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He should probably summon someone soon, maybe not, but he may need help.
dunno...just saying...this is probably just me not knowing what else I would do here...
Nice chapter.
Oh! See if Dox can summon Sarah's Arbok! Having a powerful and beautiful creature such as her who can paralyze with her glare would be very helpful. Think Fluttershy, only instant and can be shrugged off but only after at least several seconds even by higher powers (not even Arceus can resist Glare)
Also, if he could transform (he is still a changeling) into an Arbok, he could fulfill his promise~.
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buy a shield...doesn't have to be the best, just a decent shield...Mmmm.
I know what is happening, IT'S OBVIOUS!!! After Umbra left, the admin that is supossed to check that part was not doing his job and maybe then someone (Maybe a shadow that was bored and have the stupid idea of copy Teridax) want to win a Achivement by conquering this Equestria and defeatin the DM.
Or maybe the evil twin of the DM want to broken his toys because their mommy love Good DM more that Bad DM.
Or... Maybe DM was fooling him and instead in playing in both sides.
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Now, leaving the jokes aside, good work. It's obvious that Celestia is becoming even more crazy.
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OH GOD! WHAT IS UP WITH THE SUDDEN SPAWNING OF FREAKING TELEPATHS?! You got close with the assumptions. Honestly, I'm making it a deadly shadow. I won't explain any more than that. I will say this, though. I have nothing against the admins. This is why I'm not making the bad guy an admin. I don't want to get in trouble, yes, but I it's not about that. I honestly like the admins, they're nice people. I'll mention this in the next chapter.
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For that, he'd have to find a freaking shield first. I mean, seriously, what pony makes a shield that large? And the worse fact is that there's no way for him to buy something from the vendors. The closest vendors that sell that kind of things are in Canterlot and Manehatten.... Both those cities hate Dox........ Kind of a spoiler, but it's coming up REALLY freaking soon.
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energy shield, borderlands.
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Shh.....
5783610 Really? It was just a joke after I suddenly remember how Umbra become a Admin... Too bad DM cannot cry to Fausticorn
But really, Umbra need to say something to the one that is working around for not taking the job seriously
P.S: What if he try to put glasses? It worked in Clark Kent
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No seriously, you came close.
EMPHASIS ON CLOSE. The bad guy is NOT an admin. I refuse to make it an admin. Hell, if I wanted to, I could find problems with the admins and use a current one. I'm not though. Why? I like the admins. I refuse to hate on them only because I feel like they are good people.
So for the last time, the bad guy is NOT and admin. The bad guy will be explained in the next chapter, so if you will all please wait, I can tell you what it is. Please don't go talking to admins like Jsyrin saying that there's an admin being evil and then pointing at me. I'm not that type of guy, and I won't ever be that type of guy. Please, just wait for me to explain it.
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I was waiting for that!
THANK YOU!
¬w¬ I think I know who the dragon is but just to warn you he won't stay dead.
You used bold on almost the entire chapter. XD Whoops, eh?^_^
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Whoops. I'll fix it when I'm able.
I just woke up, and I gotta leave, so when I get back.
5784904 Alright.^^