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Fucking hell. My feels have been crushed, shredded and disintegrated. Is this what you wanted?! Well good work. xD
......i dont know how to feel about this.....
Damn it, man, let me hate this guy in peace.
Oh, I hope Tolerence tries something against Luke with his magic, in fact, let me know when he does so I can write it
DAMN MAN! Seriously, this chapter, WOW!
Oh and that Lucario? He's lucky Lucy didn't more than him stopped from hurting Vincent, THAT could have been... messy
So, Nurem was like that because of a psychic induced mental damage? VERY believable! LIked how Nurem found away to give his last peace of humanity a way to sabotage all that had happened.
Also, that female Lucario, she Vincent's mother?
So he give himself a trap, that is incredible! I love complex characters, and the doctor is one alright, but I wonder what would be of him, with the world in chaos, I doubt his confections will change anything.
So...these three ponies are gonna cause Luke's family, a group of (excuse my choice of words) rather unstable lab experiments, who have gone through insane amounts of trauma, and are no doubt a little unstable mentally, trouble?
(beat)
Dead ponies walking.
5010819 DUN DUN DUUUUUUUUUUUUNNN
5010487 Hate his alter ego dr. nurem not the man inside.
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That was the idea. Mission accomplished.
5010487
NEVAR! But seriously, nobody just becomes a dick. Something had to have happened.
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Heheheh. I did have something planned, but I do enjoy writing with you. Beam me a link!
5010819
Gueeeeeess again.
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Yeah, building a complex character is one part time, one part effort, three parts leaving yourself holes to fill in.
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Nah. None of them know any one-hit KO moves.
5012043 I wasn't talking of Lucy, I was speaking of the other one
5012080
Oh. Well that one is familial love. Not intending to take that relationship further than that, though they will be a good sounding board for Lucy in the chapters to come.
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That was Maylene, the Fighting-type gym leader in Diamond, Pearl and Platinum (and her Lucario).
Oh wow, I never expected Nurem to become a sympathetic character. I actually hope that he was brought over and cured. It would be both the worst punishment and the greatest blessing for him.
5012007 The "man inside" is dead. He's no more.
Welp my eyes have already told me my thoughts on this chapter. Fucking depressing that's what. Good job mate.
This chapter broke my mind. Lucy in love with Vince, and Nurem only evil due to an accident?!
MY MIND!
And thus begins Rupert's last goodbye...