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Make a campaign for making gay marriage to become legal, only for it to end in the lands being destroyed by the lich that was the original quest.
Promising story dude... But uh... Well. How do I say this delicately?
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SLOOOOOOOOOOW DOWWWWWNNNNNNN
I understand that you probably wanted to get the whole "in-equestria-freak-out" out of the way but... Well. The main character was able to get the item that is his defining icon in the land of equestria, teleports to said land, gets evidence to the power of the die, meets some ponies after both parties freak out, casually mention he was a dungeon master back on earth which was clearly a plot device, and then taken to twilight sparkle all in a matter of 1,000 words... Good Lordy loo... That's a lot of exposition.
But, needless to say: I'm intrigued. So I can't wait for the next chapter to see how you continue the story.
good luck!!!!
Roll for defense against Lyra.
4969128 He hasn't been taken to Twilight yet. I may not be very good with story telling, but what happened is that he ran into the princesses (and discord) by chance. I won't say why they were there yet, it's part of the plot.
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Lel.
exposition exposition run it out a s a p~
seriously though that beggining was waaay to fast slow down a bit... or alot . :-P
the thing at the start was a referance to nostalgia critic
if noone got that
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Again, I'm not the best story teller.
All I have to say is thanks to you guys that comment. I'll start looking for some help so as to avoid this problem of moving too fast with the story in the future.
I'm so confuzzled, what are his powers?
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Are you serious?
No, no, everybody drop everything. Are you freaking serious?
HE'S AN ALMIGHTY DUNGEON MASTER, HAVE YOU NOT PLAYED DUNGEONS AND DRAGONS BEFORE?
Dungeon masters write the story and control EVERYTHING that isn't a player. Well, pretty much. They just spawn the enemies and ready the world.
He does what he wants. What he does, however, I'm leaving up to you guys, the audience, to set how he acts.
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Sorry for being ever so much offensive, it's just D&D is a big part of the nerd culture around where I live.
A dungeon master sets the world for the players. The dm's powers are infinite, BUT with the ever so glaring problem that he must be fair to BOTH SIDES. Meaning, he can be a troll, but he can't do horrible things and set up obstacles that people can't pass. That sort of thing. It's why he was able to calm down the entire town instantly, just by asking one pony. Yes, he's over powered as balls, but he can't do ANYTHING unless he gets the entire story.
As such, the rules are that if the DM is pulled out of his realm (which is above all of them) that the entire universe could collapse, killing everyone. This DM originated in our universe, and was pulled into a similar realm, thus voiding the entire universe-ending-thing. However, if someone wants to fight him, I'm going to strip him of his powers. ALL OF THEM. At least until he's done fighting. If I let him keep his powers during the fight..... Well, let's not think of that.....
4969916 I know that part, I meant more of what he does to use them. And no, I've never played D&D before. I'm more of a video game guy.
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Oh lol. Well, how he uses them is to come later. At the moment, he knows nothing of them.
Like I said in my little not, this story is meant to be part of that League of Humans thing. Thing is, he's going to be neutral. He kinda has to. If you all want a spoiler, could give you the reason for this being part of the League of Humans thing.
4970298 oh, ok
Just a little something I thought you might like to know;
'dice' and 'die' are the plural and singular respectively of the object I believe you are reffering to in this context. Dye is only in referrence colour from what I'm aware of.
4981441 THANK YOU! I, being the idiot I am at times, didn't bother to check to make sure I was using the correct word. I'll fix it wjen I have time, which will be later. I'm just lucky to have time to respond roght now.
Seriously, thanks again. That's gonna help to improve things.
Freaking out? Logical and funny! XD
MORE BORDERLANDS 2 REFERENCES!?
I love this already!
The order obsessed dude with the ankh is Dr. Fate. Lol I'm a major nerd.
You know, I suddenly feel the need to bring up the fact that ponies are usually surprised that humans can talk, but they exist in a world where there are a milajuree of sentient species other than their own. They shouldn't be all that suprised.
I'm just waiting until he does some Monkey's Paw shit for wish spells...
I'm confused as fuck
7363797 Wat? Just wat?
Horrible beginning, didn’t understood shit
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You can't English worth a shit.......