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Ah. Posted before I even finished proofreading, eh? Ah well. Good chapter, regardless.:D
well that was fun
Oh, and you didn't link to the fic you crossed over with.
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There must be something wrong with me. I've did this with the last fic, too.
Fixing it now.
5798843 lol Thanks.^^
And do you have the time to continue discussing, by the way?^^
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Nope.
5798888 Darn. Well, maybe later. But, till we next talk, hope your day goes well.:D
By the way, since you posted this before I finished proofreading, I noticed a major mistake at the end there that you missed.
You had Dox say that he'd look out for Alex's token... but he doesn't know what Alex's token is, nor does he know if he even has one to begin with or even knows HOW TO MAKE a token. He just automatically assumed Alex had one without any way of knowing if he did or not. Heck, his own words about Dox's dice kinda hint at the fact that his was the first token he ever encountered, so he likely doesn't even have one yet.
Well...Avarice CAN fix that missing arm. It'll involve injecting the shoulder area with direct viral mutagen, and the arm might be all...tentacle-like, with spikes or blades. With intention though, they could twist into an arm-like shape and be used as an arm, with fingers and all.
Just an option....
Oh yeah, and also, since I've revealed that Vagabond is actually a contractually bound Elder God, and Dox put it's sleeve in his mouth so long ago, think he might get a random effect from it?
just so I don't miss understand who is the void dragon?.
Hey, lookie here! A bunch of comments!
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That wasn't a mistake, that was on purpose. It's meant to be a joke.
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He got a magic satchel.... Permanently. Didn't you notice that he's not carrying around the freaking portal matrix?
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The void dragon was just a void dragon. His second name was 'Expendable Bad Guy Number 4007'.
5799843 Ahhhh..... ^_^ Alright then.
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Yeah, I mean. Dox knows what's there. He just faced some of it, he was kinda in a hurry to get the hell out of there.
We've all been like that at some point, just in a hurry and then, OOPS, forgot your freaking keys or something.
5799859 True enough.^_^ And he DID just lose an arm. Kinda stressful circumstance, that. XD
5799843 Oh, okay, that makes sense actually. Also; I thought Leere's second name was Nameless Dragon Number 1?
So I take it that's a no on the whip-like arm tentacles?
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Nah, that's his third name.
His forth name is 'Total B%$#@ Number 2601'.
When the DM talks isn't it all italic? (Notice the rest in this chapter is the same,also seems Mata Nui is the same tho I don't know how he is written)
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Sorry, some things just didn't transfer properly.
Working of fixing it later.
Edit: Fixed it.
The fact that I could follow their conversations when I haven't seen hide nor hair of Bionicles since early elementary... Ah nostalgia, how I love you...
umm... it feels like I missed a chapter...
I can only think of one good reason to cut off a TECHNOMANCER'S arm. To replace it with a mechanical one... or maybe a bio-mechanical one? Nah thats pushin it a tad to far I think.
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Mechanical for sure.