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Are you talking about Corporal and Punishment? Yeah I noticed that last chapter. Made me laugh my arse off
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Mmmnope.
4952310 Oh
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It's really simple if you're looking for it, and will only get more obvious as time passes.
4952325 Eh. I'm fucking hungry so I'm gonna go eat some food.
4952334 hey dont swear... this is a kids show after all
4950427 Oh no, another "he does not like my story. Obvious HATER" author.
4952380
I only really get mad when those that deconstruct my stories fail to add any constructive criticism.
...
That being said, I am showing remarkable restraint right now by not excising your comments from existence.
4952367 I apologise for my foul language
4952389 A narcissist too.
4952465 Dude if you think your sorry attempt at trolling is funny then don't. If you want to hate make it constructive hate with reasons for the hate.
Yeah... give Abby a few days if you keep up at this rate and she'll find em, heh.
4952390 :) dont want these kids tasting soap in thier mouth for weeks so thank you :3
4952686 Good point
4952723 Me? No I am merely stating the obvious.
4952380 Honestly dude you ARE being an asshole if you don't like the story either leave and not say anything, or tell the author why you do not like it. Just calling it shit off because you do not like the type of story then it seems like it is more your problem than it is the authors. This story is just as unrelated to the Ponyverse as any other HiE or crossover story is its all about how they author connects the story to the Ponyverse that make them connected... Oh and this is an offshoot of a different story read that before reading any story with "a new world" in the title and it has to do with Pokemon... It explains the background of the universe that is being flushed out by well... I can think of 5 people so far that doing offshoots off the main story.
So as a recap STOP being an ass because in the end when reading a story you are along for the ride in the universe of the authors making.... and no one really cares about your opinion at the end of the day.
Sincerely
Enigma of Souls
I don't mean to sound mean, but this is starting to bug me.
It's RIOLU. RI-O-LU
You keep spelling it RI-LOU. This is wrong in every language I could find.
Please stop that. I really like you as an author, but this typo is just silly.
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Have I mentioned it's been a while since I last actually played those games?
Fixing!
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Where's that 'round of applause' .gif when you need it?
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Yeah, hoping that the three and Iron Will can meet number four before Abby and her crew show up at least.
...Though if you feel like they should show up sooner, I'm sure we can work something out...
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Hmmm, at the moment Abby and Co are just starting off on small things. Perhaps they can stay on the DL until you've got your fourth guy? I don't want to rush your or anything, heh
Not all that great of a story so far, but at least it's a fun read.
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Sounds okay. Maybe you can have them run into Corporal or Punishment or any member of the casino staff who witnessed the Abra breaking in the meantime?
I mean, if they're going to be investigating pokecrime, that sounds like a good one to start with...
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Compliments make the world go round. As do mustaches.
4953172 Unfortunately, not all comments make the world go around, but you appear satisfied with mine at least. AND DAMN RIGHT THE MOUSTACHE MAKE THE WORLD GO AROUND! Too bad it just looks weird on me, while the mighty beard does not...
4950388 ohhhhh hate mail, is he famous now?
4952465 Shouldn't you be playing on 4chan or something, Adults are actually trying to have fun here.
4953195 HAIL THE BEARD, MOUSTACHE COMBO
4954283 maybe?
Naming? Well let's see here. Subject Sixteen, Lucy... someone's been playing Assassins Creed.
Still, this is a pretty good story so far, have a fav and an upvote and I can't wait to read more.
P.S. As author of 'A Brave New World' I welcome you to the New World family.
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Mmmnope!
What's interesting is another story is doing something similar. And nobody's spotted it or commented on it yet.
4955075 just a pinkamina diane pie quote.
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I seriously need that applause.gif
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I'm not sure where I heard it from, but the more hate mail you get, the more reason you have to ignore it.
After all, just because I can't please everyone, and some people are going to be arrogantly loud about it, that just means that I must be pleasing someone, and they're going to be silently approving it.
That's all I need, really.
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...Is that sarcastic or not? I can't tell, the internet makes it harder than it should be...
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Gotta agree there. It's the internet after all, theres always going to be someone who doesn't like whatever. Keep up the good work!
4954316 Is it not the opposite? Regardless I have never actually been on 4chan.
4955104 I'm wondering if there'll be a Subject 617...
A rotom?
Ah Fourth gen, when things started to go really crazy...
4957031 Well, if it isn't for adults, than I'm pretty sure I can point out a petty brat. Seriously, bugger off. For god's sake man, you haven't favorited a single crossover in your entire 300 plus bookshelf. Seeing as you obviously don't like them, what the hell are you here for?! To tell everyone that their opinions are wrong, and that this doesn't belong? If I wanted to hear that I'd go listen to some Westboro Baptists.
I'd say more about your original comment, but I believe I was beat to it by this fine fellow:
Naming trick, would that be a reference to the fact that you've incorporated pokemon moves into each chapter title?