Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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Glad to see this story again. Got to say that the sex scene was hot, adorable, and funny, particularly the pillow talk at the end. Scootaloo having such a bond with RD that she's allowed to watch them, much to Daybreak's surprise, made me laugh. RD finally confessing her love was a beautiful scene,especially when it was followed after she decked that Stormchaser asshole (well worth the wait to see that beatdown). I wonder how the girls would react to the news of RD and Daybreak being a couple and if Twilight will consider befriending Daybreak after the incident. Hope to see more of this story soon.
Are daybreak and dashie going to realize the connection he had with her father.
Not sure how I feel about this chapter. Pretty good, with lots of emotional material, so there's that, but the part about Scootaloo seems . . . unnecessary. Just doesn't feel right in the story. Other than that, this chapter does a good job of hilighting more about Dash and Daybreak's relationship. Onward!
6334930 I had conflicting feelings with the Scoots part as well to be honest...I wanna say I have a good reason for it...but truth be told, I can't remember right now
Time to check my story notes to see if it plays a part later. Or maybe I'm just weird like that...yeah...that makes more sense
6334856 Well he has to meet her dad at sooooome point right?
6337080 Yeah pretty much, I mean that would make most sense.
I've gone back and deleted some of the comments from previous chapters as most of the concerns we're addressed in later chapters. As I realized anyone who read them.would have some parts of the story spoiled.
The only thing I have to say about this chapter is that scotalo shouldn't have been there.
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I kinda wish you hadn't deleted them
I didn't get to read them
And as for Scoots, I admit later on I thought the same. Perhaps the final version shall be different
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