You know the drill. Costumed dude comes to Equestria, gets powers blah blah blah. However, what's different about this guy is that he came here of his own free will. And he's dressed as Alucard. And he ha a plan. Will he win? Read and find
>The Merchant is human We already know about Merchant being some sort of eldritch abomination. >Everyone happily lived in Equestria, but everything changed when Harmony choked us out TOTALLY ORIGINAL!
>landed in Ponyville >3000 years before the show When Ponyville don't even existed. Or you really think Granny Smith Apple is 3000 years old? >virgins don't turn into vampire In Hellsing virgins TURN into vampires. I'm pretty sure this just a mistake of editing. >Shows their loss of virginity through bite Yeah, like we don't knew author is virgin, but thank you for this clarifying. >Difference in taste of blood of virgin and not-virgin, Celestia rapes her father, Celestia is evil and abusive sister WHY I'M READING THIS AUTISM!? WHAT I DID WRONG IN MY LIFE!?
Basicly fanfic was writen by autistic virgin boy, who watches anime, because SUGOI KAWAII WEEABO and fanservice. So he just throws every "cool" thing he have ever seen into big pile and puts it on display with some good gallon of autism sauce. Never be like this guy, seriously.
My plan was simple, get military training, go find the Prime Equestria, and destroy it. That way, I will not only destroy it, but I will destroy Every. Single. Last. Equestria. Ever. Created. That includes the fanfic worlds, the alternate worlds, all of it.
Boy is he going to be disappointed when he finds out he's not in the prime universe, but just another fanfic, and a really shitty one at that.
good god guys give the kid a break this story just needs some touching up and a few fix and it should be good. lets just kick back and wait an see how it goes. so far its good, but some fixes could be made
So. He wants to destroy Equestria, and since he's one of the most boringly OP creatures in all of anime he shouldn't have much of a problem with that.
... and he just spent 3000 years sitting in a cave. Like some kind of idiot.
Also, are we supposed to feel any sympathy with this smug, murdering, idiotic bastard? Why? For what reason? He's only shown he should be destroyed asap for the good of all creation.
4988035 Don't care still gonna finish it. Also, I don't want you to feel sympathy, I am merely writing this because I want to. Also, because, there are hardly any good alucard based fanifics on this website. That and he was waiting because, he has a plan, a plan to destroy every. single. one. of the main cast, one by one. But first, he had to wait until Twilight became an Alicorn, cause then it will be all the sweeter.
Also to everyone, sorry if there are mistakes, I am a novice at writing, plus, I don't watch MLP, so most of my info is going to be made up, or from fanifics I've read. If you don't like it don't read it, I don't care. Also, sorry about the virgin mistake, I must not of proof read it, what I meant was, that to make sure virgins don't turn into vampires, he doesn't inject them with his blood, he just feeds from them.
Also, I will be finishing this story. I did not make it to get likes or get featured or anything like that. I made it for two reason. One, to kill off the main cast of characters in MLP. And two, because there is not one good Alucard fanfic on this site. Also, he knows its not Prime Equestria, he just wants it dead!
Implying your's is good. I can remember at least two good fics about Alucard. One is from LoHAV, there guy dressed as Alucard comes to Equestria of Lunaverse. And other, there Fluttershy goes to Hellsing Abridged universe. We don't deserve to suffer from your creation, just because you cannot into Google.
4988930 First off, I would agree with you that this is unoriginal and just the author putting abunch of other fics together, if he had tried to pass it off as original. He completely acknowledged that he was using information from other fics. He even referenced to the scholar in the Merchants sob-story.
Second, the fact that he has included the multiverse theory in the story means he can be as OOC as he wants and still be correct because the multiverse.
Third, if you read about Umbra Shadow walker, you would know the merchant is a sys admin and can turn human if he wants and since Umbra and a few other Admins started out human means his backstory could be completely valid.
Fourth, give him a fucking break! Freedom of fucking speech you prick. And considering I have a rather personal history with autism I very much take offence to you using it as an insult you asshole.
Fifth, whether he/she decided to throw away what many see as something sacred is his/her decision. So stop it.
Sixth, I would simply like to reiterate my dislike for you for being an undesirable, offensive, dick who feels it's okay to discourage someone from doing something they are doing for fun and a chance to improve on their skills so to put it to you generically... Fuck You!
Celestia always seemed a bit cold and calculating and manipulative but I never saw what happened to her father coming... is that going to tie into why luna became nightmare moon?or does celestia get banished instead?
"APPARENTLY YOUR HEALTH PLAN IS GREAT" should be "APPARENTLY, IT'S GREAT!" If you are quoting Hellsing Abridged directly, otherwise it's kind of a badly timed joke.
there are almost no words for what I have read here.... But i died laughing so many times....
Name of story instance like fav and follow and of course
>The Merchant is human
We already know about Merchant being some sort of eldritch abomination.
>Everyone happily lived in Equestria, but everything changed when Harmony choked us out
TOTALLY ORIGINAL!
Basicly entire fic is HOOR DURR FUCK THE POLICE and quite unoriginal, just a copy-paste of stories author read on this site.
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>landed in Ponyville
>3000 years before the show
When Ponyville don't even existed. Or you really think Granny Smith Apple is 3000 years old?
>virgins don't turn into vampire
In Hellsing virgins TURN into vampires. I'm pretty sure this just a mistake of editing.
>Shows their loss of virginity through bite
Yeah, like we don't knew author is virgin, but thank you for this clarifying.
>Difference in taste of blood of virgin and not-virgin, Celestia rapes her father, Celestia is evil and abusive sister
WHY I'M READING THIS AUTISM!? WHAT I DID WRONG IN MY LIFE!?
Basicly fanfic was writen by autistic virgin boy, who watches anime, because SUGOI KAWAII WEEABO and fanservice.
So he just throws every "cool" thing he have ever seen into big pile and puts it on display with some good gallon of autism sauce.
Never be like this guy, seriously.
Watch out. We got a butthurt virgin over here.
Boy is he going to be disappointed when he finds out he's not in the prime universe, but just another fanfic, and a really shitty one at that.
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He may start suspect something, if he ever gonna see Justice League: Crisis on Two Earths.
Owlman had same problem.
good god guys give the kid a break this story just needs some touching up and a few fix and it should be good. lets just kick back and wait an see how it goes. so far its good, but some fixes could be made
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No, it isn't. This story gonna be good, if he break it down, learn how to write at least a little and start this fic from a new list.
4987300 true there
This is way too edgy for me.
So. He wants to destroy Equestria, and since he's one of the most boringly OP creatures in all of anime he shouldn't have much of a problem with that.
... and he just spent 3000 years sitting in a cave. Like some kind of idiot.
Also, are we supposed to feel any sympathy with this smug, murdering, idiotic bastard? Why? For what reason? He's only shown he should be destroyed asap for the good of all creation.
4988035 Don't care still gonna finish it. Also, I don't want you to feel sympathy, I am merely writing this because I want to. Also, because, there are hardly any good alucard based fanifics on this website. That and he was waiting because, he has a plan, a plan to destroy every. single. one. of the main cast, one by one. But first, he had to wait until Twilight became an Alicorn, cause then it will be all the sweeter.
4986830 Dude if you don't like it don't read it.
Also to everyone, sorry if there are mistakes, I am a novice at writing, plus, I don't watch MLP, so most of my info is going to be made up, or from fanifics I've read. If you don't like it don't read it, I don't care. Also, sorry about the virgin mistake, I must not of proof read it, what I meant was, that to make sure virgins don't turn into vampires, he doesn't inject them with his blood, he just feeds from them.
Also, I will be finishing this story. I did not make it to get likes or get featured or anything like that. I made it for two reason. One, to kill off the main cast of characters in MLP. And two, because there is not one good Alucard fanfic on this site. Also, he knows its not Prime Equestria, he just wants it dead!
4986830 that pic......... I don't even!
pinked approves!
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Implying your's is good.
I can remember at least two good fics about Alucard.
One is from LoHAV, there guy dressed as Alucard comes to Equestria of Lunaverse.
And other, there Fluttershy goes to Hellsing Abridged universe.
We don't deserve to suffer from your creation, just because you cannot into Google.
i like this. it just so fucking funny. this story is to be random just to be random.
awsome chapters you are doing a amazing job i can't wait to see more of your great chapters
4988930 Which stories would those be?!?!?!?!?! Also could you link them?
4988930 First off, I would agree with you that this is unoriginal and just the author putting abunch of other fics together, if he had tried to pass it off as original. He completely acknowledged that he was using information from other fics. He even referenced to the scholar in the Merchants sob-story.
Second, the fact that he has included the multiverse theory in the story means he can be as OOC as he wants and still be correct because the multiverse.
Third, if you read about Umbra Shadow walker, you would know the merchant is a sys admin and can turn human if he wants and since Umbra and a few other Admins started out human means his backstory could be completely valid.
Fourth, give him a fucking break! Freedom of fucking speech you prick. And considering I have a rather personal history with autism I very much take offence to you using it as an insult you asshole.
Fifth, whether he/she decided to throw away what many see as something sacred is his/her decision. So stop it.
Sixth, I would simply like to reiterate my dislike for you for being an undesirable, offensive, dick who feels it's okay to discourage someone from doing something they are doing for fun and a chance to improve on their skills so to put it to you generically... Fuck You!
Celestia always seemed a bit cold and calculating and manipulative but I never saw what happened to her father coming... is that going to tie into why luna became nightmare moon?or does celestia get banished instead?
After having read this I'm getting an abridged version vibe... And I couldn't be happier for it XD
Oh wow....that was some messed up shiznit Tia.
CrimsonFucker, you just gave up an opportunity to turn Luna into a vampire... WTF
"APPARENTLY YOUR HEALTH PLAN IS GREAT" should be "APPARENTLY, IT'S GREAT!" If you are quoting Hellsing Abridged directly, otherwise it's kind of a badly timed joke.
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I don't like anthro,
But This is Alucard
so It'll be worth it.
and if it isn't!
I'll defenestrate my fucking cat out da window!