Wow, okay. It really got me all hot and bothered, but it just isn't my stuff. Great work though, even though I wish for more description of the actors and not only on the action. And the orgasm of the blowjob came too quickly for my tastes. Still you get a thumbs up for getting me horny.
Anything where an original male character fucks everyone's favourite ponies is gonna get downvoted, it's a totally valid response! It's like that other guy said, maledom can be a little offputting for people. Thanks for the kind words, though! (also, hooray for my friend explaining how commenting works to me!)
Up until now, males had been idle playthings for Rarity, foils and idiot buttmonkeys like Spike, but now she was the captive, the little sycophant itching for a hint of praise.
Well, thats acually what you deserve then if you've been thinking this way of Spike until now, Rarity.
"Rarity is my favourite of the Mane Six, so hopefully that shows through a little bit here. She'll end up becoming Dusk's #1 girl and even his accomplice in the chapters to come." … you know, I could have found that out by myself. There was no need to tell us before we started reading. Spoilers is what I hate the most in a story.
Wow, okay. It really got me all hot and bothered, but it just isn't my stuff. Great work though, even though I wish for more description of the actors and not only on the action. And the orgasm of the blowjob came too quickly for my tastes.
Still you get a thumbs up for getting me horny.
And now I want to suck on something. Damn.
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Anything where an original male character fucks everyone's favourite ponies is gonna get downvoted, it's a totally valid response! It's like that other guy said, maledom can be a little offputting for people. Thanks for the kind words, though!
(also, hooray for my friend explaining how commenting works to me!)
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You captured the sluttified Rarity persona perfectly in this. Good work and can't wait to see it finished.
5269658 You my friend are one magnificent bastard!
This... is actually a pretty interesting story...
Huh.
I can't believe I'm reading this... and liking it.
Well, thats acually what you deserve then if you've been thinking this way of Spike until now, Rarity.
Also.... how exactly is he hypnotising them? O.o
I'm just curious as to how he's hypnotizing them, I like the plot, no pun intended, but, yeah.
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"Rarity is my favourite of the Mane Six, so hopefully that shows through a little bit here. She'll end up becoming Dusk's #1 girl and even his accomplice in the chapters to come." … you know, I could have found that out by myself. There was no need to tell us before we started reading. Spoilers is what I hate the most in a story.
I hate and love this story.
hate slavery, love intimate actions
"Who you callin' flat chested huh?! Why you--!"
Me: Is holding her back by her tail* "Easy RD. The author can write what he or she likes about us. Chill.
Damn, how many thongs does this woman wear?