Chaos. Order. Two opposing forces that cannot exist in harmony, yet must exist for balance to be possible. A delicate balance. One that should never be interuppted. Especially by those two forces spawning offspring...Oops, too late...
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Bravo good author, I request more at your earliest convenience
i cant help but think... what happened to the wolves during the whole bedroom scene
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Probably just chillin out there like "Do we have to watch this part too?"
"Shut up Carl, this is the good part!"
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I still don't know if that's a good or bad thing?
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You didn't miss much, two of them were complaints that were immediately solved the next chapter. The jist of the comments were things like rainbows early personality, the size of the text during days and Dash's yelling match, and scotalos involvement in the most recent chapter I read. To be honest all but the last one were a bit pointless cause they were solved later on (in a chapter or two) anyway. Your story has been great so far with the majority of the charcters and plotline but most of what I critiqued would have been solved if I read a chapter after that. I didn't want to give new readers a bad impression when they see a list of complaints about things from the story because this story is far from bad
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in case no one else has said so, it's (imo) a VERY good thing