catching it though
6753262 I like your profile pic by the way
6754946 Why thank you
6754942
No problem, it's my unofficial job on this story. I'm responsible to catch all of those pesky missed notes to self
Soon my children.
Very soon a new chapter shall be upon you.
Await with eager eyes and open minds.
Y'know... when you describe the other girls in their bikini's like that, it kinda makes me interested in a chapter (canon or otherwise) of Rainbow... sharing Daybreak with her friends.
What? I like reading about hot women being screwed silly. I'm a pervert, sue me.