MOAR!!!!

...that is, if that's okay with you.

5153894 lets see how the fans like it first then we will talk

Before I can have an opinion, I want to read how you have the others react to the relationship, besides being a generally bad thing.

R63 I just... I just can't.

I LIKE!

Write more.

Huh, an alternate universe where R63 Twilight exists, and he's somehow okay with Nightmare Moon's return and sudden change? I'd like to see more of this.

5153927
anyone who actually gives Nightmare Moon character and makes her an actual person with feelings and not just hate or wgatever, is fine by me.

5153894 How is it that you, one of my favorite authors, happens to always comment on and like many of the things I do. It's uncanny, I can't count how many times I have gotten excited from seeing that you enjoy some of the same work as me. Just wanted to point that out.

Anyways, great start Distorted Flare. This looks very promising. At first I was slightly reluctant but as I progressed through the chapter I started to enjoy it more and more. I sure hope you continue this!

5154282 We just seem to have similar interests, you and I.

Need More Of This

It's not even that the rest of the 6 found Dusk, it's the fact that Celestia found Dusk doin' it with the evil alter ego of her sister. I hope to see more of this.

Also, 42nd Like!

...wut.....
WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?!

Now he's f*cked

5154294 Well if you two like my stuff then I think you mean terrible taste

Aw shit m8! Second chapter pls.

Dusk: uh....I can explain!

Celestia: I'm sure you can Dusk, especially as to why you are banging my sister's alter ego.

Luna: Tia!

Celestia:

Cadence: I ship them...

More please

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oppsie

run dusk ... just run

This was so beautiful. The way you portrayed their relationship without focusing on sex was perfect. The only complaint I could offer is that you might want to check your grammar. Maybe get a proofreader.

Aside from that, I'd love to see another chapter.

a fairly good read, I thoroughly enjoyed it, it was such a treat to read

I really like how this turning out so far. Keep it up.

I find this interesting.

Very juicy story. Write more.
You grew up as writer as i see.

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5154828
who says she is evil? She just had no one notice her hard work she has done for centuries and felt unloved...

5158897 I meant evil by Celestia's standards. Evilness is relative.

5158931
okay, then if ponies were to look at my life, they would see a evil mass murdering space mercenary, war vetran, someone who has a healthy obsession with ponies, lazy ass, umemployed funny fri-i'm ranting, aren't I?

5158934 Perhaps a little.

5158934
we are in much agreence with you sir..... There is no Evil....After all
We all carry around a drop a madness with us

The end is all:

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Mi queseran!
mucgo mas!
i want more
much more
es bien!
its good!
pleas dont forget the fans adoration for this!

No one expects the Royal Cockblock!
great story cant wait to see where this goes

dusk x nightmare moon i'd prefer dusk x Solaris but this is good to.

Yay! A good NMM ship fic! not enough of this kind.

no not a cliffhanger dude you gotta continue

OHHHHHHHHH SSSSSHHHHHHEEEEEEEEEEEEETTTTTTTTTTTT
SHIT IS GOING TO GO DOWN!!!!! MOOOOOOOOOAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

5165465 I AGREE COMPLETELY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Come on man!! Give me an update on this shiz!!! The waiting's KILLING me!!!

Im typing this from my death bed

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Plz...

Must. Have. Moar!

WHY CANT I FAV 2X SCREW IT 300X LOL love this one moar please

5190522 Thanks I appreciate that

Whelp poor dusk is fked now. And not in the good way.
You just know celly is send nightmare moon to the moon again, or dusk or both. TO THE MOOOOON
more PLEASE.

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Oh please, more of this!

5153927 Oh Fnergling, Cock blocking, Smudgeproof basketing, Prudish, Stick cutting, lamia's. Why would you do something that evil.

it was so beautiful and the moment perfect, why why why!

PS.
(do continue if you would please)