Fredrick falls into Equestria and he is allowed to stay in the castle for his troubles. There, he meets and quickly befriends Princess Luna, and their quickly evolving relationship allows them to explore the 'benefits' of being close, best friends.
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I really liked Luna and Frederick's panic about waking up in a sexed-up bed and avoid explaining the situation to Twilight. I also enjoyed Stella's character. Hope to see more of her.
Glad to see this updated!
Lavender unicorn syndrome confirmed.
6014236 I agree with you about Stella, who doesn't love a feisty Scottish girl?
Aaaaah, the oh so lovley day after intense sex smell, That stench is gonna be in the library walls for Days.
6014262 Ah, bugger off, it's the relative color, nobody gives a shite.
jk, don't kill me.
Unbeknownst to them be beknownst to us!
Yes, "best" friends, we can keep up this charade a little longer but it is hard to call a cat a duck when it is really a cat.
Dried cum under panties, that can't be too comfortable. They probably need a shower, hope there isn't loads of semen in her hair either. Meeting Twilight without a shower at first would be all sorts of awkward.
I think Luna needs the shower more, she has a coat fluids can get caked in. She probably smells like the bedroom where as Fred will be a little cleaner.
I KNEW IT! I FUCKING KNEW IT!
And maybe a slight bow legged walk as well, to ease the stress on her abused lady parts.
I like Stella and her cunt talk. So much cunt left and right.
Hmm... reminds me of something fbcdn-sphotos-a-a.akamaihd.net/hphotos-ak-xaf1/v/t1.0-9/19966_291291944885_7939164_n.jpg?oh=2a43e057870c7322ddfec86bf9e635d5&oe=55AC6FF0&__gda__=1437866689_9a941547f5ffe19031308ccab6019a16
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Well done chapter.
Well, why didn't you introduce Stella way back when? She is fun, and I am willing to bet, she would wind up the state appointed third wheel on their date. I mean seriously, knows both parties, is a member of the guard, can obviously take a joke or two, and is a bat pony.
6014353 Mainly because I wanted to focus firstly on the Lu's and Fred's relationship first, then Blueblood's intervention, and now that things are moving on, she's gonna play a better role, especially since I'm filling in the gaps from before the story began.
We shall be seeing a lot more of this girl
Poor innocent twilight. Never let it go , never let to go.
6014363 Fair enough. Still, you could of just had her say hey to Fred during one of the office trips, and just added a couple lines about her being his friend, and move on. She could of been busy dealing with new idiots off screen while the story happens for the most part. Then she could be mad at Fred for not talking with her beyond just a hey in passing. She is female, she has the right to be mad when she wants to be, and mercy upon us poor males for receiving the fairer sexes ire.
6014399 Oh I most certainly could have, that's the problem with having a great idea WAY after the story's implementation
6014406 Ah, then never mind me. Hate when that happens.
6014363 I will say, I do love Stella's character so far. I'm hoping we see a lot more of her in the future.
I also hope that she does NOT become part of a love triangle here. Frederik's comments about dat ass worry me...
6014432 Ehh that was more for imagery and humor rather than indicative of something more. So I would not worry too much about that
cue training montage
6014406 Yes you are back necromancy really does work.
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NOW TO CONQUER THE WORLD!!!!
The existence of the character Stella feels unnecessary, out of place and forced.
6014605 She's only just been introduced. Give it time, I'm sure the author has plans for her to be an actual part of the story.
6014605 Unfortunate that you feel that way but with a better method in getting where we need to be (which I thought of on the fly when loosely planning onward), her sudden introduction may no doubt be jarring. I'll accept the criticism for that for a somewhat smoother experience later on
I like her! Reminds me of my drill sergeant back in basics . Rip your throat out one moment, your best friend the next ! ^_^
Keep em coming !
Mane Medic
I kinda wanna see Fred and Luna do some kinky bondage thing
I am hopping Fredrick and Luna can get back to there weekend before to long Luna really needs to just relax and un wind.
a supper good chapter lets hope Fredrick gets approval to date Luna before she starts showing
Harts Fire
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Oh we will, eh? He said knowingly.
On a more serious note I like Stella, to the point I was actually worried for a moment that she was one of the casualties of the accident. Nice to see the cast growing a bit.
I'm also glad you don't have plans to hook her up with Fred, never been a fan of 'harem' stories myself. Mind you I wouldn't mind seeing her having some fun of her own with another character... should the plot allow.
I'm getting a bad vibe from this chapter...
I feel like, Stella and Fred will start spending a bit more time together because she's helping him trying to woo the princess, then Luna will get the wrong idea.
I can totally see Luna overreacting and doing something drastic to Fred and/or Stella.
6014412 Too often, mate -_-
I like Stella. When is she gonna ride the monkey?
aaaaand I have a new favorite character in all of this!
STELLA FTW!!
I'm pretty sure the bedsheet was pregnant with both of their love childs before Luna killed it with fire.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
I'm reading so many Luna stories that some of the plot line gets mixed up, haha, especially in the last chapter
6015663 i know right XD
6014262
HL3 confirmed
6014262
Illuminati Confirmed
6017514 Thank you at least some one agrees
awesome as always
stayclassy
6021528 Probably because we all know it will lol
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I concur gud sers.
6014605
It's a shame you find it this way, but I think that maybe you should state this kind of thing as your opinion instead of phrasing it like a fact, especially since I think you'll find most of us disagree.
6028628 What? You can not tell me that that was a proper character introduction. It was:" BOOM! She's here!" and already discovers something "noone was supposed to find out" by simply guessing.
6029825 I'm not a firm believer of the fact that every character needs a red-carpet introduction. By that logic, Blueblood just 'kinda showed up,' and never had any proper introduction, and as such, is forced.
This tastes noice may I have another, but alittle bit more cheese this time.
But seriously I love this story.
This should be "peek."
*quivers editorially*
Interesting
I just power stomped this, I DEMAND MOAR XD i really enjoy this, probably more then i should. Between freds/lunas banter and freds/stellas ive gotten some good laughs. Still want to know what this prabk war will turn into. Keep up the goodwork mate
Just a bit of a small critique, and most won't agree, but I find the word "boob" to be a bit lacking when it comes to intimate terms.
The words "bosom" or "breast" seem a bit more appropriate in my eyes anyway during times of heavy intimacy
6108856 Yeah it's a bit more 'informal,' I'll agree, but I personally like using all of them. Of course, the scene ultimately commands the words being used. The type of sexual encounters being had are not really 'romanticized,' so I usually tend to prefer more informal and often 'in your face' words for such carnal encounters.