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Wow, this chapter was awesome. I really liked how the Nord guy kicked ass and Dox's reactions to Athena and the Changelings' upgrades. Still, I wonder how the Die Liech managed to crossover. Also, what happened to Silent, Swift, and the rapist. I hope the next chapter in Avarice or your story deals with those bastards.
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Trust me, it'll be a while before Dox gets his revenge.
But if you want a spoiler:
The Die Leucht douche bags are still a problem. Dox will find out how they're getting in later, but for now, know that they're super dangerous now that they have Dox's blood mixed into different potions.
You killed the original sexy changeling duo, and then turned around and gave them brand new bodies from Hyperion. I want to act angry and indignant, but I have a feeling you have a plan for them, right?
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Honestly, I expected the anger.
I had planned for them to get killed, I will not lie. Those plans evolved when I involved GameJunkie, and then Architect. Like I said in the author's note, they're great authors. They're good at what they do, and they've helped me a lot with what I've been creating here.
So, if you see those sisters become amazingly badass soon, blame GameJunkie and Architect. I'll have written it, but it'll be due to them and what they've done to forward and expand my plans for the story (which were small to begin with).
5922836 I figured GJ had something to do with it. He is a good author. It also helps that I read something by him before I found out how good Displaced stories can get. So, yeah, dude writes good. I haven't really had a desire to read stuff by Architect beside his Displaced story, which isn't really my cup of tea, but it is a very well written story, and I do enjoy seeing how his characters interact with other stories, which is a good thing.
... At least his arm isn't tentacles. That would take the "Sex machine" thing too far, I think. What with his robo-fuck buddies/ girlfriends, and all...
giggety!
Dox you lucky git XD
5922701 Prepare for disappointment. Those three are VERY important, but they're more mid-story, the rapist possibly towards endgame, for reasons.
Besides, still have a couple of other antagonists to get revenge on first!
5924164 I'm excited to know which of the two antagonists will fall, but K can't wait until you or DJ A String publishes the chapter.
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Trust me, it won't happen until we're both ready for that.
Hell, I don't plan for Dox to go charging to find the Die Leucht's hideouts until he's gotten better and acquired a few new powers.
Trust me, one of the powers is going to be EXTREMELY helpful.
Oh, and note that right now, Dox's rage mode involves Gamma Dragon mutations. Those mutations that he gets when in Rage mode are induced by magic, however, so they're countered by Orichalcum. Now, if it was Hyper Bolic (The mutated elf from a while ago) he wouldn't have had those problems. Why? Hyper Bolic's mutations are actual mutations, not magical manifestations of them brought on by rage.
Oh, and lets also note that Dox does actually have multiple rage modes. The most terrifying one being when he harnesses the rage, instead of giving into the rage. Trust me, it's scary shit, and you're gonna see it in a future chapter, as well as different rage modes. Some involve transformations, some are just power surges, but most are uncontrollable. Just take note of that.
I want to see a picure of when he first saw the girls.
The bombinomicon!
So you feed the cannon to get ammo. God eater much?
What happened to Dox's kids?
All I can think about this entire fix is-